Family of One

Family of One

157 Reads 3 Votes 2 Part Story
Queen By Allyuoo Updated Jun 04, 2011

Mia lives with a family that includes a mother that has an OCD problem with noise, A brother that is very annoying, a little sister that is cute by day but evil by night and a dad who is always at work. One rainy day the brother is found dead, And the family hires a private detective to figure out why, how the brother died and who killed him. The clues show that the killer is a part of the family. Who could it be? The OCD mom, The never at home dad, Mia or the evil little sister? And will that person kill the rest of the family members ONE BY ONE?

MayenWrites MayenWrites Jun 02, 2011
@Allyuoo Of course boo boo!!! I really mean it when I say this story is amazing so far.
Allyuoo Allyuoo Jun 02, 2011
@Mjabm147  thx for your input I will change a few things in my writing like the dialogue and capitalizing things tank you for noticing my story too. I am very grateful. :D