Mr. Perfect & Ms. Imperfect

By StubbornCap

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Raina story โค๏ธ To know more peep inside๐Ÿ˜‰ Update on Monday, Wednesday and Friday โ˜บ๏ธ More

Author Note
Character Sketch
Resort Wali
Kashmir Main, Tu Kanyakumari
Safar Was Tooo Suffering
Naina Amma Naina Amma Maan Jao
Two Naina
Confusion Hi Confusion๐Ÿคช
Confusion Continues...
Sibling's Birthday.....
Ahluwalia Reunion
Hospital Wala Drama
The One And Only Money Minded Dracula RV
Language Class
School Friend

Naina Ah Singh

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Naina and Rajveer gets shock seeing each other...Rajveer stands up whereas Naina drops her bag....Rajveer and Naina were looking at each other...Ali and Pooja sees each other and then at Rajveer and then at Naina....

Ali- Aap donno jante ho kya ek dusre ko

Pooja- Ali question wala ringtone hatta aur romantic ringtone baja....Dekh nahi raha kaise donno ke connection jude hue hai (she takes balaye) Haaye nazar na lage mere Veer Zara ko

Listening Veer Zara from Pooja...Rajveer and Naina looks at her...

Rajveer & Naina- Veer/Zaara(points at each other) Impossible

Pooja- Haaye sochte bhi ek jaisa hi ho

Ali- Aap bethiye na (looks at Pooja) Pooja ko mazak ki adat hai

Naina adjusts her bags and sits whereas Rajveer also sits...Ali and Pooja senses seriously between them...To lit up situation Pooja looks at Ali and he nods...

Pooja- Tumhare handset ka model kya hai

Ali(interrupts)- Inka matlab hai aapka naam kya hai

Before Naina could reply her phone rings...She sees caller Id and smiles....

Naina- Excuse me

Naina goes near gate and pick up call....She was talking and smiling....Pooja peeps out to see her and finds her smiling more and thinks it must be her boyfriend....She tells Ali and Rajveer that it must be her Boyfriend...Listening boyfriend don't know but Rajveer felt bad...Naina was still on call...She comes and shows her phone to Pooja and Ali...

Naina- Aloo dekh liya mere co-passengers

Alekh- Guys meri choti behan ka Please khayal rakhna

Pooja- Oh Teri....Bhai ke sath phone pe thi

Naina- Haan

Ali- Aapki behan humari behan jaisi hai  fikar na kariye

Naina- Aloo abhi black coffee mat peena aur no kaam shamja

Rajesh comes with cup of black coffee....Naina sees him with coffee cup and Alekh smile sheepishly....Rajveer was on opposite sit listening them...

Naina(shouts)- Raaajuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Listening Naina's voice cup from Rajesh's hand falls....Alekh laughs whereas Ali and Pooja were amazed...

Rajesh- Bacha tum soyi nahi

Naina- Raju aapko kitni bar bolu black coffee raat ko nahi peeni chahiye

Alekh- Haan Baba maine toh mana bhi kiya tha

Naina- Raju kyun mere bhai ko bigad rahe ho

Rajesh- Bhai ki chamchi (pulls Alekh's ears and mimic him) Baba please bana do na, woh nahi hai, usko pata nahi chalega Baba Please (Naina glares at Alekh and Alekh gives his Colgate smile....Rajesh notice Ali and Pooja) Bacha yeh donno kaun hai

Naina was about to hits her hand on her forehead with her phone....Rajveer looks at her and thinks how stupid she is....

Alekh(interrupts)- Phone hai  (Naina stops) Baba yeh Ali hai

Ali- Namaste Sir

Rajesh(looks here and there)- Sir kaun Sir

Naina- Ali ihne Uncle bolo

Rajesh- Oye Uncle ki bachi....Uncle kisko bolne bol rahi

Alekh- Mujhe toh bol nahi sakte...bache (he looks at him with smile) aap joh budhe ho

Rajesh- Budha hoga tera baap

Alekh & Naina- Wahi toh bola

Both of them laughs and Rajesh makes face...Ali and Pooja along with Rajveer suppress their laughter...

Rajesh- Bacha aana ab mere pass phir dekhta hu

Naina- Nahi aati mere liye mera Aloo hai na (she shows her tongue)

Alekh- Bilkul

Rajesh- Dekh rahe ho budhe baap ko kaise akele kar diya (fake cries)

Naina- Kya bola (takes a pause) budha baap

Alekh- Mission Complete

Rajesh- Haaw kitne bure ho donno

Trio were talking and teasing each other whereas Rajveer, Ali and Pooja were bit jealous with bond Naina shared with her family wasn't same that they shared with their families....After sometime she cut calls...

Naina- Sorry Guys

Ali- It's Okay

Pooja- Tumhara naam

Naina- Naina Ah (she stops saying her surname) Naina Singh

Rajveer(murmurs)- Naina Ah Singh

Ali- Humara naam kaise pata chala aapko

Naina- Woh Uncle ne bataya

Pooja- Waise kya karti ho...Goa ghumne ja rahi ho

Naina- Nahi main Goa se hi hu...Humara chota sa resort hai tum log waha aa sakte ho rehne....Infact Kyun na tum mere sath hi chalo ghar ka resort hote hue

Rajveer- Agar aise business karogi toh source of income kaise hoga

Naina- Source of income na sahi source of relation ho raha hai na....

Ali- Naina...Hume lagta Rajveer Ji sahi keh rahe

Naina- Ali tune abhi Aloo ko bola behan jaisi hu aur tu abhi aisa kar raha (makes sad face)

Pooja- Oye Ali kyun usse udass kar raha (She takes Naina's hand in her) Pakka hum tere sath hi chalege

They talk for while and sleeps at respective seats....Rajveer was working on his laptop....Due to laptop and outside light Naina was turning right to left and left to right to avoid light....Rajveer notice these and puts curtains and closes his laptop and removes his blazer and lies down....He wasn't able to sleep because of motion feeling in train....He looks at Naina who was sleeping peacefully...Full night he ends up watching her sleeping...Naina moves a little...Seeing her moving Rajveer lies down and closes his eyes...Naina woke up and find others sleeping so she goes and freshen up....Moment she comes Rajveer acts like he also just woke up...

Rajveer- Miss. Naina Ah Singh

Naina- It's Naina Singh

Rajveer- But I think Naina Ah Singh sounds nice...

Naina- Whatever....(looks train has stopped on station) Chai piyoge

Rajveer- Chaaaaaaiiiiiiii (she nods) you think it'll be hygienic

Naina- Chai peene hai ya nahi (He nods in Yes) ok wait main aayi

Rajveer was about to stop her but she runs and get down of train....She takes two cup of tea and finds a Rajveer standing at door...She gives him two cups and again goes....Rajveer takes two on side table and stands at gate waiting for her...Suddenly train starts moving slowly...Rajveer sees Naina coming but she falls down on platform and train was moving little faster...Without thinking anything Rajveer gets down from moving train and goes near Naina....He helps her to stand up properly and sees train already left....Naina hits her hand on her forehead...

Naina- Kya kiya aapne (still looking at empty tracks and holding her face with both hands and making sad face)

Rajveer(non chalant)- Tum gir gayi thi toh help ki

Naina(holds him from his shoulder and shows him empty tracks)- Help really (She was about to punch him but stops in midway and takes a deep breath)

Rajveer(innocently)- Train kaha gayi

Listening him, Naina losses her patience and starts clapping...People looks at them...Rajveer didn't knew what wrong he did...

Naina- Train chali gayi (points at him) Tumhare wajhse ab main ghar late pochugi

Rajveer- Excuse me Ek toh help ki thank you bolne ke badle sunna rahi ho

Naina- Yeh koi movie chal rahi thi kya joh tum utaroge meri help karoge Aur hum donno train me chale jaiyege (She says in one go and he looks at her) what (puts her hand on her waist) Train ki chain pull karte agar sachme help karni thi toh

Rajveer- Train me chain bhi hoti hai

Rajveer asks innocently as he never travelled in train and he didn't knew....Listening him Naina wanted to break his bone but calms herself....And throw punches and kicks in air....People were looking at her thinking she has lost her sense whereas Rajveer hold her hand and pull her closer to him...

Rajveer- Tum kya kar rahi ho sab dekh rahe hai

Naina(push him little)- Tum kya kar rahe the (folds her hands around chest and looks at him) tumhe tab log nahi dekhe rahe the

Rajveer- Ok...I was wrong ab kya karege

Naina- Yeh bhi main batau (he nods)Train ke pochne ke phele cab lekar hume waha pochna hoga (He was still standing) khade kya ho chalo

Both of them goes out and tries to find a cab but as it was morning less people were available....All said no...Naina looks here and there and she finds a branch of tree...She picks it up and walks near a driver who was standing facing his back towards them...She puts branch on back of driver...

Naina- Hilana maat warna shout kar dugi

Listening her driver gets sacred and drops his phone And Rajveer comes near her...

Rajveer(whispers)- Kya kar rahi ho

Naina(whispers)- 37 minutes me Vilavade pochna hai aur koi tayyar nahi so shut your mouth and do as I say (it's first time someone is giving him...Pole branch a little to driver) Hume Vilavade station le chalo

Driver nods...Naina makes driver sit on backseat...Rajveer was going to sit on driving seat...

Naina- Raste pata hai kya (he nods in no) 35mins bache hai so main drive karugi

Naina sits at driving seat whereas Rajveer goes back and was about to sit with driver...

Naina- Driver hu kya main (He looks at her) Aage betho

Driver- Bhaisahab jaisa madam bol rahi karo warna hum donno ko shot karegi

Naina(shows thumb to driver)- Shamjdar ho

Driver- Madam Ji goli nahi marogi nahi

Rajveer sits at passenger seat...Naina still didn't start...Rajveer and Driver look at her...

Naina- Sit belt pehn lo

Both of them wears sit belt....Moment she sees them wearing sit belt...In full style she puts gear on 3rd and press accelerator with full force...She was drivin dashingly....Rajveer holds seat and sits closing his eyes whereas Driver was chanting God's name...She took shortcuts, one ways and even break traffic signal...They reach on time....Naina gives money and keeps branch on his hand...

Naina- Dubra lakdi ko bandook May shamjna (She wrinks)

Driver looks at her and she runs holding Rajveer's hand...They enter in sleeping coach....Seeing sleeping coach Rajveer was shock how can people sleep in such environment....Naina looks at him and waves her hand infront of him...

Naina- Aise kya dekh rahe ho jaise pheli bar dekha ho

Rajveer- Pheli aur akhiri

Naina(shouts)- Tum sachme pheli bar train me (people looks at her and she just smile)

Rajveer- Haan ab yaha se humare coach kaise jayege

Naina(sarcastic tone)- Bhul gaye Hum toh superhero hai urd ke ja sakte

Rajveer- Toh wait kiska kar rahi ho (She makes faces) Acha Naina batao na

Naina- Sleeping coach ke total 10 coaches hote hai hum first coach me....

Rajveer- Baki coach me kaise jayege

Naina- Dugh....(slightly hits on his forehead...he glares her) Sorry Train ke coaches inter connected hote hai (He looks at her in doubt) See mujhpe bharosa karne ke alwa koi option nahi hai (he nods) ab chale...

Naina and Rajveer starts walking in coach...They reach S5...Naina stops....Rajveer was about to walk but she pulls him along with her in washroom and locks the door...Washroom situation was worst for Rajveer and he felt like puking...Both of them were standing close to each other...Naina removes sanitizer and rubs on her hand and puts her hand infront of Rajveer's nose....He looks at her in amazed..

Naina- See I understand but bahar TT hai isliye

Rajveer- Par TT se kyun chup rahe hai

Naina- Kyunki humare pass ticket nahi hai aur fine pay karna padega

Rajveer- Pagal ho kya humare pass ticket hai toh sahi aur I can pay fine

Naina- Oh mere Ameeriyo ke Badshah (Rajveer looks at her) Baat paiso ki nahi hi hai ticket hote hue kyun fine dena

Rajveer- Toh kab tak aise rehna hoga

Kuch Khaas Hai
Kuch Paas Hai

He points at they closeness...Naina mentally slaps herself and move little backward..

Kuch Ajnabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuch Duriyan, Nazdikiyan

Naina looks here and there whereas Rajveer smile at her antics....

Kuch Hass Padi Tanhaiyaan
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai,

He pulls her little closer and she looks at him raising her eyebrows...

Shayad Yeh Pyaar Hai,
Haan Hai Shayad,

He closes his nose with one hand and makes face....He holds her hand & removes his hand from nose & keeps her hand near his nose and inhale her fragrance....

Kya Yeh Bahar Hai, Kya Intezaar Hai,
Shayad Yeh Pyaar Hai

Someone knocks at door...Naina and Rajveer looks at each other thinking it must be TT....Rajveer wasn't sure what to do whereas Naina was thinking....Person again knocks....

Naina- Main bahar jati hu tum darwaze ke piche chupna

Rajveer- Main kyun (She glares him) I mean tum chup jao na

Naina- Fine TT ko tum sambhalo

Before Rajveer could protect she ends up pushing him outside...Naina hides behind door and Rajveer sees a man infront of him...He stands at door only so that man doesn't go inside...

Man- Bhai Sahab hattao

Rajveer(holds his stomach)- Aahhhhhh (looks at man) aap dusra wala use kar lo

Before waiting for man's reply he goes inside and closes the door...That man looks at closed door & goes into opposite washroom...Rajveer takes breath of relief whereas Naina was suppressing her laughter....Rajveer couldn't imagine what would have happened if that man went inside...

On other hand in Shekhawat Mansion, Ritu opens box that Naina gifted her and gets shocks....She runs holding box in Naveen's room...She enters without knocking and finds Naveen in deep sleep...To wake him up she takes jug from side table and empty water on him...Naveen wakes up with jerk and sees Ritu and look at himself....

Naveen(shouts)- Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (covet himself with blanket...because he has habit of sleeping shirtless)

Ritu(sits beside him on bed and covers his mouth)- Uncle uth jayege chup raho (show him box) Yeh dekho

Naveen- Chocolate box

Ritu(hits him on his head)- Idiot dhayan se dekho

Naveen sees box and look at her in shock and she smile and nods...

Naveen- Iska matlab Station wali hi Resort Wali hai

Ritu- Haan yaad hai Raj ne Kya bola tha

Flashback starts

Rajveer was in hospital as his father got heart attack...He was sitting sad outside operation theatre when a nurse comes and gives him a box...

Rajveer(shows box)- What's this ?

Nurse(points at girl's back)- She told to give you...She even ask to tell you don't worry everything will be okay...Just have faith and smile...

Rajveer goes in direction that girl went but miss her as she sits in cab and go....He open box and find a note

"Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get."

Rajveer goes back and finds that nurse and asks her about that girl...Nurse tells him she often visits hospital and gives people chocolate as she believes by giving chocolate box, she is giving bit of sweetness in their sour moments...

Flashback ends

In excitement Naveen hugs Ritu and she smiles...After few minutes Naveen gets into his senses and starts wearing t-shirt Whereas Ritu goes keeping box on table...

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