niallon11

@Intweener 
          	I read it and you would be well able to compete, your writing is good insofar that you show good imagination and story ideas. What i would say to work on would be the flow of the story and give it a good edit after writing but there is definitely potential there.

Intweener

@niallon11 thanks for the quick reply, I'm glad to hear I'll be enjoying the upcoming competition then :)
          I got an editor by my side who corrects my failings in perfect english, this is unfortunately one of the drawbacks of being a foreigner with a completely different grammar build up :)
          
          I assume it's neccesary in the contest to have it edited before submitting? or is that against the rules you set up?
          

niallon11

@Intweener 
          I read it and you would be well able to compete, your writing is good insofar that you show good imagination and story ideas. What i would say to work on would be the flow of the story and give it a good edit after writing but there is definitely potential there.

Intweener

Hey Naillon11 , I've already responded to your topic and I'd love to join, but I was wondering if you could perhaps tell me if my writing is good enough for being in one of these contests. 
          
          I wrote this short story in 20 minutes after i got only one word to start it off with. It was " awesomesauce"  and it had to be included. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/11008902-culinary-disastrophies
          
          I'd love to hear from you.
          With regards, 
          Intweener.