Beginning of the End

Beginning of the End

426 Reads 9 Votes 3 Part Story
Katie By katietabby156 Updated Feb 02, 2011

Jay has been a city kid all his life. One day, when an earthquake hits, he finds something he shouldn't have. Now he has to find a way to get back to before, but that is harder than it may seem.

tianajade tianajade Feb 06, 2011
I like it so far. Maybe a little fast paced, but other than that, it's a good start. I like the story line, it's something different and interesting! (: Keep writing.
vantablack vantablack Feb 04, 2011
Oh, thank goodness the people Jay knew and loved were okay, including Jason and his mom. 
                              This was very good, I haven't seen anything like it on WattPad.
                              You just joined yesterday, I see, so welcome!
CryssTall CryssTall Feb 04, 2011
very good - couldn't stop reading.. the only thing I would do is maybe space it out a little more...
meluv4u17 meluv4u17 Feb 04, 2011
I read the first chp. and its sounds pretty interesting.....gonna go read the rest...glad to be the first comment <3