Shattered || Book #1 in 'Hear...

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" I married you but that doesn't mean that you can control my life". He growled in anger. I flinched at his h... More

NOTE
.Copyright.
Aesthetics & Prologue
Introduction of cast
1:Preparations
2: Meet her
3:Meet him
4:Decisions
5:New task
6:Destined to meet
7: First fight
8: Karthik and Aradhya?
9:Feelings
10: Kritika in Singhania mansion
11: Kritika's lesson to Aditya
13: The closeness
14: Aditya's guilt
15: Karthik's anger
16: The painful past
18: Hope
19: Behave
20: Cured
21: Aditya-Kritika marriage?
22: Two weddings
23: Postnuptial agreement
24: Their fate is decided
25 .The wedding rituals begins.
26: Black means hate
27:Marriage of hate and love
28: Teary night
29: Annoying jerk
30: 'I want to sleep on bed'
31: Married life is beautiful like hell
32: "Please save my son"
33: Plan backfired
34:Looking for clue
35:Vow to change him.
36:Bipolar
37:Getting closer
38:New entry
39: Back to square one
40: Surprise for him
41:I love you
42: Swetha slaps Kritika
43:Depressed soul
44:Betrayal
45:Truth of her existence
46:Abused relations
47:'You will regret'
48:The final justice
49:The tragical journey ends here

12: Kritika to stay

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After the biggest speech, Kritika runs to upstairs. She sat on the couch infront of Daadi's room. She was continuously cursing Aditya.

Kritika: " How dare he. He don't know who I am" . I will kill him with my bare hands". She shooks her head . "No Kritika control yourself. Otherwise you will go to jail as fast as possible then how will you see your dream boy".

Ahana who followed Kritika saw her blabbering something herself. She sighed and went towards her. She sat beside Kritika

Ahana: " Kritika are you okay"

Kritika glares at her: " I am not at all okay. Because of your pyaari Brother. What does he think of himself huh. He thinks that he is the president of India . You know whenever I see him I wanted to fry him raw. Then I will cut him into pieces and will make a biriyani. Then I will give party to all the street dogs in this india. But I am damn sure that on the next all the dogs will be died by eating that tasteless food." Kritika starts to laugh: " Ha ha ha think about it it will be really funny " Ahana's eyes were bulging because she never thought that her best friend want to kill his brother in a brutal way.

Hearing this one person was fuming like a volcano.

After Kritika and Ahana went to upstairs , all others went( After warning Aditya) behind them. They heard Kritika's way of killing Aditya. All were looking at her in horror. Aditya and Karthik who also came there heard this. Karthik was having a hard time to control his laugh. Aditya was fuming like he will make the whole mansion inn fire. Finally Karthik starts to laugh because he was not able to hold it. Aditya was a looking at him with a gritted face

Kritika hearing someone's laugh looks and saw the whole family standing . She gulps and gets up from her place nervously. Aditya was looking at Kritika angrily. Finally all others starts to laugh except Kritika and Aditya. Kritika nervously looked and saw a fuming Aditya who was ready to eat her. She got scared and turn around. Aditya looks at everyone who were laughing like mad persons.

Aditya: " SHUT UP". All stopped laughing. Kritika flinches at his tone. So to change the topic Kritika decides to tell about Daadi.

Kritika: " Guys I want to tell an important matter about Daadi"

Aditya runs to Kritika: " What happened to her , anything serious. " Others were curiously looking towards Kritika

Kritika: " Relax I will tell but I think it's better to sit and talk"

All were seated in the room next to Maheshwati Singhania

Kritika: " So now it is 2:00 . I think she will wake u by 2:30. So only 15 minutes is remaining. I got the test result. She has high amount of medicines in her body which made her cells to be weaken. So her brain is not in her control. That is why she is acting like a mental patient. So before starting the treatment first she should be familiar with me. For that I need Abhimanyu ji's help." Abhimanyu nods " Second is use of new medicines. So by one month her body will be familiar with the medicines and third meditations. Sometimes I will take her out from this mansion.

Adithya: " What the fuck . How can you take Daadi out . You know there are security reasons. There are many business enemies for us .Then how can you take her out . Are you in your senses"

Kritika" control kritika control" She looks at Aditya: " I am not going to take her for shopping. It's just that her mind should be fresh and should be relaxed . She should be familiar with the surroundings. It's been 2 years she is locked in that room. By continuously living in that room , it will affect her badly and I will not take her outside the mansion. Here garden is there so I will take her there" "And Mr Singhania I am again telling you that I am a doctor and it's not the first time I am dealing with this type of cases" she says by gritting her teeth

Both glares each other. Their eye lock is disturbed by Karthik who clears his throat. Both looks away. Kritika pins her hairs behind her ear awkwardly.

Kritika: " Um so I think I should go to Daadi's room". All nods. They goes to Maheshwati's room
. Kritika requested all to go out except Ahana and Abhimanyu

Kritika: " Ahana can you inject this medicine to Daadi"

Ahana nods . Kritika wears her coat and stethoscope . Abhimanyu raises his eyebrow

Kritika with a smile: " I should introduce myself as a doctor na so I wore it"

Kritika looks at her watch: " Ahana you can go and Abhimanyu ji you can sit beside Daadi. Ahana goes out. Abhimanyu sits beside her. Kritika then arranges the medicines.

After 5 minutes Maheshwati Singhania starts opening her eyes. Abhimanyu and Kritika becomes alerted

Abhimanyu: " Daadi wake up". It's me your Abhi". "Open your eyes daadi". Finally Daadi opened her eyes. Abhimanyu smiles at her.

Abhimanyu: " Daadi are you okay". Maheshwati nods with a smile. Till now Daadi didn't saw Kritika

Kritika: "Daadi". Maheshwati turns and saw an unknown girl who was smiling at her. Daadi started to move closer to Abhi. Abhimanyu got hold of her. Kritika tried to touch her but she shoved her hands away

Kritika: " Daadi I am Abhimanyu ji's friend and a docor . I came to see you ." But daadi was not at all listening to her. She tried to jump from bed . But Abhimanyu didn't allowed. Finally Kritika goes and hugs her which stunned Maheshwati and Abhimanyu. Daadi was again trying to move away but Kritika was still hugging her

Kritika: " Daadi calm down". ' you are okay ". You have no problem ". "Relax "

Maheshwati relaxed in her arms. Daaadi looked at her with tears. She was showing that she has no problem with hands. Kritika smiles at her

Kritika cups her face; " Daadi I know you are okay and you have no problem ". But some idiotic monkeys had told me that you have something." "But don't worry I am always with you and I will help you to recover. We will prove them that you are a normal." "Okay". Daadi nods her head

Kritika made her to lay on bed: :" Now sleep Daadi . I am here".

Kritika pats her head and finally she slept. Abhimanyu was having tears in his eyes. Because after a long time he saw a change in her. Kritika saw this

Kritika: " Abhimanyu ji. what happened"

Abhimanyu rubs his tears: " Nothing Kritika. it's just that I was happy". "Since after a long time she behaved like this. But how did this happened"

Kritika: " Remember I gave her an injection before she opened her eyes" Abhimanyu nods " It was a medicine to calm her nerves and to make some emotions in her mind"

Abhimanyu: " Let's go down. All will be waiting for us"

Kritika takes her bag. Both goes outside after locking the room

All others were impatiently waiting for Kritika and Abhimanyu. When they saw both coming down, they runs to them

Gautam: " How is she"

Abhimanyu smiles: " Finally she is showing some emotions dad"

Aditya shocks : "What" "Abhi tell us clearly"

Abhimanyu explained the things that happened after Daadi opened her eyes. All were grateful for Kritika

Swetha goes towards Kritika and caressed her face : " Thank you beta for everything"

Kritika: " You should not say thank you to me. It's because god answered your prayers and finally he gave us a blessing" All smiles " I think it's time for me to go. I will come tomorrow"

Ahana: " Kritika wait". Kritika stops walking . She turned towards her and looks with a frown.

Ahana: " Ma , Pa I think it will be difficult for Kritika to come here everyday and then going to hospital , home like that. " So I think Kritika should stay with us till Daadi recovers

Aditya/Kritika: " WHAAT"

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Next is Aditya and Kritika's nok jok plus some romance.

I am going to name this couple as KriTya and our teaser part is coming closer

Next update only after 1k views and good votes .🙏🙏

I request someone to make a wedding card of Aditya and Kritika .pleaseee😋😋😋

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