Judge: The_Tallest_Dux
The one where they're friends by fiza_31 ➜ Reader's Interaction- 5/5 Rules: 5/5 Cover: 3/5 Description: 3/5 Title: 4/5 Social message-3/5 Grammar: 19/20 Plot: 8/10 Twist: 8/10 Character Development-9/10 Creativity- 9/10 My opinion- 7/10
Total- 83/100
Judge: koo_kielove
The Equality by sweetsourkitty
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Description: 5/5
Reader's interaction: 3.5/5
Rules: 5 /5
Social message: 5 /5
Plot: 8 /10
Grammar: 20 /20
Plot twists and attraction: 8 /10
Emotions and character development: 10 /10
Creativity and way of writing: 8 /10
Your opinion on the book: 9 /10
Review: I liked the story plot and the characters were really good. This book is really good and writing skills were nice too. I liked it, that there were very less to no grammatical mistakes. Also I liked that, it had long chapters, that shows the author really worked hard. And I really appreciate it.
TOTAL: 90.5 /100
Purple hearts by whereismyoppa
The Purple Hearts Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules – 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 1.5/5 The cover did not attract me at all. It looks bland. The cover was not clear. There are some graphic shops who makes k-pop covers for kpop books like your, you can always apply for a cover there. Marks for book description: 3/5 The description was simple, did not felt that spark while reading it. But I will say it was different cause everyone does not feel comfortable to write in their own mother tongue but you did it author, it's worth praising. And that what's make the book description unique. Marks for book title: 2.5/5 Book title is not at all unique. You can be more creative with the name. A creative name can bring more readers to your story. Marks for social message: 3/5 I did not find any specific social message.
Marks for book plot: 7/10 Role play plots are not common but not rare as well. And are quite difficult to make so I appreciate your effort in making a role play plot. According to me the plots were well formed. Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 14/20 Grammar and vocabulary needs to be improved. There are places where punctuation marks are needed. You should use proper punctuation in right place to provide a better experience for the readers. Marks for plot twist: 6/10 The ship (story) sailed peacefully in the ocean with little twists and turns. There are some plot twists which made the story going but it would be good if you would have add some more twists in the story. It was a sweet story with a happy ending. But some more spices would be better but it's okay sometimes sweet cappuccino is also needed. Marks for character development: 6/10 There is no proper character description in the story. But I will not say the character development bad , the author has made her characters uniquely which can attract many Indian readers. But I would say the author needs to develop a little in emotions building in the story. I laughed a lot, the humour in the story kept me rolling on the floor. Although there was funny moment and the story was a attempt to make the reader laugh but I would suggest some more romantic moments to make the heart go Boom! Boom!, some sad moments to wet the tissues as well as happy moments to show the sky is pink and there are still hopes for better future. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 6/10 It was simple and easy for readers to understand. Although using your own language so well and also providing proper meaning of those Hindi dialogues in English is something I felt as creative way of writing.
Marks for my opinion on the book: 6/10 The book kept me rolling on the floor with those humorous comments. The book is a combination of funny friendship along with beautiful blooming love. The book is written in simple way, the book includes Indian language Hindi which's meaning is described in english to make the others to understand who does not understand Hindi properly.
Overall I have loved the book very much.
Total Marks: 65/100
Review: I would suggest you to change your cover and be more creative with the name to attract more readers to your book. You can make your story more creative but it's okay of you want to keep it simple. But using proper punctuation in right places as a author you need to check this part . Adding some more emotions in the book will spice up your story more. Except this the story is pretty interesting.
Judge: PLUM_PUDDING_STORIES
Mapping a world by Dreamingsuccess
TOtal: **83/100
Host revisions:
Emotions: *8 attraction: *9
total: *85/100
Coincidental mess by cherry_blossom76
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