Here are the oneshots/ short story winners! 🎊🎉🏆✨
🏆 THIRD PRIZE! 🥉
Take my hands now (jjk oneshots) by Weird_BTS_Girl
Judge: _things_and_stuff_
Take my hands now:
Rules: 5
Reader interactions: 5
Readers were leaving a pleasant feedback to author, and due to amount of reads, there were comments.
Cover: 5
I liked how elegant ans airy it is. I think that you have done a great work with combination of all the colors together and making them work.
Description: 5
I appreciate that the description is really correct. This is like a real description with a bit of personality. A big plus for mentioning the cover maker.
Title: 5
Message: 4
I got from some of the books really nice and soft messages, but others I was a tad bit lost, but due to you having many parts, I think that you're doing an amazing job.
Plot: 8
You have a good plotting sense. I think that you capture the story line for a short stories very well.
Grammar, vocabulary: 15
I was a bit confused on grading this category, for me tho, I personally don't like korean romanisation, but you mentioning of wanting people to actually learn them and haven't just put the ones you know and then left the people to find out what they mean themselves. For you grammar I haven't found mistakes, so I didn't take any points off. Due to writing, we all can always look forward to writing better.
Plot twists, interactions: 8
You had very nice interactions and also, your conversations between characters are easily to keep up with.
Creativity: 10
My opinion: 9
Total: 88
the spring we lost by Daph_0913
Judge: Taenillakook
rules 5 reader interaction 5 cover 5 *4 description 5 title 5 message 4 plot 9 *8 grammar vocabulary 18 plot twist interaction 9 emotions character 10 *8 creativity 9 *8 opinion 9
review...it was amazing short story..it was so meaningful...and filling with lots of different emotions...and I could felt the sadness...I hope you will create more amazing books.
Total: 93/100 *88/100
HR: Alright I'll be honest when i say i cried, the ending is great and girl when i say your book had a pang in my heart then i mean it. Don't hate me for revising the marks though. Also, you can make it a little better by giving some more details, there are huge time skips also.
🏆SECOND PRIZE! 🥈
Snowflakes Are Falling From The Sky by Sneehadorin
Judge: _things_and_stuff_
Rules: 4 *2 (*not following host accounts)
Not following their judge (*please do follow your judge since you won a prize)
R
eader interactions: 5
Cover: 4 *3.5
I had struggled a bit with reading it, and I think that it's a great picture for cover, and font, but, perhaps a different combination of letters.
Description: 5
Your description is friking amazing, it gave me chills, and I wanted to read it the exact same moment. It's really really good.
Title: 5
One word= amazing
Message: 5
You nailed this. I got the feeling while reading your book that you had every single word planned and that you decided that everything is in it's place like you planned. Your message makes me want to write a short story myself.
Plot: 9
Grammar, vocabulary: 17 *18
You have an amazing writing skill. You hit my feelings, I can easily picture places, and feeling everything around. Couldn't find grammar mistakes I was literally too busy with hearts in my eyes while reading it.
Plot twists, interactions: 9
Emotions, characters: 10
You really do make me feel all the things. Also, amazing work on their connections and, feelings.
Creativity: 10
My opinion: 10
I really enjoyed your book the moment I started it. I hope that you win >.<
Total: 93/100 *91.5/100
HR: Do change the colour of your covers font as the judge mentioned.
🏆FIRST PRIZE! 🥇
WANNA PLAY A GAME? BY kinky_taebooty_
JUDGE: angybear
Wanna play a game? By kinky_taebooty_
Judge: angybear
Rules: 5pt
Interaction: 5pt
Cover: 5pt
Description: 4pt
Title: 5pt
Social Msg: 3pt
Plot: 9pt
Grammar: 20pt
Plot twist: 7pt *8.5
Emotions and Character Development: 8pt *8.5
Creativity: 9pt *9.5
Opinion: 10pt
Review: This was by far my favorite of the 4 stories. The pictures at the end of each chapter were a genius touch, and extremely creepy. I was enthralled from the very first chapter.
Overall score 90/100 *revised: 92.5/100
Host review: honestly speaking i was wondering about the book so i randomly myself gave it a read as well that is because the book was short...like i would rather advice you to add the book in short story category (*and thus the book has been shifted to short story category, most of the judges and the author herself has consented to it) , also you can make the chapters a little longer, now, the fact that even after these two feedbacks, the book still stays on first place is because it got that out of the box vibe. An amazing read for everyone and appealing enough.
Congratulations to all the winners! ✨🎊🎉🎉🏆
Winners please pm me to claim your prizes! 💖💜😊
Thank you judges:
💜 kpopcharmseu (lmao XD)
✨special mentions!✨
💖 Saudade (65 *75) by Bugnoo
💖 Feel you (80) by lovejiminssmile
💖 Take one of us (85) by sumi_rra
💖 bts stories and oneshots (53 *71) by Rachel_RelonJin
💖 bts imagines and scenarios (67 *75) by marie0211
💖 Make it right (78.5) by lollyfluff
Thank you everyone for participating! 💜