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Sandra By blancfox Updated Jul 31, 2010

It follows the story of a teenager who has a curse. she does not know what exactly the curse is but could feel its potential of scary stuff happening when she loses hold of its control. all around her random kidnappings are occurring, those who escaped are left but their former shells.things have taken a step too far, the curse and power is acting out, and its the appearance of a hot stranger that offers to help "Rita" a hand that things don't seem as they are, is he who he really says he is, or is the dark shadows that hover around him  hint to a side he has carefully left out. its up to "Rita"  (this stranger keeps insisting is her true name) to free the lost souls and aid Jude Sullivan to get his sister back together again.

blancfox blancfox Jul 29, 2010
ha:D i keep missing that bear:P to be honest i cant even remember where it is:P thanks alot:D i wanna upload the  next bit ....don't know how the plot goes, i write as the thoughts seize me:P
bluegirl09 bluegirl09 Jul 26, 2010
nice cliffhanger ending! Great descriptions too! Careful of things 'bare' instead of 'bear'. Very nice kind of horror idea with the purified, taloned hand :P Nice plot!