Okay, there are A LOT of issues with fanfic, so here's just a small list. I will be using One Direction as an example.
1. Harry crashed his soft lips into Sarahs.
Someone dial 911 because there has just been a major accident here.
2. Speaking of 911....
"Rose, dial 911!"
Yeah... you go ahead and do that Rose... see how well that works for you when your in ENGLAND.
3. "Kayla, your soo beautiful!" Harry cooed.
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!?!" Harry roared.
"I'm gonna get you..." Harry growled.
Seriously, pick what animal you are.
Gosh.
4. SPELLING. I have seen fanfics that look like this before:
"O my ghd hurry ur lokng so sexy tody. Why mst u b so botyful.", Kylee sad.
Dude... get a dictionary...*facepalms*
5. Somehow Justin Beiber always gets into the story, whether he's now one of the boys boyfriends or Sarahs dad, he's always in there somehow.
Stay in your own fandom Beaver Boy.