Happily Ever After? Guess Again (ON HOLD- So I can decide what to do with it)

Happily Ever After? Guess Again (ON HOLD- So I can decide what to do with it)

778 Reads 47 Votes 5 Part Story
Jesse By JessePotter41 Updated Dec 19, 2011

Jessie and Logan were as close as sisters, But when Logan does the unthinkable to Jessie, will they ever be able to repair the damage done? Or will they stay enemies forever?

kissing-in-neverland kissing-in-neverland Jun 02, 2012
It was good. The idea seems nice but it needed a stronger hook to bring the reader in. The plot seemed unique and overall you did a good job
OneLovee_OneDream OneLovee_OneDream Jun 01, 2012
This reminded me of me and my best friend, how close they are. (: 
                              I loved it(:
- - May 30, 2012
Aww, the relationship between the two girls seems really close and sweet...you've got me wondering what must have happened to 'break them up' (if you know what I mean). Am curious about how Tristan fits into this all as well. Nice writing style and your words flow well too :) Voted x
smalltownlovin smalltownlovin Nov 14, 2011
This is really good, something that you should show to Miss.D :)
AngelaWu AngelaWu Nov 13, 2011
So does the story go on as them in high school or something? I really wanna know!
AngelaWu AngelaWu Nov 13, 2011
Wait, so Logan is a girl? That's so confusing!! OMg I just can't wait to see what she does! 
                              
                              I think I'm starting to like this better than love hurts, no offense, but this one is also amazing!!