Ok, so I am very unhappy with the books I have made so I am going to pay more attention to them and actually try to work on them, however school did just start back up so it could be difficult
(Ik I ramble a lot, oops) basically, these are the things I'd like to work on since I'm restarting this from scratch:
Giving the reader more choice such as appearance, you will be able to vote on important events.
I'd like to make this less cringe, like making sure y/n isnt o.p and such.
And important writing things, such as editing when it doesn't make sense, and spacing it out more so its not jumbled up and confusing.
If there's anything else you want to suggest Id be happy to listen and work on, for now, I'll just work on getting the first chapter done. Have a wonderful day!❤ (btw, if you have any tips to help with focus/procrastination I'd love to here it)