A girl is praying to God......and her family is standing behind her.......joining hands......and closing their eyes...... that girl completes......the pooja and turns towards her family smiling........
Girl- Dadi maa prasad
Dadi- Laado....... thari awaaj sunn kar maari subah bann jaaye
Sekhar- Sach main Ragini.......teri awaaj se hi subah hoti hai meri toh.......abb tu chali jaayegi.......toh kaise rahenge hum
Rag- offo.....Papa.....agar aap aise royenge na toh hume nhi karni shadi badi.....
An another girl comes near Ragini and back hugs her
Girl- accha.......tumhe shadi nhi karni par humare bechare jija ji toh bhut betaab hain.......jaldi se tumhain apni dulhaniya bnane ko
R- Swara
Sw- arey sacchi dekho......itni subah subah badi ki taraf chale aaye hain......
All turns towards the side Swara told..... all looks towards the boys walking in.... Ragini blushes looking towards them.....
Dadi- arey Laksh itni subah subah.....
Laksh touches Dadi's feet
L- Sanskar..... perr chuo dadi ke
Dadi looks towards Sanskar..... he shows tongue to Dadi..... and runs near Ragini......holds her duppata
San- Duppate wali dost....... duppate wali dost.....
R- haa sanskar
San- this Lucky is very bad...... mujhe tumse milbane laa hi nahi raha tha
R- Sanskar aisa,nahi kahte...... he is your brother
Sw- arey Ragini apne hone wale pati ka itna support
R- (frawning) Swara
Sw- aur Jija ji aap...... abb yeh mat kahna ki aap Sanskar ki zidd par aaye hain
L- (smiling) haa woh actually.....
Sw- boliye na Jija ji
Laksh stammers.......Swara laughs....... Laksh gets totally lost in her laughter.....
Sumi- Swara....... bass bhi kar......kitna tang kar rahi hai tu bechare....... Laksh beta aao andar aao....... nashta karlo.....
L- nahi Maa...... woh actually Sanskar ko theme park jaana hai..... aur zidd pakad kar baitha hai ki Ragini ke saath hi jaayega
Sw- (teasing) aur aap jija ji....
Laksh now gets irritated by hearing again and again jija ji from Swara
L- stop it Swara.......it's Laksh.....please
All looks at him shocked
Sw- Laksh main toh bass majaak main
L- but I'm feeling awkward so please
Sw- haa ok......gussa kyu kar rahe ho....
Dadi looks on weirdly
L- Dadi kya main Ragini or Swara ko le jaa sakta hu
Sw- main.....kya karungi...... tum log jaao
R- Dadi kya hum jaa sakte hain
Dadi nodes
R- thank you Dadi......
All walks out......Ragini drags Swara with her
Sw- Ragini main kya kabab main haddi banungi tum dono ke beech......
R- shut up....... aur chalo......
Dadi- hey khatu shyam ji maari Laado ki khusiyon ka khyal rakhna.......
They gets seated in car........ Laksh at driver's seat.......Sanskar beside him and at back seat it's Swaragini........ Laksh adjusts the mirror........ to look at Swara
Ragini thinks he adjusted it for her..... she blushes...... Laksh attention turns towards her......he again gets irritated by it......
L- (why the hell she always blushes like that)
Sw- Laksh
L- (with sweetness in his voice) hmm..
Sw- Ragini ka face sharma sharma kar laal ho gya hai...... stop stairing her.....
Ragini blushes more......Laksh grites his teeth in irritation...... Sanskar looks towards Laksh......and a weird smile plays on his lips.......
They finally reaches Theme park......
San- duppate wali dost......chalo.....hum aa gaye.....
R- haa Sanskar.....hum aa rahe hain.....
Ragini tries to open the door but is unable to..... same with Swara....
L- ruko main kholta hu
Laksh steps down from car........ he passes the Ragini's side and opens Swara's side door..... Ragini looks on
Sw- thanks Laksh
L- my pleasure.....
Ragini just looks on
San- dost aao na....
R- hmmm
She comes out of car......and stands beside Laksh.......he again becomes irritated....... holds Swara's hand and walks away......Ragini looks on.... with some hurt
R- (yeh Laksh ji ko ho kya gya hai? Humse itne ukhde ukhde kyu rahte hain.....humne kuch galati kardi hai kya?)
She comes out of her trance...... feeling Sanskar pulling her duppata.....
San- chalo na dost....dekho lucky kitna aage nikal gaya hai
R- haa....
Laksh is walking on but stops hearing Swara's giggling he looks at her
L- hansh kyu rahi ho
She shows him her hand.....
Sw- look tumne galati se mera haath pakad liya......Ragini ka samajh kar
L- (irritated) galati se nahi pakda hai.... jaan kar pakda hai....... because I want to hold your hand not her
Swara gets shocked hearing Laksh
Sw- matlab kya hai tumhara??
L- matlab yeh hai that I
Ragsan to reaches near them
San- you are really bad Lucky.....humain peeche chodd kar aa gaya......
Laksh becomes quite so does Swara..... Ragini looks at their worried face
R- kya hua? Aap dono kuch pareshan lag rahe hain??
L- (shouting) kuch nahi hua hai??
Ragini becomes teary eyed hearing Laksh's loud voice
Sw- Laksh how dare you to talk my sister like that......
Laksh pulls his hairs in fruatration
L- Ragini I'm really sorry..... actually I'm little disturbed now a days...... because of work pressure.....so...... look I don't have any intention to shout on you like that......I'msorry.....
Ragini wipes her tears
R- it's okay laksh ji I understand
San- my dost is so good......you are really bad lucky.....I hate you
L- I'm sorry na Sanskar..... I promise I w'nt shout on your friend anymore
San- pakka na
L- haa pakka
San- then let's go.....
Sanskar holds Ragini's duppata and walks......on..... Laksh looks towards swara she gives him an angry glare
Sw- Laksh we needto talk......
L- Swara I really love
Sw- dare you utter those words......
She to walks away in anger from there
L- Swara I love you then how come I'll marry Ragini......
He to walks with them........ Laksh buys ticket.......for four of them and enters the theme park........ Sanskar sees a ride and rushes towards that
San- hum ismain baithenge....... hum ismain baithenge
Sw- sanskar it's for kids....
San- toh main toh baccha hi hu na....
L- Sanskar......nahi ho payega....yeh chotey bacchon ki ride hai
San- dost......please na dost
R- hum kuch karte hai
L- (irritated) kya karogi tum..... dikh nahi raha bass 12 saal ke bacche ki ride hai
Ragini again feels bad.......Sanskar looks at Ragini then at Laksh in anger
San- you are bad Lucky.....always shouts on my Dost I hate you
Saying so he runs away...... trio looks on shocked......Ragini runs behind him Laksh pulls his hairs in frustration
Sw- what the hell is all this Laksh..... tum kyu baar baar
L- Swara try to understand....... main Ragini se pyar nahi karta.......we both are not compatible.......hum dono ki duniya bilkul alag hai....... Swara I love you.......tum bilkul waise ladki ho jaise mujhe chahiye......aur Ragini bhut hi gharelu type ki hai......jo sirf hanji hanji karna jaanti hai......I don't want someone like her.......I like you...... no I love you
Sw- (in anger) shut up Laksh......just shut up.......dare you to utter these words.......tum magetar ho Ragini ke bhut pyar karti hai woh tumse..... agar yeh sagayi tuti na toh woh bardasht nahi kar paayegi bikhar jaayegi
L- Swara aur agar yeh shadi huyi na.... toh main bikhar jaaunga..... fir khak main Ragini ko khush rakh paunga.... Swara 3 life spoil ho jaayengi....
Sw- chup.....and don't you dare to utter these words got that.......
With RagSan-
Sanskar is walking in anger....... Ragini finally catches him huffing badly.....
R- offo Sanskar kitna tejj chalte ho tum
San- I'm a big boy.......toh tejj toh chalunga na
R- accha toh tum big boy ho......fir small boy ki ride main baithne ki zid kyu kar rahe the......
San- woh small boys ki ride thi
Ragini nodes
San- oh.......firr toh woh chipkali aur Laksh sahi bol rahe the
R- chipkali.....
San- hmmm......woh Swara
Ragini looks at him open mouth
R- Sanskar wrong thing......aise kisi ko galat nahi bolte.....uska naam Swara hai.....aur bahen hai woh humari
San- par mujhe woh bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai
R- Sanskar.......galat baat
San- you love her na
R- haa bhut jyada
San- kyu??
R- kyunki woh bahen hai humari......every sibling each other
San- every
R- hmm......jaise Laksh aapse bhut pyar karte hain
Sanskar expression turns mixed hate anger disgust and many more Ragini looks on weirdly
R- Sanskar.......kya hua tum aise mooh kyu bnaa rahe ho
San- woh......woh......gadbad...... mere pett main
R- (shocked) what??
Sanskar nodes......Ragini holds his hand and runs towards washroom with him..... Sanskar looks on......they finally reaches there
R- jaao jaldi jaao.....
Sanskar nodes and goes in.....
Inside washroom-
Sanskar is continueslly splashing water on his face......he finally lifts his head up.......and looks at his face in mirror..... his eyes are red shot in anger........images of some dying girl forms infront of him.......he breaks the mirror in anger shouting Kavita..... his hand starts bleeding badly
San- Laksh Maheshwari and Dp Maheshwari you both snatches everything from me...... and here I'm to snatch everything from you......the thing you both loves the most...... Laksh se uska pyar......aur Dp se uska business.......I'm back......the Sanskar Maheswari is back.......to take everything from you......inn 5 saalon main jo mere aansun wahe hain na unka hissab hoga abb.......harr hisab hoga.......
He wipes his tears and face......and comes out.......washing off his blood..... but his forehead is still sweating...... Ragini sees him
R- sach main......bhut gadbad thi
San- (again in abnormal tone) matlab?
R- you are still sweating.......lagta hai pressure jyada hi bann gya tha....
She giggles......Sanskar act as frawning...... Ragini then takes her duppata......and wipes his forehead sweat........Ragini's this act softness Sanskar......his anger melts......
San- (kya main apne badle main itna andha ho chuka hu ki iss masoom ladki ko bhi ghaseet liya.......no no Sanskar no need to think anything......just your revenge and nothing else......got that)
Ragini still wiping his sweat......Sanskar jerks her hand
San- stop it.....(in normal tone)
Ragini looks on shocked
San- (acting) woh sorry .......tum thak jaayogi na dost.......so abb mat karo
R- nahi Sanskar (she stops seeing his bleeding hand)
R- Sanskar yeh tumahre haath ko kya hua?? Yeh kaise??
She cries badly.......and quickly tears her duppata and ties on his bleeding hand......
R- bhut dard ho raha kya?
Sanskar shakes his head
R- par yeh lagi kaise
San- ptaa nahi bass lag gayi
R- tum pagal hi ho
Sanskar giggles
San- agar main pagal toh tum bhi pagal......tum meri dost jo ho
Ragini looks at him open mouth...... then laughs....... Sanskar becomes silent he looks at laughing Ragini then the duppat tied to his hand
San- (Ragini hastey huye kitni acchi lagti hai......kanhi meri wajah se iski yeh hansi na chinn jaaye...... main sach main iske saath galat kar raha hu.... iss sab main iski kya galati.......par galati toh meri Kavita ki bhi nahi thi......firr bji usse)
Ragini shakes Sanskar.....
R- kanha kho gaye
San- woh.....woh.....haa icecream mujhe icecream chahiye
R- ok chalo......par pahle tumhare bhai or meri bahen ko dhoondh lain
Sanskar nodes........as they were walking.......suddenly sky gets filled with fire crackers......by it Ragini gets starlted.......and ends up hugging Sanskar.......he gets shocked......his breath stops at the moment..........
San- Ragini........
She still hugging him and doesn't realise that sanskar called her by name.......nor he realises when he called her by name......
Laksh and Swara to reaches there....... both gets shocked seeing Ragsan hugging
L- tum Ragini ke liye pareshan thi dekho.......yanha kya ho raha hai
Both Ragsan hears him......soon Ragini realises her position she quuckly backs up
R- sorry Laksh woh hum
Sanskar starts clapping and laughing
San- dost darr gayi...... dost darr gayi..... dost toh ek num ki fattu hai....
R- Sanskar....
He laughs.....
Sw- ghar chalain
San- abhi nahi please...... abhi tak maine ek ride bhi nahi li.....please na dost
R- Swara kuch derr rukk jaate hain na
Sw- Ragini mera sar dard kar raha hai so
L- toh theek hai na...... main tumhain ghar le chalta hu......Ragini Sanskar ke saath aa jaayegi
Ragini looks on again hurt
Sw- are you mad......raat ho chuki aise akele wahar rahna is it safe for her...... and over that abb koi taxi bhi nahi milegi......kaise aayegi woh
Laksh looks on
L- haa maine socha hi nahi
San- (normal tone) tum sochte hi kab ho Laksh
All looks at him in shock......Sanskar again starts his acting....... all finally returns back to home......
Badi-
Ragini is sitting at window side...... and gets upset remembering Laksh's behaviour towards her..... and some what attraction towards Swara
Swara is on terrace......she remembers Laksh's proposal......and then Ragini's confession about loving Laksh..... she sits their crying......
Sw- yes I do love you Laksh.....but I can't accept you......I can't. ...
MM-
Laksh is sitting on bed and playing with light......
L- tum kyu nahi samjh rahi ho Swara..... I love you......just you.....tumhari yeh zid 3 zindagiyan barbad kar degi.....3 zindagiyan
Sanskar's room
Sanskar is sitting on chair holding a picture
San- I'm very near to destroy them..... Kavita...... mera badla bass pura hone wala hai...... parr iss sab main ek innocent.....be wajah piss rahi hai.....
He says looking at the duppata tied at his hand .........
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