Premonition

Premonition

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Gilbert By gcastellanos Updated May 21, 2010

Since I have no specific plan for this story, all I can really tell you so far is that it's about a normal everyday kid who finds out he's, well, not such a normal everyday kid. The hard way. On the faithful day fate decides to bust a cap on his ass, this kid kisses his old life goodbye as he finds himself recruited to a not so normal everyday job for not so normal everyday people. So there you are. Enjoy and comment.

courtneymo96 courtneymo96 May 24, 2010
hey!this is amazing!
                              so great i became a fan and thought id comment(:
                              i love your writing style and vocabulary is huge(:
                              i have a story called "Premonition" 
                              you should check it outt
                              along with my poems(:
                              thanks, 
                              COurtney
gcastellanos gcastellanos May 23, 2010
@bunnygirl19 Thanks.  Seriously, thanks alot.  I'm glad I have some advice to work with.  Your the first person who reads this and has some pointers to give. I'll defenately keep it in mind as I work on this story.