Kirti Kriti Aur Kartik Ki

By Rasnak

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An mahabharata fanfic where there is time travel but.. With an unexpected twist. Meet Kartikeya and Kriti. Tw... More

Prologue
Meeting the OCs
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Quick Note!
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Quick Note
Apologies

Quick Q

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By Rasnak

Ok, sorrry for not updating the chapters yet but... I've been thinking over a few things and it's been a long week loaded with assignments and technical issues due to which I have to delete and make a new AO3 and insta account so...  Yeah.

The first two chapters will be out next week tho, if everything goes right. But before that... Some of you were asking about the relationship of Kritika-Kartik with their parents/grandmother and their life before getting dumped into Mahabharata so... Yeah.

1. Will it be ok if I do that as the first 2 or 3 chapters, like a prologue so that I can give some sort of a detail into their past and why  they are like that and things like that?

2. Or do you want me to insert it as dreams and flashbacks/recollections stuff while they talk with the Pandavas?

3. Just let it be like I'd done originally?

It's in your hands guys. And for those of you who want to comment scenes I'd missed out and ones you'll want to see in the chapters, please comment and I shall try my best to insert it in the rewrite of the chapters. Or will note it down in my OS book. But I'll try to include all your suggestions.

See you guys next week with the first chapter!!! (Which will be a Navratri special chapter so... It won't start off like it did initially)

Rasnak signing off :) ;)

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