Love Obstacles (✔)

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Sometimes life gives u obstacles. Obstacles that may seem unfair or too extreme. But you are given choices... More

Synopsis
Charcters Sketch
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OPINION
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Important
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Let's talk
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Predestined
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The silent God's
Shoutouts
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And the Love story begins♥️
☆Award☆
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Manan
Bonus Chapter 1
Shoutout
And the Love story begins

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MAHLOTRA MANSION (MUMBAI)

When nyonika was talking to manan Ayann who  heard there talks. Nyonika see ayan she got excited and said

Nyonika- you know ayan you are gonna became grandfather there is someone is gonna come in our house who is gonna call you dadi.

Ayan just go nd sits on bed without speaking anything

Nyonika(crying) - Ayan you are not happy with the news ..Ayann please forget all the things you also know manik was not wrong it was you who is wrong Ayan please call my son back I want to be with them in this happienss.

Aayan(tears in his eyes)- Nyonika I also want my son to be back with....I can't even describe you my feelings how happy I am,  knowing that they are gonna became parents I am very happy:;  they both went through all alone now finally they are getting there happienss back I am so happy for them and I am very guilty nyonika for what all I did  how can I do this to my own son just because of this my superior  ego....In my ego nyonika I destroyed everything destroyed my family.....without manik I am no one nyonika even I want him back with me. ... you know when he left na than I came to know about his importance in my life....I am worst father can anyone have na nyonika I did very bad with son no father does this na I am the worst father and worst husband can anyone have I am very sorry nyonika beacuse of me you have to go through alot..(he is crying by now)

Nyonika (crying a bit)- Ayann whatever you did it was wrong I understand I very well knew one day you will definitely understand the value of manik in your life in our life....I so happy Ayann plz bring my son back

Ayan- I also want that but I can't

Nyonika- why??

Ayan(tears)- Do you think they will forgave me after what all I did to them, I said manik to get remarried  knowing how much he loves Nandini,  I always treated Nandini as outsider in her own house,  I said manik that he is no one beside my name...how low I went na nyonika I worst father nyonika.... I hate myself so much nyonika I was so busy with myself with my success that I forgot about my own son I forgot that beacuse of him only my company reached in this heights.... it was just week when he left me than only I came to know how wrong I was to do all this with my kids...

Nyonika- Ayaan when u know that you were wrong than why didn't you talkd to about them we could have called them earlier you know na manik he would have definitely forgave you he misses u very much

Ayaan- I know he would have forgave me but I am not able to forgive my self nyonika.... the company he is working with is my friends company Ram Mehta you must be knowing ...when manik went there for interview Ram called me asking why he is here leaving my company I said beacuse he himself want this I just told manik the truth thatt he is no one Beside my name so manik left and I didn't stopped him...ram shouted on me telling I did wrong but that time my ego was at peak I didn't listened to him but as the day passed I knew I was wrong i was very wrong whatever I did as father it was a huge mistake...I called Ram asking him about manik and Nandini he said they are happy I wanted to go to manik ask my forgiveness but I was so guilty about my deeds ram told me how manik and Nandini took care of him,  ram was just father figure to them he sent m some videos and all and I can see in them that the happienss I can't give to them they were happy in there own life and i don't them to come back here in the mess you know na Maa till now she feels whatever happened it's just because Nandini and I didn't wanted to them to feel bad they are happy there nyonika I don't want to destroy there happienss

Nyonika- who said manu won't be happy getting his father back he misses u so much ayan just talk to him once make all this clear I want my family back a happy family please ayan

Ayan- I will try till the time what are doing here?

Nyonika- what do u mean by that ayan?

Ayan- Are I mean why are u still sitting here get ready I Booked your flight to jaipur they both need you in this time and I know you also miss them so get ready the flight is after 3 hours

Nyonika- you are not coming Ayaan

Ayaan- I said na I will try but till the time you go they will be very happy to see you  get ready fast than I will drop you to the airport.

Nyonika didn't forced him more because she knewhe is very upset on himself ...So nyonika gets ready soon they both went downstairs where dadi was sitting there

Dadi- where are u both going?

Ayaan- dadi only nyonika is going

Dadi- where ?

Ayaan- she is going to jaipur to meet kids

Dadi(angrily)- why is nyonika going there? They left the house na then why you only said ayan that now we don't have any relation with them than why now she is going there

Ayann- Maa what are u saying they are our kids and we did wrong to them it was totally our fault Maa we did very wrong with our kids and you know maa today they gave us the happiness you are gonna became badi dadi now manan are accepting

Dadi- what?

Nyonika- yess Maa Nandini is pregnant

Dadi- how can is this be possible she was toh impotent na than how can be is possible

Nyonika- Maa what are u saying you are not happy with this you only wanted this na the hier for your family and now when its happening than why you are not happy

Dadi(angrily) - why should I be happy what they did to me how was manik and Nandini talking to me that day you don't remember ayan I toh feel there is some misunderstanding there Nandini can't be mother

Ayaan- Maa what are you saying they were right we did wrong to them you asked manik to get remarried knowing he loves Nandini very much just because Nandini was not able to conceive but Maa now toh its happening than what's the problem

Dadi(angry)- what's my problem you are asking me this don't you remember how much Nandini insulted me infront of my friends and how manik talked to he asked me that he will send me to ashram how can a grandson talk to her dadi like this I loved him so much still he didn't listened to me he is totally joru ka gulam Ayaan he will do whatever Nandini will say he is not like our old manik he changed and it's better he stay there no need to go there and bring him let them live alone they deserve it

Ayaan(shouting) - enough! Maa you are speaking nonsense you are saying they deserve to be there like seriously in this 3 months don't you miss them a bit...we did very wrong maa understand the fact we tried to separate them knowing that they can't live without each other maa and as a father what I did was also wrong. .
And I can totally feel u didn't missed them a bit you Maa I think you need time to think and evaluate all this what's wrong and what is right you should go to ashram definitely you will get a peace of mind there..Maa I booking the tickets for u

Maa- you are gonna send your mother to the ashram just because of manik and Nandini who did very wrong with you

Ayaan- they didn't do anything wrong it was us who did wrong Maa and I seriously feel you need Time to think all this here it won't be possible

Maa- it's fine I am going to ashram don't worry and today just because of that Nandini I lost my son too why did I get married that Nandini to my manik only and she went towards her room

Nyonika- Ayaan you shouldn't have done this

Ayaan- Nyonika I did right thing you know living here and she talking with her friends and her friends filling her mind totally she seriously need some alone time let her go she will understand ....come now don't thing too much you are getting late

Manan house Jaipur

Manan are just back from the clinic after getting regular checkup of Nandini where doctor told them that there is no any such complications just she has take proper care of her and eat healthy food while she told every thing he is to take care of Nandini in the pregnancy . Manik is happy knowing there are no complications now they can happily enjoy there moment by together.

Nandini- Manik why are you not going to office? I am telling you na I can take care of myself

Manik- Nandini I told you na I am not going office I am gonna stay with you I don't want to leave you alone in this time please Nandini

Nandini- Manik just listen to me na I will manage myself how many days you won't go to office one or other day you have to go office na

Manik- You don't worry I will talk to Ram uncle and will work from home if there is something important there than only I will go office and now I don't want any discussion on this topic Nandini

Nandini(baby pout) - ohkk

Manik(smiles)- baby you know you are gonna have a baby and still u behave like baby so now I have to take care of two babies

Nandini- manik I am big girl I am not a baby

Manik- Aww you will always be my first baby

Nandini- I love you mani

Manik- I love u too my baby now come sit over here and take rest till the time I will cook something for you

Nandini- you will cook mani?

Manik- yeahh any problem

Nandini- No but I am not hungry now we just had our breakfast I don't want to eat now

Manik- so what do you want to do now than?

Nandini(thinking)- ummmm. I don't know

Manik- ohkk no problem I have a plan

Nandini(excitedly)- what?

Manik- let's watch movie

Nandini- yeshh ohkk but which movie

Manik- yours favourite

Nandini- yeahh jawani hai deewani

Manik- yeahh come now

They both sat on the bed with laptop in between and manik plays the movie they both sat Nandini puts her head on the manik chest and they started to watch movie


The time passes in between manik was kissing her forehead time to time making her smile the movie finishes.

Manik- ohkk now the movie is finished jaan you rest here for sometime I will bring something to eat I know u are hungry

Nandini- yehh I am hungry but I will be coming with u I won't be sitting here alone I will help you in cooking

Manik- No I will cook for you you are gonna rest you are not coming out

Nandini(cranky)- No na manik I want come out

Manik- ohkk come with me but you are just gonna sit on one place while I will do the cooking deal

Nandini(smiling)- ohkk come

They went out they were just going to enter in the kitchen when they heard the sound of doorbell they both give look to each other thinking who it would be so manik went towards the door and opened the door and seeing the person standing there his happienss is having no bound while Nandini came little forward and smiles brightly looking at the person

Manik(having tears) - Mom app I missed you so much nd he hugged her tightly

Nyonika(crying)- Even I missed you very much manu she kissed his forehead

Manik- Mom How are you ? All is fine I mean you here suddenly

Nyonika- I am totally fine and can't I come to meet my kids

Manik- yess mom it's your house only you can come here anytime I missed so much mom

Nyonika- I missed you btw where is my daughter

Manik- she is here only(pointing towards Nandini)

Nyonika open her arms Nandini come running and hugged nyonika tightly both were crying as they are meeting after long time

Nandini- Maa I missed you so much

Nyonika- I also missed u beta how are you  ? You are feeling well na

Nandini- yess Maa I am fine and now toh I am totally fine after meeting you

Nyonika smiles and kissed her forehead

Nandini- come inside Maa

Nyonika came inside both manik and Nandini are very happy to find nyonika there they all sat down and started to talk

Nyonika- I missed you both very much and when today I got this news I can't control myself to coming here

Nandini- thanku so much maa for coming I missed u alot

Nyonika - what happened manik you not happy to see me

Manik- no mom I am very happy I missed you like anything it's just you alone I mean...

Nyonika- you mean dad right?

Manik just nods his head nyonika did spoke further

Manik- Are mom no need to be sad I understand he doesn't want to see me I know

Nyonika- No manik there is nothing like this your dad misses you very much

Manik(dejectedly)- Mom than why he is not here

Nyonika- beacuse he is not able to forgive himself he feels if he will come here so he will destroy your happiness he is very much guilty about his deeds he misses you very much he never spoke but he loves you  he thinks he is the worst father anyone can have

Manik- Mom than why didn't he called me once in these 3 months

Someone- Because he is an idiot

Someone spoke from behind three of them turns there to find Ram Mehta standing there

Manan smiles looking at him they both goes towards him and hugged him

Nandini- I missed you uncle you went out without meeting me

Ram- I m sorry na the meeting was urgent btw congratulations to you both I am so happy for you both

Nandini- thanku uncle

Manik- thanku uncle but how do you know? as you are just back from London

Ram- your dad told me this news

Manik(shocked) - Dad

Nandini- manik first let uncle come inside then we can talk manik nodded his head ram came inside he saw nyonika there so he just smiles while nyonika also passed the smile

Manik- uncle now tell me how you know dad I mean I am not getting it

Nandini- yess uncle how you know dad

Ram- Ayaan and I were in same college we are very good friends when you came for the interview I got to know that time only about you being his son so I called him asking the same so he told me about all the things I shouted on him telling him he did wrong but that time he was so blind in success I said him that very soon you will gonna understand than you will be gonna very guilty about your deeds but he just shrugs this off in his superior ego but after some days he called me back he was very guilty he was crying I asked he said he you were right I was wrong I can't be the Good father for manik I said him come here to take u back but he said no beacuse you are happy here he doesn't want to spoil your happiness....you know manik he used to call me daily asking about you and Nandini I used to tell them how we three bonded in this month he is so happy for you he is very guilty about the fact than he can't able to fulfill the duties of father towards you manik

Manik(having tears)- So why didn't you told me all this earlier

Ram- I wanted to tell but Ayann told me not to but today when I talked to him he was feeling very low so I thought to tell you all and when I came so heard the conversation with your mom ....manik what I feel I know he did very wrong with you both but he is. very guilty you should forgave him

Manik- you know Maa and uncle when I came here I used to think dad told all things just like that he will definitely call us or will come to us but it never happened somewhere in my heart i accepted the fact that my father used to think all that about me thatt I am no one to him but Nandini used to tell me that there nothing like that dad will definitely come one day he will understand I just used to smile I missed my dad so much Mom I miss him

Manik was crying hard by now Nandini was sitting beside him also crying silently she just hugged him lightly and ruffling his hairs a bit

Nyonika- Manu kya tune apne dad ko maff kardiya

Manik- I was never angry on him Mom I was just hurt about the fact but now when u both told all I can't be more angry with him Mom

Nyonika- so will you come with me to Mumbai

Manik looks at Nandini asking him what to say Nandini just nods her head positively saying they should definitely go there

Manik- yess Mom we will definitely come with you

Nyonika- that's great I will be getting my family back together I am so happy

Nandini- yess Maa this is best news I can't wait to go back there in Mahlotra mansion I missed it very much

Nyonika- yeahh nd Nandini but make this thing clear you are not gonna work there a bit I will d everything you just and enjoy the phase

Nandini- Maa this is not fair I just got pregnant and none of you are letting me work I will get bore I will help you na Maa and I will not exhaust myself ...Mani tell maa na

Manik(smiling)- no Nandini Mom is right you are just gonna sit and enjoy we both will do everywork

Nandini(pouting)- that's not fair I am katti with you both

Manik and nyonika smiles looking the baby Nandini and they both signal each other and kissed Nandini cheek together stating " We love you Nandini"

Nandini(smiling)- I love you both

Ram- ohkk guys listen I booked the tickets the flight is 4 hours later

Nandini- uncle you also come with us na mani tell him na to come with us

Manik- yess uncle you should come with us

Ram- even I wanted to but I can't miss the work over here na but don't worry I will be coming meeting you very frequently cauz now I can't live without meeting you both for long so don't take tension I will be coming to Mumbai more frequently

Manik- ohkk uncle but we will miss you and thanku for believing me staying with me in all my hards

Ram- when I first saw you than only I saw how talented you are you did amazing for the company my company gonna miss the talent like you but I am happy that you are getting your family back

Manik just hugged him tightly

Ram- and Nandini I am gonna miss you a lot more than him I found daughter in you and the food by you and our talks everything

Nandini- uncle even I am gonna miss u alot but don't think if i am going you are gonna eat the sweets don't you dare eat sweets ohkk I am gonna call u daily asking dare to lie me ohkk and if someday you crave alot than only just 1 piece of sweet ohk

Ram- yess my daughter

Nandini just hug him while nyonika smiles looking the bonding of manan with ram she feel blessed the manan meet him

Nyonika- acha kids now go and pack the essentials while I will prepare the food I know you both haven't eated anything na

Manik - ohh shit how can I forget Nandini you must be very hungry na

Nandini- no manik

Manik- what no I know you are hungry come mom I will help you Nandini you go rest I will help mom and than will pack the bags

Nyonika- realx manik I will cook you both go freshen up and pack the bags i will manage here

Manik- you sure mom

Nyonika- yess

Nandini- mom I will help you na

Manik/nyonika(glaring her)- Nandini

Nandini- ohkk fine I won't help happy now you both

Manik/nyonika- yes very happy

Manan went towards the room while nyonika enters the kitchen to cook manan packed there bags they both are happy to get there family back they are content they got ready and ate the the food they last time give glance to there house as they spent beautiful time there there were tears in there eyes but the happienss is still high manik gave the keys to the landlady and they bid byee to her while Nandini called and informed tara about the same and asked tara to come Mumbai so tara said next week she will come to meet them while ram hugged both of them as he is not coming with them to airport as he is some work but he promised that very soon he will come to meet the manan and nyonika bid bye to him and left for the airport.

Mahlotra mansion Mumbai

Ayaan is sitting in the living room with there family photo in his hands there were slight tears in his eyes he was thinking all the things he did wrong he is very guilty about that when he was so involved in the thoughts he heard some sounds from the main door so he looked behind and found nyonika with manan standing there he was very shocked to see them but very happy to see manik after 3 months the tears started to flow hard from his eyes even for manik looking his dad after 3 months he is crying manik just went inside and hugged his father tightly and Ayaan hugged her back they both cried in between ayyan was saying sorry again and again ... breaking the hug

Ayann(crying) - I am sorry manik I did very wrong with you please forgive I am the worst father for you na I can't became good father for you I was so involve in business that i ignored you please forgive me

Manik- Dad please don't cry I am not angry with you anymore I forgive you there is no grudges left I know we can't turn the things back but we can make new and good memories na Dad so please forget all this and let's live together happily

Ayyan- Manik I did so wrong with you still you forgave me very easily

Manik (smiles a bit)- Its all because of Nandini she used to tell me of someone is really guilty about his or her deeds than forgive him or her also she used to tell me whatever dad did it was just in the heat of the moment when he will realize he will be guilty and manik please at that time don't let your ego win as it will destroy the relationship it will be better if you forget all the things and live happily ever after

Ayaan- just smiles looking at manik and hugged him once again I am so happy for you manik that you got Nandini as life partner

Manik- Yess dad even I am happy to find her

Ayaan goes towards Nandini and he folds his hands before her and speak

Ayaan- please forgive me Nandini you came to this house and accepted that we will treat you like our own daughter but what we did we just turned to never accepted you as a family still you didn't spoke anything and did your duty calmly I am sorry beta please forgive me

Nandini removes his hands and tells- No dad you don't have to do this I am not angry with you and now toh I am very happy that I got my father back

Ayaan(smiles)- thanku beta now you are my daughter first so if manik irritates you or does anything just come to me ohkk

Nandini(smiling)- yess dad I will for sure

Manik smiles looking them he also comes forward they 4 were smiling with full content when Nandini spoke

Nandini- Maa dad where is dadi I can't see her

Both nyonika and Ayaan beacame silent and give look to each other whereas manan understand from there looks about the reason

Ayyan- beta she still didn't understand the value of both in our lifes so she need some alone time to think all this so we sent her to ashram to spend time with herself

Manik and Nandini just silently nodded there head sadly thinking why dadi can't understand them when Ayaan spoke

Ayyan- Are btw congratulations you both you are gonna became parents I can't wait for the day when the small will come and will call me dadu

Manik- thanku dad even I can't wait I am also very happy and more happy because after the news of baby coming I got my family back so  its time  for double happienss

Nandini- yess seriously I m also very happy I can't describe in words the feeling is all together different

Nyonika- I am also very happy to get my family back

Ayyan- thanks to both for forgiving me and accepting me in your family after what all I did with you both

Nandini- dad now just forget the past and live in present we have to make many memories now

Manik- yess so come one a family hug

They four hugged each other tightly and they all are very happy the smile is never ending the reunion is worth all smiles the giggling sound which is giving music to their ears at all a perfect family.

Manan room

Manik(excitedly) - Nandini I am so happy today I can't even tell you I missed this place like anything thanku thanku it's all beacuse of you I got my family back

Nandini- manik what I did ?

Manik- are what you did you toh did everything you stay beside me in my every up and down you motivated you never let me break you always used to tell me it's just a bad time it will pass if you wouldn't be there with me na i was toh broken kabka its only you because of that I got all my happiness you are my shining star

Nandini(smiling)- than thanku to you beacuse Nandini is incomplete without manik there is no existence of Nandini without manik so thanku for trusting me  staying beside me I am also no one besides you you are my price charming my hero

Manik smiles he come forward and kisses her forehead than the cheeks he goes towards the lips and they both kissed each other passionately they break the kiss manik goes and sit on his knees and kissed her belly

Manik- baby I can't wait to hold you now you know you know you are very lucky for us as after you coming to our life we got our happy family back I love you so much please come soon dada misses u very much

Nandini smiles looking at manik - manik tell baby that mama is waiting for him or her and loves him very much

Manik stands and once and kisses her forehead

Manik- I love you very much jaan thanks for coming in my life

Nandini- I love you too manik thanks to you for accepting me in your life

Manik- forever

Nandini- Hamesha

The end

So the book ends here. This was the last chapter.

This is last chapter I hope everyone votes and comments here please silent reader atleast on this chapter do vote and comment I wrote  the longest update I think I deserve something..

I am so emotionl right it was the amazing journey with you all thanku to all readers for supporting me throughout this journey this journey won't be possible without you all ....I am gonna miss you all

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