the prince of vampires kidnapped me!!!

the prince of vampires kidnapped me!!!

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blackcat4125 By blackcat4125 Updated Aug 04, 2012

15 year old rose is just a normal girl who like to have fun eat ice cream with her friends and have a great time until one day from hanging out with her friends she was walking through the park and she saw an handsome man with two men behind her what was going to happen to her ? pls read if u want to!!!!

TrebleXoxo19 TrebleXoxo19 Mar 07, 2012
It's really good so far, but their is like a lot of run-on sentences so it's kind of hard to read, but overall I enjoy itt!
blackcat4125 blackcat4125 Dec 31, 2010
@writerchild95 lol totaly fits u ahahaaha because I know that if a guy tried to do something to u you'd kic hoass right away
writerchild95 writerchild95 Dec 30, 2010
No promblemo person. and another thanks for Dedicating a chapter with guys getting their asses kicked to me...ahhhh it totally suits my life style
                              xD@redrose4125 
blackcat4125 blackcat4125 Dec 30, 2010
@writerchild95  ROFL! LMAO!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA thnxs frt he ommment :)
writerchild95 writerchild95 Dec 28, 2010
yay!!! dedication :P and double yay!!!!! assholes getting beat up cause they're too cocky!!!!!!!!!
gundabadqueen gundabadqueen Dec 08, 2010
It's really good :D just remember to always capitalize I, and paragraphing is important too. But it's a very good story.(: