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Kismet and Prestige are just as unusual as their names. Though one is a boy and the other a wolf, they both desire the same thing: love. Through the years, their friendship grows and they become inseparable. But when their town is hit by a natural disaster, their friendship is challenged to the point of destruction... -------------------------------- THIS STORY HAS NOT BEEN EDITED YET --------------------------------

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