Pure Blood

Pure Blood

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Idk, HELP ME lol XD By Kittycat360 Updated Mar 11, 2011

Lavender mets a nice guy, hes a vampire, lavender struggles with becoming the unknown...a vampire

catti97 catti97 Mar 14, 2011
hmmzzz well uh its very, short. lengthen your chapters please. Add details, flashbacks stuff like that, but anyway it was good. again with the spelling. Oh and if you have any trouble with filling your chapters dont be scared to ask! i have trouble with that as well..>_>"....
catti97 catti97 Mar 14, 2011
I like how you describe things....work on your spelling and grammar but good job:D