Losing Grip

By Ravenclaw_Pride002

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Senior year had never seemed so daunting. After her sister died, Avery found out just how much she hid behin... More

➷Author's Note | Welcome➷
Chapter 1➷ Not Everyone Wants a Second Chance
Chapter 2➷ You Know How I Hate Keeping Secrets From You
Chapter 3➷ You Know What They Say
Chapter 4➷ I Think You Just Gave Him a Heart Attack
Chapter 5➷ So, He Was Walking Me Home!
Chapter 6➷ We're a Forever Kind of Thing
Chapter 7➷ They're Practically an Old Married Couple
Chapter 8➷ I Trust That You'll Be a Gentleman
Chapter 9➷ It's Like Being Graded for Making Friends
Chapter 10➷ If Cruella Terrorized High School Hallways
Chapter 11➷ He Doesn't Know the First Thing About Staying Still
Chapter 12➷ They Say Crows Can Detect Fear
Chapter 13➷ I'll Be an Old Man by the Time I Get Out of Here
Chapter 14➷ My Mind is a Maze of Incoherent Thoughts
Chapter 15➷ You See, I'm Something of a Court Jester
Chapter 16➷ I Don't See How That Has Anything to Do With Me
Chapter 17➷ Does He Know You're Dating Him?
Chapter 18➷ He Doesn't Know His Right From His Left
Chapter 19➷ You Should Know Better Than to Take Her Word for It
Chapter 20➷ Because I Have a Hook for a Hand
Chapter 21➷ Pair Me With Someone Who Doesn't Already Have a Boyfriend
Chapter 22➷ I Always Considered Inigo the Main Character
Chapter 23➷ Good News, Good News... Please
Chapter 24➷ I'm the Evil Queen in Disguise
Chapter 25➷ Oh, Trust Me, He Drove Me Insane
Chapter 26➷ I'm Too Old to Hold a Grudge
Chapter 27➷ Stop Smiling Like That, It's Freaking Me Out
Chapter 28➷ Am I Stupid or Something?
Chapter 29➷ Take It One Page at a Time
Chapter 30➷ Do You Think You Can Do It?
Chapter 31➷ We're Not Getting Married, Are We?
Chapter 32➷ It's Not a Birthday Without Karaoke
Chapter 33➷ You Don't Seem to Function Well Under Commitment
Chapter 34➷ Give Him a Call and Ask Him to Get His Act Together
Chapter 35➷ Did Someone Say Party?
Epilogue➷ No Jackets

➷Author's Note | Thank You➷

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By Ravenclaw_Pride002

Thank you for sticking around, everyone!

This book definitely took a while to write. But I finished it! Despite all the headaches and the sleepless nights, I might actually miss it.

Naturally, you can let me know what you thought and review and critique, etc.

I started writing the first draft of this book when I was 14 so the plot can definitely be refined (I will come back to edit it whenever I can get through a sentence without cringing).

I would appreciate any feedback about anything you spotted that could have been better or if anything got boring or seemed like a filler (I tried to remove all unnecessary scenes but if you catch any...) Feel free to say anything, my feelings won't get hurt.

You can also mention your favorite scene/chapter here. My favorite chapter to write was 23. It was also the fastest I ever wrote anything.

Also, feel free to mention your favorite characters. Mine is Riley.

I do hope she felt as real to you as the characters that were actually alive in the story, haha!

I hoped some chapters were able to make you laugh even with the more emotional topics I tried to explore in this book.

Grateful for every single vote and comment.

P.S. I may add a few bonus *chapters* (either with different POVs or spin-offs) down the line if anyone is ever interested to see any specific scene that wasn't explicitly included.

-D.T.

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