purplerainbow

@BrokenPorcelain :) no problem! 
          	

Midwifey

Don't worry about ruining the first chapter, 
          there is still potential beneath it! You just need to uncover what makes your writing style great!
          Please don't lose faith in your writing, because you are just starting off :) with hard work and inspiration, you'll be up and most likely doing better than most of us on wattpad in no time :) 
          Keep Writing Sam :) 
          -Julia. xx