love sucks. face it. except if you have a steady relationship filled with complete honesty... ;-D (not)
@xxultravioletxx thanks it means a lot that u would give feedback
i love comments more than votes, anyway...
@Ed-rom thanks so much! yeah...not a very angry piece, but not my worst...i don't think.
the title makes this sound really comanding and as if this will be a really hard hitting poem. then the words you use and the differing rhyme patterns lighten the overall piece. all in all i really like it. Eden.