Dead Poet's Review (CLOSED)

By TheDPSociety

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Here, a quirky/nerdy/wanna be woman neรฉ girl reviews your books and gives her verdicts. Status: closed More

INTRODUCTION
FORM
THE QUEUE
1 & 2 & 3 [old]
4 & 5 & 8 [old]
7. GENTLE FLAME
9. LAVENDER: STRANGE SOMEBODY
10. CON SCIENCE, NOT CONSCIENCE
12. MONSTERS LIKE US
13. NO ONE KILLED VENUS
15. THE HITTER'S HIT LIST
16. PRIORITIES
17. SAVANAH
18. HEARTSTRINGS
19. THE DATING PROPOSAL
20. A PRINCESS' CHOICE
21. THE EYE
24. WHIRLWIND

23. BLEEDING WORDS

23 4 1
By TheDPSociety

Title: Bleeding words

Chapters read : 6
Author: MightySoul9
Reviewer: musings21

The title goes very well with the poems inside the book, it describes the emotions you have tried to convey through your poems,  but I feel a change in the title, that is giving it a unique name would draw more attention to the beauty inside the book.

Moving onto the cover, the cover is really pretty but doesn't match upto the genre that is poetry. It may seem very eye pleasing but a change in the cover and title, such that it gives the reader an idea of what to expect in the book is required.

I won't deny the fact that I simply loved your poems alot, there were raw emotions and the right use of metaphors, simply making your poems beautiful to read and truly meaningful.

Your writing style is very unique in terms of how you describe a scenario and the efficient use of certain phrases, is simply mind blowing.

The grammar is on point. A few  small mistakes could be overlooked and edited if you go through your poems once again.

Overall I really enjoyed reading your poetry book.

•••

I rate you 8/10

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