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This is story of an strict ips training Commander and a cute funny and lazy candidate 😜😜 Om as a commander... More

Prologue
Characters
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
want to ask something 😭😶😭😶
Part 7
part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 12
Part 13
announcement🙈
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
New story 🤧
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
IMPORTANT!!
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!
Part 48
Part 49
Part 50
Epilogue 🥺

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So how are you all??

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Continuation.....

Academy..

Harsh shocked:Gauri..what..was..that?

Gauri: Mosquito.....was... that..

Aditya shocked: You....are....gone..

Gauri gulping: I..... know.

Harsh: Officers you all can go.

All left from there.

In Gauri's room

Gauri was roaming in her room bitting her nails in tension. Aditya, Richa,Sakshi and Isha were sitting looking at her.

Richa came to Gauri: stupid ab go to him and say sorry.

Gauri gulping: but he will scold me.

Isha: No yaar.. just go..Sir is sweet person..he will forgive you.

Gauri: Sweet??.

Isha: just go.

Gauri nodded gulping and went to Omkara

Richa: Chali gyi....chalo iske birthday ki planning karte hain

(She gone... let's do planning for her birthday)

Aditya: Kal isse koi nhi wish karega . Phir jab ye bahot sad ho jayegi tab saath me wish karenge.

(Tommorow no one will wish her. After she gets sad we all wish her together)

Isha: Haan phir ham sab party karenge.

(Yes and then we will do party)

Sakshi: I think tum sab Adi ke birthday vali party bhool rhe ho.... Omkara sir permission hi nhi denge.

(I think you all forget about Aditya's birthday party....Omkara sir didn't give permission)

Aditya: 😶😶ab kya Karen.

(Now what we will do.)

Other side.

Gauri peep in Omkara's room and saw him who was standing

Gauri to herself: yeh harsh sir kahan gye ? Com'on Gauri go and say sorry.

(Where is Harsh sir ?)

She knocked the door.

Om : Why are you knocking the door? Come in.

Gauri shrugged her shoulders and went inside. She stands just behind him tap his shoulder.

Om turned and saw Gauri

He jumped from his place: mummy.

Gauri frowns.

Om sighed: who let you enter?

Gauri: you.

Om: What?

Gauri: Haan you only said na "why are you knocking the door ?".

Om rolled his eyes: I thought it's Harsh. What are you doing here?

Gauri: Sir..vo ham sorry kehne aaye the..wo macchar ki wajah se hamse galti ho gayi.

(Sir actually I came here to say sorry....I did a mistake because of a mosquito)

Om: Macchar??

(Mosquito??)

Gauri: Haan vo macchar..I mean mosquito.. wo aapke cheek pe baitha tha to hamne laga Diya kaan ke neeche..(giggling) hehehe

(Yes that mosquito was sitting on your cheek... so I slapped you (giggling) hehehe)

Om raised his eyebrows: Excuse me

Gauri stopped giggling: Ohh.. sorry sir..sorry sorry so so so sorry.. Please hame maaf kar dijiye ham to bas ye chahte the ki aapko vo mosquito na kaate...I am sorry

(Ohh... sorry sir... sorry sorry so so so sorry.... please forgive me.. I don't want that the mosquito bite you...I am sorry)

Om: Listen....(cutted by Gauri)

Gauri: Sir aap Jo saza denge hame manzoor hoga bas hame yahan se nikalna mat... aap bhi hame maar lijiye bas hame maaf kar dijiye.

(Sir I will accept every punishment given by you..but please don't throw me out of this academy...sir you also can slap me but please forgive me)

Om showed his Palm to stop her blabbering but she thought he is going to slap her .

She covered her face: Aaaaaaaaaaaa... please mat maaro.. Aaaaaaaaaaaa

(Aaaaaaaaaaaa.. please don't slap me... Aaaaaaaaaaaa)

Om shocked: What??

Gauri looked at him and sighed.

Gauri: I thought you are going to slap me....Haan to where were i?? Haan aap chahe to aap hame maar lijiye.

(I thought you are going to slap me....so where were i ??..yes if you want you can slap me)

Om raised his eyebrows.

Gauri: I..I mean aap chahe to... and ham jante Hain aap aisa nhi chahoge Kyunki ham ladhki Hain aur ladhkiyon pe haath uthana ek acche gentleman ki nishani nhi hai..to

(I..I mean if you want... and I know you never want this... because I am a girl and a gentleman never raise his hand on a girl...so)

Om put his finger on her lips:shsh kitna bolti Hain aap!!

(Shhhh... how much you talk!!)

Gauri looked at him.

Om removed his fingers: can I say something.

Gauri nodded.

Om: it's ok... you can go

Gauri happily: Aapne hame maaf Kar Diya??

(You forgave me??)

Om nodded.

Gauri: Ok sir I should leave.

Om: hmmm

Gauri left. Om shook his head.

She came in her room.

Richa: What happened??

Gauri smiled brightly : He forgives me.

Isha: see..I told you na he is sweet person.

Next day

Gauri wake up and get up from bed.

She shakes Richa and sakshi. They both Wake up lazily.

Richa rubbing her eyes: Kya hai ?

(What ?)

Gauri: Aaj kuch hai ?

(Is there anything today)

Richa in mind: Tera birthday.

(Your birthday)

To Gauri: haan Aaj na Tuesday hai.

(Yes today is Tuesday)

Gauri: 😶😶😶😶

To sakshi: Tujhe to yaad hoga hai na.

(You remember... right)

Sakshi: Haan yaad hai.

(Yes I remember)

Gauri happily: That's like my best friend.

Sakshi: Aaj to nhi aaj kuch nhi hai.

(Today...there is nothing today.)

Gauri: Yaad karo kuch accha sa din hai.

(Remember today is a good day)

Richa: Nhi ... yaar tu hat ab hame bhi fresh up hona hai.

(No... now move I have to fresh up)

Gauri angrily: Hamse baat mat karna aaj.

(Don't talk to me)

Sakshi: why??

Gauri stumped her foot angrily and left from there.

She came to Ground.

Isha to Aditya: Aaj ye gusse me kyun lag rhi hai.

(Why she is looking angry today?)

Aditya: Haan Aaj to Iska b'day hai lagta hai Richa aur Sakshi ne wish nhi kiya.

(Yes.. today is her birthday... seems to be like Richa and Sakshi didn't wished her)

Just then Gauri came to them.

Adisha: Good Morning Gauri.

Gauri: Good morning.

After sometime Richa and Sakshi came to ground.

They came to Gauri and Gauri angrily move from there.

Just then Om came to ground.

Om: Candidates come in line.

All came in line.

Om explain everything about today's training.

In evening.

Om: Ok candidates you all can go.

Richa: Chal Gauri.

(Let's go Gauri)

Gauri ignore her and left.

Richa: 😶😶

Aditya: Yaar chal Harsh sir se puchte hain bahar jaane ke liye.

(Let's go to Harsh sir for asking about going out)

They went to Harsh.

Sakshi: Sir....wo aaj na Gauri ka birthday hai.

(Sir... today is Gauri's birthday)

Harsh: Wow to mujhe batana tha na Mai bhi wish kar deta koi nhi canteen me kar dunga.

(Wow you should tell me before i could also wish her)

Richa: nhi sir wo actually har saal Gauri ke birthday par uske parents uske liye party plan karte hain and iss saal wo apne parents ke saath nhi hai and hamne usse wish bhi nhi kiya to wo bahot upset hai.

(Sir actually every year her parents plan a party for her on her birthday and this year she is not with her parents and we also didn't wished her so she is upset)

Aditya: Sir I know uss din ke baad se aap aur Omkara sir hame bahar nhi jaane denge and specially parties ke liye.

(Sir I know after that day Omkara sir will never allow us to go out and specially for parties)

Just then a voice came from back.

Voice: Kya ho rha hai.

(What's happening here?)

They turned gulping and saw Omkara who was standing there.

Harsh: Omkara you know aaj na Gauri ka birthday hai 😏😏

(Omkara you know today is Gauri's birthday 😏😏)

Om: I know.

All: 😏😏 how.

Om: what do you mean by how ? Mujhe sab candidates ke birthday ki dates pata hain.

(What do you mean by how? I know the birth dates of every candidates )

Richa: Accha mera kya hai 😏?

(Ohh what's mine?)

Om: w..wo I don't remember

Harsh: Haan ok ok....accha listen wo Gauri bahot upset hai. Uske birthday party ke liye bahar jaane dete hain inn sab ko.

(Ok listen Gauri is upset. We should give them permission for enjoy her birthday party outside)

A,R,I,S: 😃😃😃😃😃

Om: koi jaroorat nhi bahar jaane ki.

(No need to go outside)

A,R,I,S: ☹️☹️☹️☹️

Om: zaroori nhi hai ki party Bahar jaa kar hi ho....party yahan bhi ho sakti hai.

(It's not necessary  to have a party outside only.... party can also be here)

All: 😃😃😃😃😃yes sir.

Harsh: Par arrangements me to time lagega na....pehle saare decorations ke items order karne honge then...

(But decorations need time... first we have to order all the decorative items)

Om cutting him: Maine saare items already magva liya

(I have already ordered all the items)

All: 😏😏😏😏😏kyun....kab?

Om looking down: Wo...abhi jab Mai room me jaa rha tha tab..

(When I was going to my room then..)

Flashback

Om was going to her room just then he listen Gauri's sobbing voice. He stands to his place and listened her.

Gauri on call: Hello .

Bhavya: Happy birthday meri jaan.

Gauri started crying: didi.

Bhavya worried: kya hua bache tu...tu ro kyun rhi hai.

(What happened baby why are you crying)

Gauri sobbing: Didi hame aapsab ki aaj bahot yaad aa rhi hai...yahan kisi ko hamari fikr nhi hai Richa Sakshi ko bhi nhi yaad ki aaj hamara birthday hai.

(Didi I am missing you all....here nobody cares for me... infant Richa and Sakshi didn't remember that today is my birthday)

Bhavya: Paglu tu itni choti si baat ke liye ro rhi hai .

(You are crying for this only)

Gauri sobbing: Accha di byy.

Bhavya: hello Gauri tu....

Gauri disconnected the call and started crying.

Gauri crying: Jab ham ghar me the to mummy Papa hamare liye surprise party plan karte the....aur yahan...yahan to hamari friends tak ho hamara birthday nhi yaad to aur kisse kya bolen.

(When I was at home then mummy and papa used to plan a surprise for me.... and here....here nobody cares for me.... infact my friends also didn't remembered my birthday then what can I say to others)

Om thinks something and call someone.

Om: Hello

P.o.c: Yes sir.

Om: please aap birthday decorations ke liye items academy me bhej sakte Hain.

(Can you bring all the birthday decorative items to Academy)

P.o.c: ok sir .

He disconnected the call and looked at Gauri.

Flashback end

All: 😏😏😏😏

Om: What?

All nodded in negative.

Isha: Chalo ham cake banate Hain.

(Let's go to bake the cake)

Sakshi and Richa nodded and trio left.

Harsh: Aditya inform everyone about this surprise except Gauri and invite them.

Aditya: Ok sir

He left

Harsh: kuch Jada hi fikar nhi hai aapko uski feelings ki😏?

(Don't you are worried too much for her feelings😏?)

Om: shut up...agar uski jagah koi aur bhi hota to mai yahi karta.....wo sab hamare under me training Karte Hain to ye hamari responsibility hai ki ham sab ki happiness ka khayal rakhen.

(Shut up!!.. and if there was someone else instead of her then also I would do the same...they are training under us and it's our responsibility to keep them happy)

Harsh: Hmmmmm😏😏

Om ignored him

Harsh teasingly: Gauri kitni khush hogi jab usse pata chalega ki tune uske liye surprise party plan kiya.

(Gauri will be happy when she will get to know that you have planned a surprise for her)

Om frowns: khush ? (Realising) Don't you dare to tell her about this....usse pata nhi chalna chahiye ki ye arrangements kisne ki Hain.

(Happy? ( realising) Don't you dare to tell her about this...she shouldn't know that who has done all the arrangements)

Harsh 😏: kyun tune hi abhi bola ki uski jagah koi aur hota to bhi tu yahi karta.

(Why ?.. you only said that if there was anyone else instead of her then you would do the same)

Om glaring at him: jo bhi ho par tu usko nhi bolega samjha.

(Whatever!!...but don't tell her)

Harsh 😏: ok ok .

At night.

All were present on Ground. It was beautifully decorated.

Aditya: Koi Gauri ko le kar aao.

(Someone bring Gauri)

Richa: mujhe maaregi.

(She will beat me)

Sakshi: mujhe bhi.

(Me too)

Isha: Mai laati hun.

(I'll bring)

She went to Gauri's room.

Isha: Gauri sun....chal jldi ground me.

(Listen Gauri.. let's go to the ground fast)

Gauri: kyun 😒?.

(Why 😒?)

Isha: Sir ne bulaya hai bahot important announcement hai.

(Sir has called.... he have to do some important announcement.)

Gauri: 😒😒chalo.

(Let's go)

They both came to ground.

Gauri: Ek to itni raat me bulaya upar se lights bhi off hain and abhi to koi aaya bhi nhi.......tumko sapna aaya tha kya 😒.

(First called at this hour and lights are also switched off and no one is here....Were you dreaming?)

Just then all lights switched on.

All: HAPPY BIRTHDAY GAURI. Happy Birthday To You.

Gauri was totally surprised her eyes filled with tears.

Sakshi wipe her tears: Ab Rona yahin baith kar ham sab chale jaate Hain.

(Now sit here and cry... we are going )

Gauri: I thought..

Richa: ki ham tera birthday bhul gye right.....paglu ham apna birthday bhul jayen par tera kabhi nhi

(That we forget your birthday....we will forget our birthdays but not your)

Aditya Richa came to her and hug her.

Richa: Sorry yaar for hurting you.

Gauri: 😒😒 it's ok .

Aditya: aisa face kyun bana rahi?

(Why are you making this face?)

Gauri: 😒😒hamko kitna rulaye tum sab.

(You all made me cry)

Harsh: Now please cut the cake.

Isha brings the cake.

Richa: Iss clothes me cake cut karegi.

(Will you cut the cake in these clothes)

Gauri: 😒Lenhga pehn len agar kaho to.

(If you say I will wear Lenhga😒)

Richa: 😶😶..Maine Tere liye ek gown order ki hai room me hai tu jaa Kar change kar.

(I have ordered a gown for you.. that is in room..go and change.)

Gauri nodded and went to her room. She changed her dress and came.

Richa: Hayeee.

Isha: Gauri you are looking very beautiful.

Gauri: Thanks.

Sakshi: Chal ab cut kar.

(Now cut the cake)

Gauri takes the knife and going to cut the cake but stopped.

Aditya: what happened?

Gauri: Wo...wo nhi...aaye.

(He..he didn't came)

Sakshi: Kon.

(Who?)

Gauri: Arre wahi wahi.

(Him)

Isha: Kon?

(Who?)

Gauri: wo lambe se aadmi

(That long man)

Adi: kon lambe se aadmi?

(Who long man?)

Gauri: O... Omkara sir.

All except samaira: 😏😏😏😏

Gauri: H.. Hamara matlb hai ki sab aaye Hain vo nhi Hain?

(I..I mean everyone is here except him?)

Isha: 😏 Tujhe pata saari arrangements Omkara sir ne hi karvayi hai.

(You know all arrangements are done by Omkara sir)

Gauri looked her surprised. Richa nodded.

Gauri cut the cake and feed it to all.

Here two pair of eyes were starting her.

Gauri feel someone eyes on her. She turned and saw Omkara who was standing a little bit away from there.

Harsh noticed him: Arre Omkara accha hua tum aa gaye... Tumhe pata Gauri tumhe miss kar rhi thi.

(Omkara you came... you know Gauri was missing you only)

Gauri's eyes got widen. She looked at Harsh and then Omkara. Om raised his eyebrows. Gauri nodded in negative.

Harsh: Om ko cake khilao.

(Feed the cake to om)

Gauri nodded and feed him cake.

Aditya: Chalo Dance karte hain.

(Let's dance guys)

Harsh: let's go Om.

Om: Guys I am not interested.

All: 😒😒😒😒😒

Om: What ?

Harsh: 😒😒Chalega yaa nhi.

(You are coming or not?)

Om: No.

All: 😒😒.

Harsh: 😒😒Ok.

All selected their partners.

Music plays.

Rikara were sitting and enjoying the party. Just then Richa came.

Richa: Chal Dance karte hain.

(Let's dance na)

Gauri nodded went with richa.

They were dancing just then a boy came to Gauri.

Boy: let's do couple dance

Gauri: no it's fine yaar.

Boy: com'on yaar let's do.

Gauri smiled: Ok.

They both were dancing and Omkara was fuming in jealousy 😉. He was continuationsly glaring at that boy. Finally he can't control his anger and went to stage. He holds Gauri's hand and pulled her to his arms. Gauri looked him shockingly. She removed his hands from her hands and turned to go but Om again pulled her and hold her waist tightly.

Gauri nervous: s.. sir aap yahan kya kar rhe....

(What are you doing here)

Om: Can't you see I am dancing.

Gauri: Par aap to..

(But you..)

Om put his fingers on her lips: shhshh not a single word.

Gauri nodded. They start dancing.

After party

All again wished Gauri and left from Ground.

Sakshi:  let's go.

Gauri remembered something: tum sab jao ham aate Hain.

(You all leave I am coming)

They nodded and left from there.

Gauri ran behind Omkara: Sir stop!!

Om stopped at his place and turned: What.

Gauri came to him smiling: Thank you.

Om: For what?

Gauri: For this party.

Om in mind: I will kill you Harsh.

To Gauri: K...kon si party....maine koi arrangements nhi karvayi w..wo to maine kitni baar mana kiya par harsh nhi Mana and usne hi ye party ki arrangements karvayi....aur tum..tum yahan kya kar rhi ho raat ho gyi hai room me jao.

(Which party....I didn't done any arrangements....I..I refused also for party but he did the arrangements... and y.. you what are you doing here...it's too late go and sleep)

Gauri smiled: Jab jhuth nhi bola jata to bolna bhi nhi chahiye.

(Don't lie if you can't)

Om looks at other side awkward:hmm

Gauri turned to go.

Om: Officer Gauri

Gauri turned: Yes sir.

Om rubbing his eyebrows: umm..vo happy birthday

Gauri smiled: Thank you sir.

Om nodded: Hmm now go to your room.

Gauri nodded and left.

Gauri in mind : He organized the party........He is sweet but at the same time he is khadoos also... can't even smile.

She entered in room smiling.

Richa: why are you smiling?

Gauri came out from her trance .

Gauri: nothing.

Sakshi: you go and change your dress...we are going to sleep.

Gauri: ok

Rishi lied on bed.

After freshing up Gauri went to balcony just then her eyes fell on a gift box and a note which was placed on a table.

Gauri picked up the box: what is this?

She opened the box and found a beautiful anklet.

Gauri: Wow kitna pyaara hai....kisne gift kiya?

(Wow it's so pretty.. who has Gifted it?)

She opened the note and started reading.

"Officer Gauri i don't have knowledge about Girl's gift understand. If you like it then keep and if you don't like it then also keep it... once again Happy birthday..... now go and sleep it's too late... you have to wake up early."

Gauri chuckled: Ajeeb hain.

(He is wired)

She came inside and kept it in her cupboard safely. She came to bed and lied.

Gauri in mind: Aise khadoos se insaan hain.

(He is weird and rude person.)

She smiled and slept.

In Omkara's room.

Om entered in room.

Harsh: 😏😏Hope so ki Gauri ko anklet pasand aaya hoga.

(Hope so Gauri would like the anklet)

Om looked at him wide eyes: k..Kon sa anklet ?

(Which anklet ?)

Harsh: Maine sab dekha tha kaise tune Warden ko gift box pakdaya tha aur bola tha ki "isse Officer Gauri ke room me rakh kar aaiye".

(I  saw everything... how you handed this gift to Warden and said that"place it in Officer Gauri's room".)

Om: tujhe koi aur kaam nhi hai kya jab dekho Meri baat sun ne ke alawa.

(Don't you have any work rather than listening my conversations)

Harsh: 😏mujhe Sab pata hai.....mujhe Sab samjh aata hai.

(I know everything...I can understand everything 😏)

Om rolled his eyes and ignored him.

He went to his bed and lied.

Om in mind: Hope so ki usse gift pasand aaya ho.....oh God why am I thinking about her??

Other side

Gauri opened her eyes: Why am I dreaming about him.

And both slept with this confusion.

































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