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My Broken Porcelain Doll.

My Broken Porcelain Doll.

827 Reads 21 Votes 3 Part Story
ElizabethDaisy By ElizabethDaisy Updated Feb 04, 2012

"Dolls are meant to put on display for the world to admire, their not allowed to love or live life like us. Thats all you are and all you will ever be. A doll." Words that seemed more true with every passing day. With a past she can't remember and a future she can't control, what will happen when the family finally gets tired of her? She was, after all, only a doll.

ElizabethDaisy ElizabethDaisy Feb 07, 2012
@VideoGAmer123 Hey, thanks for the advice! I will try it. And I'm glad you like it =) Also, thanks so much for voting!
-yxungest -yxungest Feb 07, 2012
I really like it! But you should put mire space in the paragraphs  and it will make this 4 pages(I think) but good job! Voted! :P
ElizabethDaisy ElizabethDaisy Feb 07, 2012
@slantingwillow Hey, thanks! I'm really glad you like it so far =)
slantingwillow slantingwillow Feb 07, 2012
It sounds really cool! I liked your description and version of the vampires! It's unique :) Good job!
WriterSherry WriterSherry Mar 23, 2011
Good job. Interesting story. Could be really great if you cleaned it up a bit.  My blog has tons of writing tips on self-editing that might be helpful: http://www.darkangelwritingandreviews.com/
                              
                              Good luck with your writing!