LOVE FOREVER

By thecoffeeewriter

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Love forever is a story of two people madly in love with each other.Both broken in some way or the other. Bo... More

CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
CHAPTER 10
CHAPTER 11
CHAPTER 12
CHAPTER 13
CHAPTER 14
CHAPTER 15
CHAPTER 16
CHAPTER 18
CHAPTER 19
CHAPTER 20
CHAPTER 21
CHAPTER 22
CHAPTER 23
CHAPTER 24
CHAPTER 25
CHAPTER 26
Chapter 27
CHAPTER 28
CHAPTER 29
Important Note

CHAPTER 17

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Manik : okay Nandini I will now tell you a story

Nandini maintained her stone face

Manik :A story tells that two friends were walking through the desert. During some point of the journey they had an argument, and one friend slapped the other one in the face.


Manik looked at Nandini to see if she has any emotions but her face was devoid of any emotions

Manik :  Nandini do you know what the other friend did ?

Nandini remained quiet as usual

Manik : The one who got slapped was hurt, but without saying anything, wrote in the sand;

“Today my best friend slapped me in the face.”

They kept on walking until they found an oasis, where they decided to take a bath. The one who had been slapped got stuck in the mire and started drowning, but the friend saved him. After he recovered from the near drowning, he wrote on a stone;

“Today my best friend saved my life.”

The friend who had slapped and saved his best friend asked him;

“After I hurt you, you wrote in the sand and now, you write on a stone, why?”

The other friend replied;

“When someone hurts us we should write it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away. But, when someone does something good for us, we must engrave it in stone where no wind can ever erase"

Manik looked at Nandini as he finished the story

Manik : who hurted you my new friend ?

Nandini just looked at him and stared at him without saying a word

Flashback Ends

Nandini smiled remembering her short flashback and then looked at manik who was still hugging her tightly

Nandini : I will never leave you mera new friend

Manik tightened his hold on her and unintentionally carresed her hair

This surprised Nandini that how he can even understand her emotions in deep sleep

Nandini shushed her mind who was busy in praising manik and slept

After having about 4 hours of sleep they were welcomed by bright sunlight

Nandini woke up due to the light in the room whereas manik snuggled  in the blanket almost covering himself

Nandini went to the balcony to just check the status of the storm and to her utter displease the storm was still strong in the Indian Ocean

Here , Manik woke up and took the blanket with him to the balcony and covered himself and Nandini by taking her in a back hug

Manik : sab thik ho jayega barfii

Nandini : I need you with me in this

Manik : I am here just near you

Nandini snuggled in manik for warmth whereas manik just let her be

And then there was a knock on the door

Nandini separated herself from manik and wore her robe whereas manik wore his vest

Nandini opened her door only to be welcomes by three hugs

Nandini : I am fine guys

Mukti : shh baby

Cabir : kab lab jayegi angel

Nandini rested her head on his shoulder and said

Nandini : In a hour or so

Aliya : we all will drop you

Manik : no I will drop her ..actually guys it is about the secrecy of the mission

Nandini : no guys actually

Everyone : we understand Nandini .

Dhruv : we have seen you grown nandu so stop behaving so formal with us

Nandini : don't act so old you are just 1 year big

Cabir : mera angel best hai so dare you worry and everything will be fine

Nandini : I am not a angel you all are my angel's

Everyone just smiled at her comment

Here in Oberoi mansion

Shivaay : so should we post  the letter

Anika : ya shiv we will post it but I feel we should post this letter to her office not to the house

Rudra : I completely agree with you bhabhi so I will post it in the ISRO office for Nandini

Omkara : yes now our princess will understand her bhai

They were completely unaware of the chaos in the office so they posted it in the ISRO office

Here , In the malhotra mansion

Everyone left soon after meeting Nandini as they knew that she is stressed and they should not bother her about breakfast and all

Nandini quickly called Kritika

Nandini : Hey kritika how is everything there ?

Kritika : Everything is a mess here Nandini. The storm seems to get only stronger with time and the INS ( Indian Navy ship) is still stuck in the stormy weather and is nowhere close to the spot ( there is a spot in Indian Ocean where the Navy ships are parked to monitor the rocket during launch ) . Moreover , the weather in Sriharikota, Andhra Pradesh  is at its worst and it is not at all favourable for launch .....

Nandini : any positive signs ?

Kritika : none except for the fact that we have 8 buffer days and we can only hope for the weather to get better

Nandini : what does report from India Meteorological Department ( the department which controls weather forecast and everything ) says

Kritika : it says that the storm is not in a mood to subside

Nandini : could you mail me the report

Kritika : I will do it right away

Nandini : how is rakesh sir doing ?

Krtika : he is fine a bit hungover but still Ananth sir has taken him home

Nandini : so are you alone there ?

Kritika : no tara mam arrived in the morning only and as soon as varsha comes I will leave..

Nandini : ya you also need rest and you need to fresh up too . Do one thing call varsha and say  that I am coming to the office early and she can come at 9

Kritika : ok I'll do that and will mail you the details .

Nandini : let's keep our hopes high

Kritika : my fingers are crossed

With this they ended the call and Nandini turned to find manik with a plate of breakfast and coffee

Manik : barfii come lets have breakfast

Nandini : I was talking to Kritika

Manik : I heard it

Manik fed Nandini the first bite of the omlet and then started sipping his coffee

Nandini : I need to go early as Kritika needs to go to her house

Manik : let's get over with the breakfast baby then I will drop you

Nandini : you have a meeting right ?

Manik : it's not important I will reschedule it

Nandini : no no you go to the meeting I will go with the driver

Manik : are you sure ?

Nandini : as sure as I can be

Manik just pecked her forehead and left to the wardrobe to get dressed

Nandini just wore her watch and checked Kritika's mails and got her stuff ready

Manik came out of the wardrobe fully dressed and then his eyes spotted the watch Nandini was wearing  which reminded him of one of their most beautiful memories

Flashback

A 16 year old Nandini was going all hap hazard because of her first stage performance which she wanted to nail

Manik : Hey Nandu what are you doing

Nandini : manik what will I wear tommorow

Manik : jo apka man barfi

Nandini : stop calling me that I don't like it

Manik : okay fine

Nandini: should I braid my hairs or should I let them be open

Manik : jo apka man barfi

Manik said engrossed in his own world

Nandini clicked her fingers in front of him

Nandini : earth to you my friend

Manik: Nandu is this stage performance so important

Nandini : ofcourse it is

Manik : you know when I first performed on the stage I was 7 years old

Nandini : was it with fab 5

Before they could complete four people yelled from back

Four people : nhi hero ne dance kiya tha

Nandini : really mukti

Mukti : ya really baby..

Nandini : mukti you are just one year bigger than me so why do you all call me baby

Everyone : because you are like one

Nandini cheekily smiled

Nandini : you all really love me right ?

Manik : are yaar somebody stop this senti machine

Aliya : ayee no jokes about my angel

Dhruv : buddy why don't Nandini spend this night in vedant mansion . These girls can have their own time

Mukti : yess I will also stay there then . I really don't like going back home

Nandini : yayyyy

Manik : what yayyy and all shut up so for the 100 th time in this month I am saying this I found Nandini she is my friend and she will only stay with me and you all know I don't like this mansion empty it reminds me of those 6 months

Nandini : I am not going aur vaise bhi nobody is going . We all are gonna trouble this  monster so much

Cabir : sounds like a plan to me

Manik : shut up idiot and miss " trouble all night " you need to sleep because tommorow is your first stage performance and sleep is important

Dhruv : buddy it is just a stage performance

Manik : but bro for her it is her first na

Cabir : yes bhaiyu ki angel will rest okay so we all should go to our lonely houses

Nandini : no mukti will stay with me and bhaiyu will accompany manik . Mera first friend needs to be with someone today so that he is not reminded of any bad memory

Dhruv : so only we are going home

Aliya hopped in the blanket

Aliya : I am in the bedddddddd

Dhruv : mai hi akela hun

Manik : ohhh devdas chal

With this they all left but in the night manik secretly came in Nandini room and kept the watch underneath her pillow

That was manik style of gifting and to his misconception Nandini didn't knew about it . He thought that Nandini doesn't know that it is he who keeps a gift for her underneath her pillow on every important event of her life

But Our 16 year old Nandini knew that our 17 year old manik is the one who keeps these gifts for her so that she feels overwhelmed when she gets up for any event

She loved the fact that how cool he would in the morning as if he doesn't care about gifts and all but in reality the only thing he cares about is gifts for her

How was the update ?

Are you liking this flashback thing ?

Don't worry everything will come in flashback's   ..their every age and every problem . It will not be in a continuous manner but there will be a hell lot of flashbacks

Now you guys need to tell me what flashbacks do you want to see ??

Are you guys liking the ISRO thing or is it getting too informative and boring ??? ( Please tell me honestly )

Shivaay and family had sent the letter to ISRO office so what do you think is going to happen ?

Target : 200 votes and 60 comments

Do vote and Comment guys



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