Mr. Perfect & Ms. Imperfect

By StubbornCap

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Raina story ❤️ To know more peep inside😉 Update on Monday, Wednesday and Friday ☺️ More

Author Note
Character Sketch
Resort Wali
Naina Ah Singh
Kashmir Main, Tu Kanyakumari
Safar Was Tooo Suffering
Naina Amma Naina Amma Maan Jao
Two Naina
Confusion Hi Confusion🤪
Sibling's Birthday.....
Ahluwalia Reunion
Hospital Wala Drama
The One And Only Money Minded Dracula RV
Language Class
School Friend

Confusion Continues...

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A girl was following Rajveer...Rajveer was escaping from her when he collide with Naina...He asks for help...Naina turns and sees the girl and girl sees her and gets shock...

Girl- Naina Di

Naina- Kaam khatam hua (nods in No) Better hoga kaam pe dhyan do (looks at Rajveer) aur ladko me aapne taste ko improve karo

Rajveer- What do you mean

Naina- I mean she has to improve her taste in choosing man

Rajveer- Kya kaami hai mujhme

Naina- Ek ho toh batau na

Rajveer- Khud jaise Miss Perfect ho

Naina- Oh please I am at least better than you

They starts telling each other's fault....People present in market looks at them and enjoys free show....Thinking it's an opportunity that girl runs away...Inspector Smith who was passing by stops seeing crowd standing...

Inspector Smith(bit loudly)- What's going on ?

People makes a way and he sees Rajveer and Naina were bickering like 5yrs old kid...

Inspector Smith- Naina

Listening his voice Naina and Rajveer looks at him and then each other...

Naina- Uncle

Inspector Smith- Is this right to argue on midway of market ? (Both of them nods...He looks at people) Back to your work...

Inspector Smith goes and Naina walks and Rajveer was following her...Naina goes at Cafe and Rajveer also enters to cafe....Naina sits and Rajveer joins her...

Rajveer- Naina Suno

Naina- Kya sunna baki hai !

Rajveer- Bahut important baat hai (she just rolls her eyes) Maine Naina ko Yudi ko kiss karte hue dekha

Naina(throw fist on table and stands up and loudly)- What the hell ? Have you lost your brain ? Wait a min you don't have brain...

Rajveer- I swear I saw it with my own eyes

Naina- Wow (She Claps) You saw me kissing Yudi (pokes on his head) you're insane

Rajveer- What ? I said I saw Naina

Naina- You're Impossible....I am only Naina remember ?

Rajveer- You idiot (pokes on her head) I am talking about Naina Ahluwalia, Your bestfriend

Naina- Naina Ahluwalia (suddenly realisation hits her) Oh you mean Naina Ahluwalia (he nods) Forget it (he looks at her) it's her right...(he looks at her in questioning manner) I mean it's don't right (looks here and there) I'll talk with her...(murmurs) Shalu ko kaise bolu khudke boyfriend ko kiss na kare

Rajveer- Kuch bola tumne

Naina- Haan mera matlab kuch sunna tumne

Rajveer- Nahi mujhe laga tumne kuch bola

Naina- Aise kaise lag sakta hai

They starts they're bickering....Lolita comes and asks them to be quiet as customers are getting disturb...They both Excuse themselves and goes out....Both of them goes back to resort...Naina was walking in anger whereas Rajveer was following her like lost puppy...Alekh and Rajesh were discussing something when Naina reaches near them...She takes chocolate from reception table and starts eating....Rajesh and Alekh looks at her...Rajveer comes..

Rajveer- Tum shamj kyun nahi rahi ho (she continues eating and ignore him) Naina meri baat pe yakeen karo (she rolls her eyes) Naina please try to understand woh tumhe dhokha de rahe hai

Rajesh- What ? kaun dhokha de raha ?

Alekh- Naam bata usko main abhi thikane lagta hu

Rajveer- Naina aur Yudi

Alekh & Rajesh- What

Naina- Haaan mera boyfriend meri bestfriend ko kiss kar raha tha...

Alekh and Rajesh understands and Naina makes faces....Yudi comes out to get fresh air and joins them...Rajveer sees him and hold his collar...Yudi was in confusion...Alekh and Rajesh tries to free Yudi and Naina hits her hand on her forehead...Rajveer was about to hit Yudi, he stops listening Naina...

Naina- Enough...Chordo usse...I trust Yudi and Naina....(she looks into his eyes) But I won't trust a stranger or let any stranger to hurt my family....

Rajveer- Afterall that we have been through you still think me as stranger (he holds her shoulder) Tell me

Naina- Leave me

Naina whined in pain Alekh and Rajesh were about to say but she stops them through eyes...

Rajveer- I want my answer dammit

Alekh and Rajesh were standing helpless and Yudi who couldn't see her in pain goes near Rajveer and keeps his hand on his shoulder....

Yudi- Dude you're hurting her

Rajveer- Stay Out of it

Yudi- No I won't

Rajveer- Why do you care

Yudi- She is my girlfriend....Remember ?

Rajveer- Really ? You have audacity to say this....You should remember that she is your girlfriend (points at Naina) and not her bestfriend

Yudi- What 

Naina- Enough of drama (holds Yudi's hand and drag him with her) Let's go

Both of them goes....Rajveer gets angry but he didn't knew reason...Alekh and Rajesh shakes their as they can't do anything...

Rajveer- Aap donno kuch bolo na

Rajesh- Alekh Ek bar stock check karna

Alekh- Ji Baba

Rajveer- Yeh kya bol rahe ho

Alekh- Tumne hu bola na bolne toh bol diya

Rajveer- Alekh tumhari behan aur uski friend ki life kharab kar raha hai woh ladka (looks at Rajesh) Uncle aap hi shamjao na Naina ko woh ladka Uske liye sahi nahi hai

Rajesh- Toh kaun sahi hai ? Kaun Naina ko handle kar sakta ? Batao

Alekh- Tumhe fikar kis bat ki ho rahi meri behan date kar rahi ya Uski bestfriend ke dil tutne ki

Rajveer(non chalant)- Naina ke dil tutne ki

Rajesh and Alekh looks at each other and then at Rajveer who realise he should be sad on Naina aka Shalini is dating Yudi and not on Naina's heart break....Rajveer excuse himself and goes in his room...He sees Naina and Yudi were in garden area...

Naina- Sorry Yudi mere wajahse

Yudi-it's alright sisto

Naina and Yudi hugs each other and Rajveer sees this and gets angry...

Rajveer- Itni stupid ladki hai...easily baaton me aa gayi...Mujhe hi kuch karna padega...Naina ko sach batana padega...

Rajveer was thinking how to make Naina realise that Yudi isn't one for her...Yudi goes back to his work and Huda enters and circles his hand around Naina's neck...Rajveer sees and smirks...

Rajveer- Tumhara ab break up karwa ke rahuga...

Rajveer goes towards Yudi's room and tells him that Huda is flirting with his girlfriend.....Yudi ignore him as he thinks Huda is flirting with Naina....Rajveer drags Yudi along with him....Yudi sees Shalini, who comes from hospital joins Naina and Huda....Trio were laughing...Shalini and Naina taps on Huda's shoulder and he smiles sheepishly...Rajveer and Yudi goes near them And separates Huda from girls...

Huda- Yudiye Kya hua

Naina- Mr. Shekhawat aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

Yudi- Dude how can you flirt with my girl ?

Shalini- What nonsense

Huda- Yudiye pagla gaya hai kya....(points at Shalini) Behan jaisi meri

Rajveer- Main Naina ki baat kar raha hu

Four of them understands what he meant....Shalini, Yudi and Huda looks at Naina and she looks at Rajveer...

Naina- Karega flirt kya kar loge?

Yudi- Naina

Naina- Yudi do you mind if Huda flirts with me ?

Yudi- Obviously no

Shalini- Yudi (she glares him) Naina

Naina- Naina I know you love Yudi and Yudi also loves you (she takes they hand and joins them) I am happy for you...(Both of them looks at her...she murmurs) aise mat dekho (points through eyes towards Rajveer) Chacha Chaudhary aapni investigation na chalu kare aur meri identity khatre me na aaye

Shalini- Naina you're so niceeee

Yudi- Yes Naina you're such a sweetheart(he was about to hug her but Rajveer stops him) What's wrong ?

Rajveer- You won't ditch (looks at Shalini) Naina right ? (He nods in yes) Ok (looks at Shalini) I am happy as you get one whom you love...(Naina goes and Rajveer sees her) I'll be back

Shalini- Rajveer wait

Yudi- Huda you go

Rajveer- No I can handle her (looks at them) trust me (trio nods) Thanks Guys

Rajveer runs behind Naina...

Yudi- Don't you think Rajveer is more interested in Naina

Shalini- Exactly he came for girl who runs this resort and ends up with confusion it's me

Yudi- Still He didn't care for you...He only cared about Naina

Huda was listening them....Alekh comes and joins them..

Alekh- Kya ho raha hai

Yudi tells him everything and they look at Huda who was still standing silently...They felt bad as they knew he may flirt with anyone but he really loved Naina...

Alekh- Tum theek ho

Huda- Haan mujhe Phoolan ki fikar ho rahi...Kal 23rd hai na

Alekh- Mere dimag se nikal gaya

Yudi- Shit

Shalini- Hume Rajveer aur Naina ko alag rakhna hoga

Alekh- I don't think iski zarurat hai

Huda- Usne Phoolan ko kuch bola toh kya hoga

Shalini- Wait usse kaise pata hoga kal kya hai

Yudi- Haan aur I don't think he can know anything about it...

Four of them thinks it's impossible for Rajveer to know what's tomorrow so they relax and goes back to they work....Rajveer stands beside Naina who was standing facing sea....

Rajveer- I am Sorry par I think you don't deserve a jerk like him

Naina- Youean Yudi is jerk (he nods) Do my friend deserves a jerk ?

Rajveer- No I didn't mean that way...What I meant was

Naina(interrupts)- Let it be....You just say things and don't mean it...

Rajveer- Naina I really didn't mean that (she looks at him) Ok I do agree what I said was bit mean but I was just teasing you...

Naina- Do you have stamp paper and pen ?

Rajveer- No why

Naina- I wanted to write on stamp paper and give it to you stating that you're a stranger to mean and nothing more or less...

Naina goes and Rajveer curse himself for saying her that things.....It was evening when Ali and Pooja comes back and asks at reception about other...Receptionist says everyone is bit busy will get free within hour....One waiter comes and keeps Naina's adhar card on table....Pooja sees and pulls Ali's sleeves and asks him to looks at card through eyes....When he sees he looks at her in shock and she nods...Everyone have they dinner and talk for while and goes to sleep....It was mid night Naina slowly comes out of her room wearing black hoodie and covering her face...She reaches at resort back gate...She was about to open when someone puts hand on her shoulder....She was about scream when person covers her mouth with his hand....She looks at that person and blinks her eyes...

Rajveer- I knew tum raat ko bhagogi isliye company dene aaya (He was still covering her mouth with his hand) Chup kyun ho kuch bolo na

She stamps on his feet with full force, he was about to shout in pain when she covers his mouth...

Naina- Chillao mat (he nods) i don't need your company...

Rajveer holds her hand and removes from his mouth...

Rajveer- Are you sure

Naina- Yes now go back

Rajveer- You won't regret right ?

Naina- I never regret on anything..

Rajveer smiles sheepishly and holds her from her waist....She looks at him....He puts her hoodie cap on and covers her face...

Rajveer(shouts loudly)- Chor Chor chor chor chor

Naina stamps on his feet and closes his mouth and takes him with her but it was late because listening his voice everyone gathers and starts searching for robber...Naina and Rajveer goes to terrace and hides and looks down...

Alekh- Baba (looks here and there) Gudiya missing hai...

Rajesh- Aise kaise yahi hogi dekho

Shalini- Main room me dekh aati hu

Yudi- Rukho main bhi aata hu...

Huda- Main gazebo dekh aata hu

Ali- Hum is taraf dekh aate hai

Pooja- Main bhi chalti hu

Suri Ji- Waheguru Naina Puttar ka dhayan rakhi

Everyone searches but doesn't find her when Huda notice Rajveer is also missing...

Huda- Rajveer kaha hai !

Yudi- I thought Tumhare sath hoga

Ali and Pooja comes and joins them...

Huda- Rajveer dikha kya

Pooja- Shahrukh toh kabse out of range hai

Ali- Aapne phele kyun nahi bataya

Yudi- Shit matlab Naina ke sath usse bhi dhudhna hoga

Huda- Yudiye chal jaldi dhudhte

Yudi, Huda, Ali again starts searching whereas Pooja and Shalini stands beside Rajesh as he wasn't in good health...

Alekh- Baba aap rest kariye Gudiya ke milte hi inform karuga

Rajesh- Alekh jaldi dhundho jate ho na aaj kya hai...

Alekh nods and goes....Rajesh and Suri Ji starts chanting God's name and prays for Naina's safety...On other hand Rajveer and Naina were watching them...

Rajveer- Hum chup kyun rahe hai

Naina- Kyunki main nahi chahti hume koi saath dekhe

Rajveer- Niche sab pareshan ho rahe hai

Naina- Toh maine bola tha chillane

Rajveer- Toh aur kya karta tum sath le nahi ja rahi thi

Naina- Sath nahi le jaugi toh chillaoge (he nods) Tab akkal ghas charne gayi thi jab bich raste mujhe cab se utar diya tha

Rajveer- Tum khud utar gayi thi

Naina- Toh kya karti beth aur insult sunti

Rajveer- Insult karne ka irada nahi tha mera

Naina- Yaaa Right

Rajveer(looks down)- Naina ke Baba ki halat sahi nahi lag rahi

Naina- What (she checks) Shit shit

She runs downstairs and Rajveer also goes behind her...She goes and hug Rajesh and starts crying like a baby...Shalini and Pooja informs others and they also comes....Rajveer also joins them...Naina was still crying...

Alekh- Shhhh bassss

Huda- Phoolan dekh kaise tamatar ho gayi ho ro ke

Yudi- Naina please

Shalini- Calm down

Ali- Aap kyun ro rahi hai

Pooja- Bass bhi kar jhalli kitna royegi

Rajesh- Naina it's alright (cups her face) see I am fine....Buddha ho chuka hu na isliye

Naina(sobbing)- Sorry Baba

Rajesh(looks at everyone)- Tum sab apne kamare me jao

Shalini- Par

Pooja- Naina

Alekh- Tum log jao subha baat karege (looks at Rajveer) I hope tumhara isme koi haath na ho (he just looks at him) Rest karo...

Everyone goes except Alekh and Huda....Naina was still crying in Rajesh's arm...

Rajesh- Naina Singh Ahluwalia stop crying it's an order...

Listening this, Naina wipes her tears and looks at him...

Alekh- Dubra raat ko beach ja rahi thi na (she nods)

Huda- Phoolan mujhe bolti main aata sath

Rajesh- Naina dubra Aisa maat karna

Alekh- Haan pata hai na Baba tujhe na dekhe toh dar jate hai

Huda- Bol aise raha jaise khud kaafi Theek tha...

Naina- Bhaiya Sorry

Alekh- Gudiya bass bhi kar tu theek hai yehi kaafi hai....

Huda- Phoolan ja ab soja

Rajesh-Naina mujhe meri room me chordna

Naina takes Rajesh in his room and goes...Alekh was standing and Huda keeps his hand on his shoulder...

Huda- Tu fikar maat kar kal pura din Uske saath rahuga...

Alekh- Bass kal ka din nikal jaye...

Rajesh, Alekh, Huda, Shalini and Yudi were worried about tomorrow's day whereas Ali and Pooja were excited and Rajveer was clueless....

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