Troubled Water

Troubled Water

1 Part Story 38 Reads 2 Votes
Andrew By Jolleyman Updated Mar 03, 2012

An adventure story about a young man who goes to the Bermuda triangle with his sister to study a mysterious change in underwater volcanoes and ends up deeper than he wishs

MaggieJolley MaggieJolley Mar 05, 2012 07:35PM
Make sure you are proof reading, adding dialogue and explaining things-- where are you? Florida? Bahamas? California? South Africa? How old are you all? Why are you doing it? Where are the parents?? Looking good, keep working!!
Jolleyman Jolleyman Mar 03, 2012 04:05PM
If you really like this or if it needs work please comment on this story and I will fix it or add more