Poetry By A Newbie

Poetry By A Newbie

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Lissa Alexandrine By render_waverPQ Updated Sep 03, 2010

Just random poetry

    red_head93 red_head93 Sep 08, 2010
    great job i could really picture what u were saying. it even flowed nicely but please try to work on you puncuation 
    Daydreamer0Fly Daydreamer0Fly Sep 03, 2010
    Really some great poetry!
                                  
                                  I'm a newbie too, and also write poetry. Any chance you'd give mine a read and some feedback? I'd love to hear what you think, and any tips or ways you think I could improve. It'd mean a lot. (And, I of course could REALLY use some votes, but only if you like it. ^_^)
    render_waverPQ render_waverPQ Sep 03, 2010
    @lalalatangyness i guess you maybe right. =] this isn't one of my best works but i rarely write poetry. =D
    CathyL0v3 CathyL0v3 Sep 02, 2010
    This great!
                                  i mean really, really, really, really fabulous! :)
                                  i hate it when people say it's great not meaning, so i'm being legit right here. (:
                                  NEXTPARTNEXTPART!
    moongazerkai07 moongazerkai07 Aug 30, 2010
    nice and good... write more poems and you can express yourself more as well
    stainedcolor stainedcolor Aug 29, 2010
    awww this is really beautiful. especially the very ending! voted (: