Over come with depression, Bella makes a fatal decision to end her life.
I can't wait to find out what happens...i like your story so please keep writing lol
I loved the idea, it's a breath of fresh air in the twilight fan fics, and your grammar is pretty good. But you might want to go over it again, there are a few mistakes still.
As you can see, I don't mind reading my fans stories, but yours was actually good! :)