Judge: Zandra996
The eyes of Darkness by Minkittystan
Title:5/5 Cover:5/5 Description :5/5 Reader's Interaction:5/5 Rules:5/5 Social Messages:5/5 Plot:8/10 Grammar:18/20 Plot Twist and attraction :9/10 Emotions and Character Development :9/10 Creativity and way of writing :8/10 Your opinion on the book:8/10
Total: 90/100
Areas they are good at : They are good at the plot. The way they delivered it. Areas need to improve in : There are grammars and you know, so fast attraction to the characters. Advices: Continue the book, it's good. Remember when writing, you don't need to be exaggerated to the plot. Like the screaming and etc.
His other Half by Kreight101
Title:5/5 Cover:5/5 Description :5/5 Reader's Interaction:5/5 Rules:5/5 Social Messages:5/5 Plot:8/10 Grammar:18/20 Plot Twist and attraction :8/10 Emotions and Character Development :9/10 Creativity and way of writing :9/10 Your opinion on the book:8/10
Total:90
Areas they are good at : The plot they are working at is good. The way they write it. Areas need to improve in : There are grammar mistakes. It's still good but the grammar is one of the factor of writing. Advices: You need to improve more or download grammarly. You don't need to exaggerate the plot and minimized the flirting.
One night stand by SOMYOONKOOK
Title:5/5 Cover:5/5 Description :5/5 Reader's Interaction:5/5 Rules:5/5 Social Messages:5/5 Plot:8/10 Grammar:18/20 Plot Twist and attraction :8/10 Emotions and Character Development :9/10 Creativity and way of writing :8/10 Your opinion on the book:8/10
Total:89
Areas they are good at : This one is good and the plot twist Areas need to improve in : The grammars and errors. Don't exaggerate. Advices: Don't exaggerate. Like the shouting and the talking. Like it should be more realistic and more pleasant to read. (I flinched) (I screamed because I got shook) / not the:AHHHHHHHH) /
Judge: siddhidhawan
4 Minutes by Nike_Of_The_Hills - 84/100
Review - There weren't any typos or grammatical errors or anything wrong in the book , but the description was really short , my opinions on this book are that the book is really cool and sweet to be honest some of the best small stories I have read , a tip from me would be to write a bigger description , I really want to express my impression about this book , my first impression on books are their descriptions if they are interesting or not but the description didn't attract me that much hopefully I didn't sound too harsh .
Noona by angybear - 86/100
Review - The book was pretty cool I really loved it , the book had no occasional bumps and was a straight road , the plot was a bit cliche and the cover was very plain and didn't attract me that much .
Lollipop And Cigarettes by vitaemin_ly - 87/100
Review - There is a very small description that doesn't attract me that much on the other hand the plot is very creative and the cover is also kind of attractive this story was really good .
Sky by dreamalittlefic - 82.5/100
Review - This book had a plain cover which didn't attract me that much but I can truly say that th book had an amazing and creative plot which really attracts me towards it , there were no grammatical mistakes and no bumps that broke the flow of the story I really loved it .
Lyrics And Depression by Blushylilbunbun
Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules –5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 1.5/5 The cover is not at all unique. There are bunch of stories with this same cover even the font is also not much creative. I would suggest a new cover to attract more readers, there are many kpop graphic designer shops which make kpop covers for writers, there you can apply for a cover according to your choice. I would suggest a light or medium colour cover, mainly light colour cover will make your story look good at first sight. Marks for book description: 2/5 Very simple description did not attract me at all. The description should have little bit of dialogue to attract the readers at first sight along with the mention of story contents like fluff, happy ending and so on. Marks for book title: 4/5 The story title was pretty good and unique. Marks for social message: 4/5 Author you have conveyed the social message very well. Yeah it's true that there is someone who will still love us someday with all our flaws and make our heart go boom! boom!.( lmao I want Jin's love to make my heart go boom! boom!) Marks for book plot: 7/10 Plots were simple but good easy for readers to understand.
Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 16/20 Your grammar is not bad but you need to use some exclamatory marks to show some excitement, it will give a better experience to the reader. Marks for plot twist: 6/10 I will suggest some more plot twists in the story to make it more interesting. Marks for character development: 7/10 Although there was no proper character development but author has developed her characters uniquely anyone can see that while reading the book. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 6/10 The story was simple and not at all creative. You could use some quotes at the up or be more poetic or you can use some different style of writing to make the story more creative and I promise it will attract more readers. Marks for my opinion on the book: 6/10 I enjoyed Y/n's sassy behaviour and overprotective Yoongi. This is a sweet love story about a cold girl and a singer and it made my warmed my heart. I would suggest all Yoongi biased to check out this story , you will surely like it with a cup of coffee in this winter. Total Marks: 69.5/100
Review: I would suggest you to change the cover to attract more readers. More plot twists would have been good. Use some exclamatory marks to show emotion and make the readers heart go boom! boom!. And make the story little creative, creative stories make readers lure around stories like butterfly. Except this the story was pretty good.
Judge: kpopcharmseu
book name: 3 AM
Author: myyhiraeth
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Reader's interaction: 2.5/5
Rules: 3/5
Social message: 4/5
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 19.5/20
Plot twists and attraction: 8/10
Emotions and character development: 7/10
Creativity and way of writing: 10/10
Your opinion on the book: 8/10
TOTAL: 82/100
Review: The book is beautifully written. The words are weaved together fabulously. Since the book is written in a poetic format i can't expect the author to give every single detail but even as a story, if the author would give out little more details throughout the story, that'd be great. Example, what caused her insomnia? Why is she so conservative? Does she has some trauma's? Any little detail of a situation would make it clearer, but i do know that poems doesn't follow the rule of giving every detail about the situation, it's full of innuendo's and deep meanings, if the readers read it with focus and slow pace, they'd love the book. As a poem/short story, the book is a great one and i hope it gets the attention it deserves💜😊
Any tips for the author: in few chapters the last word is kinda isolated, is it done purposely? If no then author can fix it, and the description is actually quite...common? Many people know the meaning of insomnia, so it'd catch more attention if you rather add something about the girl, about her pain or any emotions, any dialogue from the book. As a whole i loved the book. Keep slaying author-nim💜😊
Thank you all the participants and judges💖💜😊
I hope the reviews are helpful, please pm me if you have any queries, also all the books are amazing! Many are away just by a mark or two, and that's great, a little more work and your book will definitely get a win oneday.