Going too far!

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-OMG OMG I'm so fucking sorry! Please don't be mad at me!!!! I'm sorry I didn't update, but I was having some family issues, long story short my uncle had a heart attack and he was in the hospital for a while, but he's okay now! No worries! Okay this was requested by @ill_find_something! Thanks for the request!

(Zayn's POV)

Everyone has been on me about my smoking since during practice while I was singing i had a cough attack. Harry said that he would kiss me until my urge went away, Niall said that he would eat with me, Liam said that we could go and do something to get my mind off it and Louis said that if he catches me smoking, I would get a spanking.

*flash back*

"Im serious Zayn, I will spank you!" Louis said

"Why?" I ask

"Really, you're asking me why? Remember when you spanked the boys for smoking? How angry you were because it could kill them? Well thats how we feel! I just love you too much to see you die because of these cancer sticks! Ok?" He asked while pulling me into a hug

"Okay Lou." I agreed

*Flashback over*

I put out my 2nd cigarette, and went inside and into the shower.

(Louis's POV)

I went shopping for a plant today. Why? I have no idea.

I get out of my car and take out the plant and go outside.

I think it looks really- what is that smell? Smoke?!?!

Zayn.

"ZAYN MALIK!" I yell once inside

"I'm in the shower, I'll be right out!" He yells from the bathroom.

From my experience a spanking with a wet bum hurts 10 times worse so instead of waiting I walked right Into the bathroom.

"Lou what the heck?!" Zayn says confused

"You smoked! After what I told you you still fippin smoked!!!" I yelled at a quite scared Zayn.

"Louis look I'm-" Zayn started

"I don't wanna hear it Zayn! Turn around hands on the wall!" I commanded

"Lou, I'm all wet!" He exclaimed

"That's the point! Now do it!" I said

He did as told and I turned off the water.

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "OW!" SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ow!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ah!" SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ow!" SMACK SMACK "I'm sorry!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK "Please Lou!!" SMACK SMACK "Ow!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "ill never smoke again!" SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "PLEASE LOU!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK!!

"Ah! Ow!" He yells and then falls on the floor

The spanking lasted about 5 min.

"Oh my gosh! Zayn! Are you okay?!" I ask concerned

He doesn't answer me, he just continues to sob on the floor with a dark red bum. I went to far.

I pick him up, dry him and put him on the bed and I kiss him lots of times on his face trying to calm him down.

"Zayn?" I ask

He sniffs and looks at me.

"I'm sorry L-Lou." He says eyes watery

"Oh baby, it's okay, I forgive you. I'm sorry too baby." I confess

"F-For what?" He asks confused

"I went way too far this time." I say while looking at his bruised bum.

"It's okay." He says

"No it's not okay! Look at you you are on too much pain! Zayn I want you to spank me." I say

"What?! No!" He says

"Yes, you have to! Please I deserve it! I spanked you for 5 min, so you spank me for 10." I say

"Are you sure?" Zayn asked

"Yes I'm sure!" I quickly say

"Okay." He sighs and I get over his lap with my trousers off.

He sets a timer for 10 min and then he begins.

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ow!!!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "im so sorry zayn!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACKOw!!!" SMACK SMACK "Ow!!!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ow!!!"K SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ow!!!" SMACK SMACK!! "Ow!!!"

He takes down my boxers much to my disliking.

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "Ow!!!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "I'm sorry Zayn!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK "ah please stop,I'm super sorry!" SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMAKC SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK!!

The spanking went on for what seemed like forever after 7 min I layed limp on his lap saying

"I'm so sorry Zayn!"

"Just 3 more minutes Lou." He reassured me

As the assault on my bum never stopped the stinging and burning became worse and worse. It felt like someone was putting fire on my bum and I couldn't stop myself from sobbing.

After of what seemed like forever, but was really only 3 minutes the timer rung and Zayn immediately turned it off and picked me up.

My bum was a dark red with purple bruises and welts an I couldn't stop crying.

"Shh it's okay, I forgive you Loubear." He comforts me

"I'm sorry, I was just worried and mad, and I love you so much and I'm just so sorry!" I rant

"It's really okay, shh no more crying love, you're gonna make your self sick." He soothes

After about 5 minutes my sobbing turns to sniffling.

"Zayn?" I ask

"Yeah babe?" He answers

"My bum hurts." I say

"I know, but at least we have the day off to relax and not worry about anything.

"NIALL GIVE ME BACK MY CHIPS!"

"COME AND GET 'EM HARRY!"

"GUYS WILL YOU SHUT UP IM TRYING TO WATCH THE GAME!" We hear the boys yell

"LOUIS, ZAYN!!!!" They all yell

"Guess not." Zayn says as he gets out of the bed.

-I wrote this over and over and I still think it's crap, but I hope you guys like it, I love you guys and once again super sorry for the late update. Sorry for the mistakes! Until next time my lovely unicorns 😍😘

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