Gadbad ho gayi

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Ss on couples i.e raglak, ronakshi and rivanya. #1 in foolish on 26th September 2020 #1 in foolish on 27th oc... More

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Laksh goes to rakhi where her photo shoot was going on.

Rak: laksh, wat a surprise?

Lak: surprise? U gave me surprise. Wats this?

He throws those photos on her face. She sees it.

Rak: wat happened?

Lak: wat happened? After this also u r asking me wat happened? How can u click pics like these?

Rak: laksh, u know that m a model.

Lak with little anger: I know. U r not only alone person who is model. All models don't click pics like these. We r gf , bf now. I don't have any prob with ur modeling. But this much exposing? I don't like this. It's not gud also.

Rak also got angry.

Rak: m a model laksh. I always did wat I wanted. And I wil do wat I want. My brother dint say anything then who r u to order on me.

Laksh also gets more angry on her.

Rak: I never thot u r such narrow minded. I cant continue relation with u. its over now.

Lak: fine. Even I don't want to b in this relation.



Rakhi takes her bag and throws his love letter on his face.

Rak: I always keep it in my bag. Now its of no use.

She leaves. Laksh takes that letter and keeps in his pocket without reading it. A guy was standing little far and seeing all this. He smirks.

Another guy comes to him: hey rajiv. Wats going on? They broke up?

Rajiv: yes. Finally it happened wat I wanted. I was always with rakhi till she becomes model. I love her. I always motivated her in her work. The day I wanted to propose her,this laksh came in between. I had to do this. rakhi is only mine.

He remembers how he convinced rakhi for that photo shoot and then sent them to laksh.

........ ......................

Mrng shivanya got ready to go college. She sees ritik in differet dress. She gets shocked. He comes near her in romantic way. 

Rit: today u r not going to coll. And I took leav. We wil spend whole day together.



Shivanya get surprised and happy too.




Other side rohit gets ready and waiting for tea as it was tea time.

"rohit"

Roh to himself: who came now this time to home?

He turns and sees sona in modern dress.




Roh: wat did u say?

Sona: rohit. y? don't u like it?

Roh: I don't like. I love it.

Both come close.

Sona: m sry. I never give u my time. I never tried to understand u.

Roh smiling: its ok. But I'll forgive in one condition.

Sona: ??

Roh: always b like this. u r looking so hot.

Sona: sure rahul k pa.. sry rohit.

Both smile. He takes her in his arms.



Both couple spend time together.




................. ...................

All 4 gathered in rivanya home. They cleared all misunderstandings. Sona asks sry to shivanya and ritik to rohit.

Shi: now shall we start to talk abt laksh and rakhi.

Sona: we will do engagement first. Then after laksh's exam we wil fix marriage date.


Rakhi comes there.

Rak: whose marriage?

Rit: urs rakhi. We know that u and laksh love each other.

Rak: no bhai. We were. Its all over between us now. No discussion abt this topic.

Saying so she goes to her room. They get confused by her behavior.

Roh: may b laksh fought with her. tmrw they'll b ok.

After sometime ronakshi leaves from there.

......... .............

Rtitk calls rakhi to come in hall.

Rit: wats that behavior? They were our guests. Wat they'll think abt us? If u and laksh had fought then sort out together. don't show it before others.

Rak little loudly: its over bhai. We broke up. We cant b together.

Ritik slapped her.

Rakhi and shivanya gets shocked. As this was first time he raised his hand.

Rit: after our parents' death, I always supported u. I always said yes for whatever u said. I gave u all whatever u wanted. But this time? This is relation rakhi, not a toy that u'll do break up whenever u want. Laksh is a gud boy. U'll never get a boy like him.

He left from there in anger. Shivanya consoles her. 

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