Dylanwolfs

Okay, so i sort of want to change my book. Yes, Dylan is still going to be in it. Yes Jake is also in it, but i want to make it seem more.....something. This ones going to make more sence, but it still has the same story line. Seems everyone likes the 'bitch' comments, and yes, I'm keep them too. Upload soon.
          	
          	
          	Your's truly
          	
          	D

shevamae

Please read "Mine" by alhambra? It is a really great romance novel filled with mystery, suspense, and most importantly REALLY HOT DUDES[;))]!!! This story will seriously rock your world! But seriously, you should read it! You won't be able to stop!!! :)) The link is on my wall!!! :))

Dylanwolfs

Okay, so i sort of want to change my book. Yes, Dylan is still going to be in it. Yes Jake is also in it, but i want to make it seem more.....something. This ones going to make more sence, but it still has the same story line. Seems everyone likes the 'bitch' comments, and yes, I'm keep them too. Upload soon.
          
          
          Your's truly
          
          D

silentvoicefails

I'm not going to be vague with this comment, so I enjoyed reading your story. It was good, I wish you could expand on the second chapter though. It had me confused, but I adore Dylan's relationship with Jake, it is simply brilliant. Also, Dylan is awesome. In the first chapter your mention that she does JKD, is that in any relation to TKD? Also if so which style, traditional or modern?