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By Heaven-fell

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This is a series where I poke fun at the mistakes of a manga. I did not make this and all the credit goes to... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 3/4
Chapter 5-20

Chapter 66-84

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By Heaven-fell

Now you're probably thinking- how did we get from chapter 20-80?
Well that's because the real harem manga doesn't start till about this chapter
All you need to know is that people are plotting to take down chuxia ye's company (the rich girl) she is kidnapped and it's up to the protagonist to save her.

Link to the manga:

https://readm.org/manga/16807/66/all-pages

Now let's get into it!

The story so far: Feng qin is now in the building where chuxia ye is being held.... which is her own company building... which is a sin in and of its self but imma be generous and Not count it

1.This entire chapter is just these two fighting

2. Listen, that's sad, but SHES A FUCKING BILIONARE, dead dad or not, she still has it better than pretty much anyone out there

3. Boo-fuckin-hoo. All she as is a dead father figure and a dead father, but she's a rich girl who lives in a fucking mansion! She could hire someone to be her father for fucks sake

4. That's not how agreements work, you can't threaten someone into signing an agreement and then call it fair. That's like me holding you at gunpoint and making you sign a contract saying You consent to me murdering you

5, why is Ye acting so cocky? He is literally holding you hostage, you don't have any leveraging material.

6, Remember what i said about this being Chuxia's company building? How the hell did you sneak a bomb into it?

7. Feng has a point, and Chuxia apparently has no self preservation instinct

8. Feng has been seen to be a teenage boy throughout this manga, when did he become such a dapper chap that his using the phrase "my lady" and "troublesome" you're not Sherlock Holmes, you're not authorized to make quips like that, that's a sin in my book

9. WTF?!  it's in a safe! If that safe is airtight then it'll be fine and you can fish it out of the rubble! There is no reason you need to risk your life

10. You would not have the Physical strength to exert yourself enough to break down a door in the middle of a raging fire. Smoke inhalation would get to both of these fools

11. Temper? What has she done that's signified that she's angry? Sure she's irrational but that's different

12. That is not a four story building that is a sky scraper. "Oh they're just lower down!" No because they go to the roof later

13, congratulations Feng you have saved the damsel... and broken her neck in the process. That has got to be at least a 12 story drop and given how fast you would be falling (two teenagers about 140 and 120 pounds accelerating at 9.8mps) you would be splattered because given the surface tension of water, that would be just as harmful as hitting the pavement.

14, Also why does a company building have a pool?

The story so far:

Feng wakes up in the hospital, and is visited by Lawrence, who has to hide because chuxia considers him a traitor.

15. That's not how the law works, private corporations and company's can't detain and hold people, that's actually a crime and can get you arrested and your company seized, even more so they can't determine the fate of said people.

-1. have to commend the author, having Feng move in with chuxia may be contrived, but it was a fucking power move that got me interested, one sin removed

SEASON TOTAL:
Chap1: 15
Chap2: 17
Chap3:17
Chap4: 14
Total: 63

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