Keesh- The Revenge Story(comp...

By Paruthivaishali

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keerti who wants to take revenge from her love Naksh and his wife Tara.... wants to know why... so stay tuned... More

Prologue character intro
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Starcast
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
Part 48
Part 49
Part 50
Part 51
Part 52
Part 53
Part 54
Part 55
Part 56
Part 57
Part 58
Part 59
Part 60
Part 61
Part 62
Part 63
Part 64
Part 65
Part 66
Part 67
Part 68
Part 69
Part 70
Part 71
Part 72
Part 73
Part 74
Part 75
Part 76
Part 77
Part 78
Part 79
Part 80
Part 81
Part 82
Part 83
Part 84
Part 85
Part 86
Part 87
Part 88
Part 89
Part 90
Part 91
Part 92
Part 93
Part 94
Part 95
Part 96
Part 97
Part 98
Part 99
Part 100
Part 101
Part 102
Part 103
Part 104
Part 105
Part 106
Part 107
Part 108
Part 109
Part 110
Part 111
Part 112
Part 113
Part 114
Part 115
Part 116
Part 117
Part 118
Part 119
Part 120
Part 121
Part 122
Part 123
Part 124
Part 125
Part 126
Part 128
Part 129
Part 130
Part 131
Part 132
Part 133
Part 134
Part 135
Part 136
Part 137
Part 138
Part 139
Part 140
Part 141
Part 142
Part 143
Part 144
Part 145
Part 146
Part 147
Part 148
Part 149
Part 150
Part 151
Part 152
Part 153
Part 154
Part 155
Part 156
Part 157
Part 158
Part 159
Part 160
Part 161
Part 162
Part 163
Part 164
Part 165
Part 166
Part 167
Part 168
Part 169
Part 170
Part 171
Part 172
Part 173
Part 174
Part 175
Part 176
Part 177
Part178
Part 179
Part 180
Epilogue

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Keerti enter in hospital running..

She stopped seeing Tara there..

Everyone look at her angrily..

Keerti anger got triggered seeing her..

She is shouting on nurse to tell her about Naksh condition..

Tara-(shout) I said tell me how's my husband now..I want to know about Naksh..

Keerti-(shout) he is not your husband..

Tara turn and look at her angrily..

Tara- Naksh is my husband..

Keerti- He marry you forcefully it's not his choice to marry you..you forced him so how's he is your husband..

Everyone look at Keerti..

Tara- you..

Keerti- Naksh ko hurt kiya hai tumne..kyu aayi ho tum yahan  Naksh ki family hai uske pass on one need you...

Tara- Really! Keerti you came between me and my Naksh always..vo meri wajah se nahi tumhari wajah se hurt hota hai..aaj bhi jo Naksh ke saath hua uski responsible tum ho..tum mere aur mere Naksh ke beech aa rahi thi I want to kill you but Naksh came in between to save you..

Keerti look at her..

Tara- maine galti ki hai toh me hi use sahi karungi..

Saying this she hold Keerti neck with her hands..

Everyone look at her shocked..

Tara- I'll kill you..then Naksh will accept me..

Naira and Saanjh hold Tara hand..

Naira- leave her..

Saanjh- have you gone mad..

Tara is not listening to them and choking her throat..

Akshara- Tara what are you doing?

Karthik- Tara leave Keerti..

Abeer- Tara don't do this.. you're doing wrong stop it

Keerti is trying to come out of her hold..

Tara- I'm doing what is right I should have killed her on her marriage day..

Akshara push her to save Keerti..

She move back and stumbled..

Keerti is coughing badly and having difficulty to take breath..

Tara look at Keerti angrily..

Tara- I'll kill you Keerti Goenka.

she move to go toward her when Swarna slap hard on her face..

Tara look at her shocked..

Tara- how dare you?

Swarna- kyu kya karogi tum mujhe bhi maar dogi jaise Manish ji ko mara tha..

Tara look at her shocked..

Keerti look at her mother shocked..Everyone look at her shocked..

Swarna- kis kis ko maaro gi tum stop it..

Karthik- maa..

Keerti- maa..aapko pata tha papa..

Karthik look at Keerti..

Karthik- what do you mean?

Swarna- haan mujhe sab pata tha..

Keerti look at her shocked..

Swarna- Naksh mujhe bhi nahi batata maine use apni kasam di thi tab usne mujhe sach bataya..he told me everything that why he married her and how Tara killed your papa...

Keerti look at her shocked..

Karthik stumbled listening that yash hold him..tears rolled down from Karthik eyes..

Yash-Karthik..

Naira look at him she also have tears in her eyes as she is also close to Manish.. As Keerti is for Naitik she is same for Manish they both were like friends.

Keerti- maa why didn't?

Swarna- Naksh ne mujhse promise liya tha ki me tumhe kuch naa batau..

Keerti- why maa..

She fall down on her knees..

Swarna- Keerti..

Akshara hold her in her arms..

Keerti- kyu nahi bataya mujhe?

Swarna bend down infront of her..

Swarna- you're moving on in your life after long time Naksh don't want to snatch your happiness again.. Naksh tumhe dobara hurt nahi karna chahta tha Keerti..

She have tears in her eyes..

Tara about to go toward keerti..

Abeer hold her wrist..

She look at him..his eyes is bloodshot red in anger..

Abeer- enough..

She struggle to move out from his hold..his grip got tight on her wrist..

Tara- Abeer leave..

Abeer-I said enough..

She is about to say something..

When Kabir entered there with cops..

Kabir- inspector arrest her..and make sure she will not escape again..

Tara look at him shocked..

Inspector- Mrs Tara you're under arrest.. and don't worry Kabir now our case got more  stronger against her.. 1st attempt to murder  and 2nd she escaped from police station harming a on duty lady constable..

Lady constable put cuffs in her hands..

Tara-(shout) no leave me..

She is moving back Abeer hold her hand tightly..

Constable put cuffs in her hand..

She look at Abeer angrily..

Tara- mom do something I'm your daughter in law..

Akshara- Tara..

Tara-mom

She move toward her.. she look at her thinking that she will save her but next moment she felt a hard slap on her cheek.
.
Akshara- ye mere Duggu ko hurt karne ke liye..

Then second slap Akshara- ye mere Naksh ko uski Khushiyon uski Keerti se alag karne ke liye.

Another slap..
Akshara- mere Naitik ko unki family se dur rakhne ke liye.

She is slapping continuously on her face..

Naitik hold her Akshara to stop her..

Naitik- Akshara bas..

She hug him crying..

Naitik look at Tara..

Naitik- leave Tara..

She look at him shocked..

Naitik-maine hi Naksh ko kaha tha to give you a chance. I thought mere bete ki life me sab thik ho jayega but you proved me wrong Tara..I was wrong and he was right you both are not ment to be together..

He joined his hands infront of her..

Naksh-Tara I'm saying you to leave Naksh alone.. leave him and let him live peacefully..

Tara- papa..

Naitik- I'm not your papa Tara..

She look at him shocked..

Kabir- inspector please take her away..

Inspector nods..

They hold Tara and leave from there..Tara look at them angrily..

Naitik- Akshara..

Akshara- Naitik hamara Duggu kyu..

Naitik- I don't know Akshara..I don't know..

They both have tears in their eyes..

Karthik is standing there numb shocked..

Doctor's come out of operation theatre..

Everyone look at them..

Keerti move toward them..

Keerti- Doctor Naksh vo kaisa hai..vo thik toh hai naa..

Doctor look at her..

Keerti- Doctor what happened? Please say something..

Doc- we did his operation but due to excessive blood loss he is still critical..

Other Doctor- we already told you Naksh is not well..we all know about his condition..

Doc- we need to do blood transfusion as soon as possible...otherwise we will loose him..

Everyone look at him shocked

Keerti- no mere Naksh ko kuch nahi hoga Doctor please save him please..

Tears flowing from her eyes..she is feeling headache..

She joined her hand infront of Doctors..

Keerti- please save him Doctor I'll die without him..please

She fall unconscious on floor..

Everyone look at Keerti shocked..

Yash-(shout) Di..

He run toward her..Karthik look at Keerti..

Yash hold Keerti..

Yash-Di..

He patted on her face lightly..

Karthik- Keerti utho mat kar aisa please..

Karthik- Keerti..Keerti..

She didn't responded..

Abeer- Doctor check her please..

Doctor bend down and check her pulse holding her hand..

Doc-(shout) staff get stretcher fast..

Wardboy come there with stretcher..

Yash and Karthik put Keerti on stretcher..

Doctor- take her in emergency ward soon..

At the same time Two wardboy come out of operation theatre taking unconscious Naksh on stretcher..

Everyone look at Naksh..

They are taking Naksh toward ICU and Keerti toward emergency..

There stretcher crossed with eachother.. their stretcher are so close

Naksh hand touched with Keerti hand and then the thread of his wrist got stuck with Keerti bracelet in her wrist..

Everyone look at them..They have tears in their eyes..

Alvida played..


Jaane kaise tute rishto se bikhre hain yeh pal
Mano jaise gam ki palko se chalke hain yeh pal
Kyun adhuri yeh kahani
Kyun adhura yeh fasana
Kyun lakeero mein iske Alvida

Umra bhar ka sath de jo
Kyun wahi pyaar ho
Kyun na mit ke jo fanna ho
Wo bhi pyaar ho
Na adhuri yeh kahani
Na adhura yeh fasana
Mar ke bhi na hum kahenge alvida

Bairia mere Rabba
Kyun hua mere Rabba
Yoon na dhaavi, yoon na dhaavi
Do dilan di yeh kahani

Mit bhi jaaun, na mite yeh kaisi pyas hai
Dooriyo mein kho ke bhi tu mere paas hai
Kyun ki tu meri kahani
Kyun ki tu mera fasana
Ab kabhi phir na hai kehna alvida

Teri yaado ko sehlata hu, na kehna
Pal mein banke bikharta hu
Jis jahan mein kho gai ho tum, alvida
Kya nahi hai wahan
Tuti tanhaiyon ka gam

Bairia mere Rabba
Kyun hua mere Rabba
Yoon na dhaavi, yoon na dhaavi
Do dilan di yeh kahani

Jaane kaise tute rishto se
Bikhre hain yeh pal, na kehna
Mano jaise gam ki palko se
Chalke hain yeh pal, alvida
Kyun adhuri yeh kahani
Ho alvida

Akshara come near Keerti and caress her hair.. Swarna caress Naksh face..They both are crying..

Karthik hold Keerti hand and kissed on her hand..

He look at Naksh..

Karthik- I'm sorry Naksh..

Naitik put his hands on their heads and cried..

Naitik- I'm sorry bacho..

Kabir and Abeer look at their friends.. They both are trying to be strong for the family..

Naira and Saanjh is crying..

Yash is standing there numb..

Wardboy pull stretcher and thread on his wrist broke they took Naksh in ICU..

Doc- patient blood is AB+ aapki family me kisi ka blood group AB+ hai..as we need to do blood transfusion soon..

Yash- my blood group is AB+

Doc- ok come with us..

Kabir and Yash go behind Doctor..

Karthik walk out from there..

Swarna- Karthik..

Naira- aunty aap Keerti Di ke paas jaiye me dekhti hu..

Swarna nods..

Naira go behind him..

Naira come out of hospital and look at Karthik who is sitting on bench disheartened..

She feel his pain..

She move toward him and sit beside him..

Karthik- maine sab barbaad kar diya naa.

She look at him..

Karthik- I'm sorry..

Tears rolled down from her eyes..

Karthik- tum aayi thi mujhse baat karne but maine suna hi nahi..

He hold her hand..

Karthik- kash us din me tumhari baat sun leta toh aaj..

He stopped in between tears rolled down from his eyes too..

Karthik- I'm sorry Naira.. I'm really sorry..

He hug her crying..she got shocked by his sudden move..

Karthik- how could I hurt everyone Naira me aisa nahi tha..

She wrapped her arms around his back and caress his hair..

Naira- Karthik calm down tumhari galti nahi hai..

Karthik- meri galti hai Naira how could I Naira..how could I hurt you..me toh tumse...

He stopped in between and move back realising what he is going to say..

They both look at eachother with teary eyes..

Yash is lying on bed..he look at Naksh who is lying unconscious on other bed..

Doctor put drip in his arm and start transfusion process...

Yash is worried for Naksh he don't want to loose Naksh..

Keerti-Naksh..

Abeer and Akshara look at Keerti..

She is lying unconscious on bed..Nurse put drip in her nerves..

She is taking Naksh name in unconsciousness again and again..

Akshara- aaj bhi bahut pyaar karti hai Keerti Naksh se..

Abeer- Naksh bhi toh karta hai pyaar Keerti se..

Akshara nods..

Akshara move out of room as Doctor called her..

Abeer- har kisi ko sacha pyaar nahi milta hai aunty everyone is not lucky me bhi nahi hu.. I hate myself ki maine kabhi tumse pyaar kiya tha Tara.. shyaad mere pyaar me hi kuch  kami thi ya me hi tumhe nahi samjh paya.. jab bhi keerti Naksh ko aisa dekhta hu I really feel guilty.. I think I'm responsible for what bad happened with you guys.. I'm sorry Keerti I'm sorry Naksh.. I'm really sorry..and I hate you Tara..I hate you..

Tears rolled down from his eyes..

He walk out of room..

That's all for now..

Precap- Keerti read Naksh diary📓..

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Bye for now
Lots of Love
Vaishali
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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