Wake   pg 1

Wake pg 1

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tm9756 By tm9756 Updated Mar 01, 2011

pg one of what i hope to soon get published.  but i need your help to critique it for me first.  post your review in the comments please.

tm9756 tm9756 Mar 01, 2011
yeah, so..... there it is... really, i just need some people to give me any advice they can. that would be great.