Alliance || 1 || ✔️ mature

Da lustenvy

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Her most lethal weapon is herself . . . • • • Agent Eleven was always a loyal Agent for the Division. Until... Altro

a e s t h e t i c s
01 | Eleven
02 | Eleven
03 | Archer
04 | Archer
05 | Eleven
06 | Archer
07 | Eleven
08 | Archer
09 | Eleven
10 | Eleven
11 | Archer
12 | Archer
13 | Eleven
14 | Eleven
15 | Archer
16 | Eleven
17 | Eleven
18 | Eleven
19 | Eleven
20 | Eleven ✔️
21 | Archer
22 | Eleven
23 | Eleven
24 | Eleven
25 | Eleven
26 | Eleven
27 | Eleven
28 | Archer
29 | Eleven
30 | Eleven
31 | Archer
32 | Eleven
33 | Eleven
34 | Eleven
35 | Eleven
36 | Archer
37 | Eleven
38 | Eleven
39 | Eleven
40 | Eleven
41 | Archer
42 | Eleven
43 | Eleven
44 | Archer
45 | Archer
46 | Eleven
47 | Eleven
48 | Eleven
49 | Eleven
50 | Eleven
51 | The Untold Story of the Girl Behind the Barrel
52 | Eleven
Next Book || Classified
Fanart | Aesthetics
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Thank you for #1 in spy 1/1/2020
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How do you think this book could be improved?

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Give me all your opinions on Alliance and the book as a while, including characters and even classified if you've read it.

What do you wanna see more of? What doesn't make sense? Do you think some charcter need more screen time or personality?

Do we like Archer as is or should I rewrite him to be more of an alpha type where he and eleven butt heads while also keeping to the current plot line - because we know they would not agree on everything.

What is missing?

Anything you can think of, leave it here.

Also, due to how this book was always planned, the second book is in another POV, do we like that or would a second book in the original characters POVs be better and classified is if you want to read it (like a novella) - because it does fill in a lot of holes and personally I believe it's the better book of the two (or was until I edited alliance)

What do we think? I could write a book in eleven and such PoV but things would have to be rewritten in classified. And a lot of rework done which idk if I'm mentally prepared for until I start it.

Orrrrrr should I rewrite classifed to be mainly Hollands POV, with their life after capture (at the mercy of director?)

And when certain things are discovered, there are chapters in the other person PoV (spoiler warning if you habit read it — Lilacs PoV after holland possibly find out that she is alive?)

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