The Way Love Shouldn't Go

The Way Love Shouldn't Go

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Piper By blackrosebabe Updated Jan 26, 2011

love sucks. face it. except if you have a steady relationship filled with complete honesty... ;-D (not)

blackrosebabe blackrosebabe Jan 16, 2011
@xxultravioletxx  thanks it means a lot that u would give feedback
                              i love comments more than votes, anyway...
                              thanks
                              xoxo
                              piper
blackrosebabe blackrosebabe Jan 13, 2011
@Ed-rom   thanks so much!  yeah...not a very angry piece, but not my worst...i don't think.
                              thanks 
                                xoxo     piper
Ed-rom Ed-rom Jan 12, 2011
the title makes this sound really comanding and as if this will be a really hard hitting poem. then the words you use and the differing rhyme patterns lighten the overall piece. all in all i really like it. Eden.