My Broken Porcelain Doll.

My Broken Porcelain Doll.

826 Reads 21 Votes 3 Part Story
ElizabethDaisy By ElizabethDaisy Updated Feb 04, 2012

"Dolls are meant to put on display for the world to admire, their not allowed to love or live life like us. Thats all you are and all you will ever be. A doll." Words that seemed more true with every passing day. With a past she can't remember and a future she can't control, what will happen when the family finally gets tired of her? She was, after all, only a doll.

ElizabethDaisy ElizabethDaisy Feb 07, 2012
@VideoGAmer123 Hey, thanks for the advice! I will try it. And I'm glad you like it =) Also, thanks so much for voting!
topmonster123 topmonster123 Feb 07, 2012
I really like it! But you should put mire space in the paragraphs  and it will make this 4 pages(I think) but good job! Voted! :P
ElizabethDaisy ElizabethDaisy Feb 07, 2012
@slantingwillow Hey, thanks! I'm really glad you like it so far =)
slantingwillow slantingwillow Feb 07, 2012
It sounds really cool! I liked your description and version of the vampires! It's unique :) Good job!
ChickenSkittle ChickenSkittle Feb 02, 2012
Hey! I absolutely love this story so far! Hurry up and update please! =D
BreakingChains BreakingChains Feb 02, 2012
Hey, just wanted to let you know that this is an awesome story so far and that I can't wait to read more. good job =)