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Never Ending

What is with this fading music?

It’s not masquerading music.

This annoying tune is stuck inside,

it’s a never changing music.

A repetitive four beat rhythm,

it’s a never aging music.

Over and over it plays,

this quiet drum beating music.

The beat is always internal,

with its eighth note knocking music.

A person could go insane,

from this irritating music.

The drums are coming for me,

in this never ending music.

Here is the REWRITE 

Never Ending

What is with this invading music?

Certainly not masquerading music.

This bothersome jingle is wedged inside,

It’s a never varying music.

A repetitive four beat rhythm,

for a never cascading music.

Over and over it plays,

this loud drum beating music.

The beat always internal,

with eighth note knocking music.

A person could go insane,

from an infuriating music.

The drums are coming for me,

in my never ending music.

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