This is a story that takes place in Jamaica. I wanted to be as authentic as possible, so there is Jamaican Patois used in the dialogue.
So, I used a mix of patois and English with more overt subtext to give you an idea of what is being said.
There will be four POVs within the story. The story will start with two and will then transition into four.
Also, there will be a subtext and overt presentation of certain bigotries in this story. I am not doing it for shock value. It is solely for the character arcs and plot development in the story. If you are a better writer and think I am doing a bad job at it, tell me, I love criticism. I won’t improve if you don’t speak up.
I apologize, if you can’t read this story any further. I won’t force you to, hence this note. So you can stop reading here if you have a problem with these things:
Content Warning Disclaimer
Graphic Description of Pain
Strong Language
Suggestive Sexual Language
Misogyny
Homophobia
Fatphobia
References to Sexual Assault
But if you do stay, great, enjoy the story, and thank you for reading.
JE LEEST
Jamdown
Algemene fictieOne reckless man, one football team, so many lives will change if he succeeds, hopefully, he does, but he might not, and his failure has been a continuous song for all his life. In the sweet breath of the Jamaican parish of St. Elizabeth, surround...
