LOVE FOREVER

By thecoffeeewriter

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Love forever is a story of two people madly in love with each other.Both broken in some way or the other. Bo... More

CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
CHAPTER 10
CHAPTER 11
CHAPTER 12
CHAPTER 13
CHAPTER 14
CHAPTER 15
CHAPTER 16
CHAPTER 17
CHAPTER 18
CHAPTER 19
CHAPTER 20
CHAPTER 21
CHAPTER 22
CHAPTER 23
CHAPTER 25
CHAPTER 26
Chapter 27
CHAPTER 28
CHAPTER 29
Important Note

CHAPTER 24

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Manik : Cabir have they reached

Manik inquired while caressing Nandini's hair constantly looking at her

Cabir : I will check with the guards

With this cabir called one of their guards who were appointed them in the plan

Cabir : Have they reached the destination ??

Guard : Sir there car has entered the venue and they are parking the car.

Cabir : good .. Now close the doors and take their phones and all the cash they are carrying and give any excuse but do not let them know of our plan

With this cabir was keeping the phone but manik stopped him and gestured him to give him the phone

Cabir handed him the phone while manik put his arm around Nandini and took the phone from the other hand and spoke

Manik : I don't want you to do any harm to them. Don't even tell them about the plan . Make it look as if it is a meeting or a party and just keep giving them excuses and stop them for about an hour or two and make sure they don't do  any contact with anyone in that time . Am I clear

The guard immediately replied positively and manik kept the phone

Dhruv : So should we begin the torture

Aliya : common manik let's start ......

Manik pecked Nandini's forehead  . He made Nandini tucked in a duvet in the bed and wrapped his mufler around her so that she sleeps peacefully and doesn't wake up sensing his absence and  after adjusting the room temperature. He  moved out and closed the light while everyone moved out with him . Mukti stayed till the end and after everyone left she came to nandini and carressed her hair and left a gift on her bed side

Mukti : Happy admission my angel

Abhi was going out but stopped seeing mukti and turned to look at her and what she was doing . She came out of the room and then abhi held her and saw her crying the ever hard mukti crying

Abhi took her in a hug and said

Abhi : what happened mukti ??

Mukti : You know today is the day Nandini cleared her ISAT exam and got admission in ISRO.  You know I was the first person she told that she is cleared that is why everyone thinks that she cleared it tommorow . She wanted to surprise manik and everyone . She called me and told me the news as she wanted my help . She told that I was the first person she told and from that day I am always the first person who wished her this . Manik ko bhi nhi pata hai ki angel ne aaj hi ISAT clear kar liya tha . She told him in the surprise party and I took a promise from her that she will not tell anyone about it except from me so that I am the only person who wished her today

Abhi hugged mukti and said

Abhi : So it is a happy day right so why these tears .... Let nandini be up manik must have planned something for tommorow like every year and you have also given her the gift .... Everything will be alright. Don't worry mukti ... Angel will be up soon

Mukti nodded and finally having a last glance at Nandini she moved out of the room

They came and saw dhruv and aliya having a evil smile while manik had called someone and everyone were concentrating on the conversation while they immediately understood and mukti went to manik and stood beside him while abhi lend his hand to cabir shoulder as he for the first time saw cabir's shoulder down maybe due to the guilt of seeing his angel in a bad place

Manik put the phone on the speaker and everybody lended their ears to their conversation

Manik : How are you Shivaay ??

So Manik called Shivaay and Shivaay shocked seeing manik calling him and he immediately exited the buissness summit with his brothers so that they can together have a conversation in a secluded corner

Shivaay : What happened ? Do Nandini want to talk to us ... She is fine right ???

Shivaay asked curiously while manik took the phone and spoke in a dangerously deep tone.

Manik : Do you remember my threat that I gave you in the office . So I think it is the time to show it practically . Big Mistake you made by making Nandini cry now I will get it even so you know I called Mrs Anika Oberoi and she being such a nice person accepted my proposal of coming to meet me and how generous of her to bring both of her sister in law's with her so I thought to make it even ...... How about that Mr Oberoi

Shivaay , Omkara and Rudra immediately looked at each other in shock and Omkara immediately started dialing Gauri , Bhavya and Anika's number while Shivaay spoke with anger dripping from his voice

Shivaay : youuuuuuuuu.... How dare you .. how bloody hell dare you do that ?? You don't know me

Manik laughed and said

Manik : Hahaaaa ohhh guess what I don't care  . Go ask people about manik Malhotra .

Shivaay : Don't test my patience Manik . I didn't do anything to princess heck I can't do anything to her . She is dear to me too ...

With this Manik's anger reached the seventh roof and he shouted

Manik : Dare you take her name again . I am gonna dig your grave right here . Don't take her name

Shivaay : You just leave my wife , Gauri and Bhavya .. Dont you dare do anything to them . I will destroy youuuu

Manik : Confidence !!! I like it  when people have confidence but don't you think you speak too much . Ok I think lets have some fun Shivaay . So you are three brothers right so I will give you three locations go and see maybe mrs Oberoi is there  . So get set goooooooooo

Shivaay : Don't you dare cut the phone.  Manikkkkk

But seem like manik cut the phone already and sat on the sofa with a thud with a hands on his head while cabir took the phone and sent the three decided locations to them while dhruv came to manik and put a hand on his shoulder

Dhruv : we didn't do anything wrong buddy . They devils hurted our angel we have not even touched them or their girls. We are just making them feel what it feel's like to know your life is in danger

Manik breathed a deep breath and came to cabir and without a second thought hugged him to his life while cabir who was in a desperate need of it  patted manik's back and manik gave him the assurance

They broke the hug and then manik said

Manik :: Make sure Mrs Oberoi doesn't have any discomfort or any clue of this plan . I don't want them to suffer for their husbands mistakes . This is just for those idiots to know what I felt seeing barfii like that . This is just their hell so that they can feel the suffocation I felt but I don't want any discomfort to the ladies make sure they are comfortable and safe

Cabir patted his shoulder

Cabir : I know manik you never intend to hurt someone but they called for it . How in great hell after that panic attack in Malhotra industries  they thought sending a letter that too in angel's office is a good idea . How can somebody be soo ruthless and dumb at the same time . Bloddy idiots ..... Don't feel guilty we are not doing anything wrong . We are not even giving them a quater of  the pain they gave our angel . So no need to feel guilty .

Manik : hmmmmmm. I will just go and check on  barfii till then don't pick up their phones and I will myself contact them when I come down ....... Handel everything in the hotel abhi . Be in constant touch with them . I repeat myself no worry or no tension to the ladies . They should be treated as we treat  our girls . Be in a constant touch with the guards   so that  they don't feel any discomfort . If necessary talk to them and make excuses . It is just a matter of few hours ...

Manik said this and mukti's anger broke it's fence and she bursted as she couldn't understand why the hell they are not being brutal with them .

Mukti : Go hell with these girls . Why do you care so much ?? Did they care for our angel?? Did they think before sending that letter to her ? what if you didn't reach on the right time ? Nandini kuch kar leti to apne aap ko us panic attack mein ?? And here we like idiots are obsessing about their girls ...?? Why Manik whyyyy?

Manik turned and cupped mukti face and wiped her tears which spilled from her anger red eyes and said in calm tone

Manik : I can't let my barfii down . I just can't

With this manik went from their to his room  while everyone rooted at their place and abhi went to contact the guards of the hotel to inquire about the girls and aliya hugged mukti  to calm her down and knock some sense in her . While cabir and dhruv just sat to deny the Oberoi's calls

Manik moved up to see Nandini snuggled in the duvet keeping his mufler close to her neck . He went their pecked her forehead and then just kissed on her neck where his mufler was kept while Nandini just relaxed more in his touch and didn't react due to her sound sleep

Manik moved down to her feet which were hidden in the duvet and moved the duvet up to see them swollen which he guessed as he knew that she kicks her feet in panic attacks which causes swelling in her feet . He lovingly carressed them and went to get hot water wipes from washroom . He bought a bucket of hot water and dipped a towel in it and wrapped it on Nandini's feet to lessen the swelling . He did it about 10-15 times while Nandini relaxed and relaxed as her pain lessened . Her peaceful face gave it all.

Manik despite of her being in sleep knew when she was at peace just by her face . He emptied the bucket in the washroom and bought a antespectic tube to put on her feet

Manik : ( whispering sitting against her feet ) How much more pain will my barfii endure . Why did it happen ? Why couldn't I do anything ? Why ? Sorry barfii forgive me I will make everything right now and trust me Nandini , I will not do anything which is not morally correct . I need to teach them a lesson this time . I ignored when they barged in our house like that . I ignored when they barged in the office like that . I even ignored when you suffered first attack because of them but this was my limit barfii. I can't bear your this condition . They should now know what happens when you mess with my family . I will not do anything wrong  barfii . Believe me okk . I know you are sleeping but  barfii I am talking to your heart and I have confessed everything to that heart . Aapko bataye bina kuch nhi kiya manik ne aur kuch galat nhi kar raha manik . I love you.

With this manik stood up and pecked Nandini forehead and moved out feeling much lighter as the guilt of doing something without telling Nandni was lifted from his heart . He knew that their hearts did the talking and now he knew that unconsciously she knows....

Manik moved down and asked abhi about the girls and abhi narrated him all their activities

In hotel

Anika , Gauri and Bhavya reached there and were stopped in the entrance and were asked for their phones and purses as they said no electronic gadget and leather is allowed inside the private cabin booked for them to which Anika said

Anika : but how will we contact the person we are here to meet ?

Guard : maa'm I am there to contact them on your behalf . Mr Cabir Dhawan has told us that he will be late by a hour so you all just wait and please make yourself comfortable and do tell me if you need anything but you need to deposit your phones and purses here

Gauri : ok if you insist

With this Anika , Gauri and Bhavya gave their phones and purses to the guards who then leaded them to the meeting area of the hotel where a comfortable space was arranged for them so that they don't feel any discomfort and there was all kinds of snacks for them . With this guards left them and Anika , Gauri and Bhavya settled

Anika : It is a meeting area . Maybe Nandini or her friends are coming to talk .

Bhavya : Ya bhabhi I feel that too maybe they want to talk to us as Shivaay bhaiya , on bhaiya and rudra have already made them so angry and they all some issues between them so they thought to talk to us

Gauri : but what was the need of taking  our phones  ??

Anika : Maybe due to the hotel rules . I think these private meeting rooms have no phones or leather allowed

With this Anika , Gauri and Bhavya started talking while they were at the service of many waiters who constantly inquired them about their comfort and for food . They took some snacks since they were waiting for a long time

Abhi finsihed narrating about the Oberoi daughter in law's and manik sighed in relief

Manik :. Make sure they don't get to know  anything about the plan . Ask the guard to arrange some lady waitress or manager to talk to them and make them busy also arrange some lady staff there so that they don't get intimidated by our male bodyguards.

Aliya : Manik we will make sure of that . Don't worry so much about them and call those idiots lets see where they have reached or have they found our their defeat or not

Here Shivaay , Omkara and rudra all were in seperate cars travelling to the three locations as fast as they could and each one of them was constantly contacting either manik or their wife's phone out of which none answered

Shivaay reached his destination and found it a open ground he shouted for Anika , Gauri and Bhavya but got no response so he called his two brothers on conference to know what they saw at their location

Shivaay : om , rudra I have reached the location . There is no one here what about you too . Did you find them . Are they safe ??

Omkara : Shivaay mine is a open ground.  No person is here .

Rudra : mine too bhaiya . Where the hell has he kept our wife's . Such a jerk to do that to ladies .

Shivaay : exactly . The girls are not in any of the locations. It was a low blow by that Malhotra . Ladkiyon ko pareshan kar rha hai ... Such a ruthless guy gets his anger out on girls.

Omkara : Shivaay how much will Anika bhabhi , Gauri and Bhavya would be scared . What if he had tied them and what if he assaults them . He seems like a cracked nut to me .

Rudra : bhaiya why can't we get police involved . Let that black soul suffer . Lets get him arrested . He has kidnapped our wife's . How in earth can he do that ?

Shivaay : I am not doing anything because he has both our wife's and princess with him . Anika , Gauri and Bhavya are still aware of him and will try to fight him and his immoral behaviour . Agar unhein harm karega to vo phir bhi fight karengi but princess she will suffer so much . He is wrapped her around his finger . I know these kind of boys bloddy two faced . Princess ko torture karega agar humne aisa kiya toh .

Omkara : But Shivaay our wife's  they are in danger . What if he does something to them . Princess to phir bhi he loves but our wife's they are in deep danger . Pata nhi kitne torture kar rha hoga unpe

Rudra : bhaiya enough let's call him one last time and if he doesn't answer we will go to his house with police . They will be forced to give our princess and wife's back and our whole family will be protected .  Aap princess ki chinta mat karo , I will make sure he doesn't harm her in any way . I am scared about Bhavya bhai

Shivaay : okay let's do this for our wife's and princess safety

How was the update guys ??

What do you think about manik's plan ??

Mukti's  little flashback ??

Shivaay and manik's anger conversation ??

How was manik's care and confession towards Nandini ?

Do you think the conversation between Oberoi's was justified or has they completely lost the meaning of manik's action and misinterpreted it ??

What will happen next ?? Share your thoughts ??

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