MY MAJOR GENERAL

By sidnaazballad

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THE STORY REVOLVES AROUND ARMY WORLD WHERE TWO PEOPLE MET AND FELL HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE WITH ONE ANOTHER ... More

CHARACTER SKETCH
1.DREAMS
2.SHUKLA'S DEFENCE ACADAMY
3.FIRST DAY AT SHUKLA'S ACADEMY
4.TUM MILE
NEW STORY
6." SHE FAINTED "
7. NEW HOME
8. MERE SAMNE WALI KHIDKI MEIN
9. SEXY AND SANA :D
10. DO I LOOK SEXY ???? (#SIDINDEEPTHOUGHTS)
11. A WALK DOWN MEMORY LANE
12. RITA AUNTY BANI SEXY :D
13. DO YOU TRUST ME ??๐Ÿ˜
14. KULLU BABY ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž
15. BASIC FIRST AID
16. SWEET SWEET COMMENT ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
17. PROUD OF YOU SIR ! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
18. PEE LOON ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿคค
19. HER FIRST EVER ARMY UNIFORM . ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

5. NAYE RISHTE

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"look there"

a girl screamed

girl-uff hot yaar

arti-aa gaya mera majnu ( tumhari galat fehmi khatam hi nahi hoti)

sz-hayee mein mar na jao( mar jao)

shefali-sana waha dekh ( shehnaaz was not interested to look at him but she give in to shefali's demand)

sana was dumbfounded to see him

sana's pov

ye yaha kya kar raha hai  ,bada ajjeb admi hai yeh kahi sunane toh nahi aaya mereko,ammma no

end of pov

sana whispers to shefali-ye yaha kya kar raha hai

shefali-my dear yahi hai "the sidharth shukla" major officer 

sana-kya.............aree yaar ( she sighs)

she was shocked to hear that the same person she met before is sidharth

man-SILENCE

kushal- salutes him and vice versa ,followed by soldiers

kushal-meet major general sidharth shukla

sid-good morning soldiers  and all of a sudden he screamed aap logo ko samaj nahi aata hai jab mein baat karu koi beech mein nahi bole am i clear to all

soldiers- yes sir

sid-i hope u all will perform well ,today is your first day of training aur kehte hai na first impression is the last impression i m here to watch u all okay any questions  (sternly)

soldiers-no sir

sid-yaad rakhiye ga mere nazar aap sab par hai ,kushal u can take the lead now

kushal-yes sir

sid-go ahead kushal

sidharth failed to notice shehnaaz 

he goes and sat on a chair comfortably 

sana-hushh bach gaye ( she sighs)

shefali-kya bach gaye 

sana-nothing

on other side

arti-hayee hotty

sz-woh mera hai thike

arti-hatt

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kushal-let's start with the basic training

when it comes to training kushal always becomes a serious person . he was roaming quietly noting each and every soldiers and made his way towards a boy.

kushal-what's this

boy-what sir

kushal-aapke baalo ka kya karena ha...............

paras-sir aaj kal ka fashion hai

paras's cut

kushal-shut up u bloody wait .......pankaj 

pankaj-yes sir

kushal-call the barber 

pankaj - yes sir

meanwhile

shefali-wow kafi strict hai

girl-shh sant raho varna punishment mil jaegi

sana-aap kon

girl-hi i m deepanshi 

sana-hi sana

girl-shhh.....................

sidharth noticed her talking ...........oops only her not deepanshi kyu i don't know

meanwhile kushal asked the barber to give every boy a military cut ................

sidharth made his way towards sana

sid-you..........................

shehnaaz got scared when he heard his deep voice

sana-y..yes sir ( fumbling and nervous)

sid- jao pure ground ka 3 chakkar lagayo

deepanshi felt guilty after what happened ,she opened her mouth to speak when sid stopped her 

sid- don't speak ( he screamed)

she didn't listened to him and was abt to speak when shehnaaz glared her 

she kept quiet.................

sana-but........s.........sir

sid noticed everything and said

sid- no questions do as i say ( he screams)

sana-ok

sana started running .................

meanwhile the boys were getting their hair cut

seeing sana arti and shefali started their blabbering

arti-bichari

sz-aww sidharth kabhi mereko punishment nahi de sakta

( inki bajate hai ab)

sid-u both ( arti n shefali) get lost

arti-sir

sid- i won't repeat get lost ..........................

amma ho gaya inka popat and dono dayyan left

sana's pov

mein ki kara isne itna jyada punishment kyu diya hai mene toh abhi tak kuch khaya bhi nahi hai babaji raksha kari mujhe dizzy kyu feel ho raha hai , menu pata tha ye aaj kuch tho karega mujhe uski waqt samaj jana chahiye tha jab woh chup chap chala gaya , i know tumne isleye badla liya hai huh! yaar mein ki kara ab ...........huh!sana u aren't weak girl chal baag tej tej tu kar sakti hai

end of pov

and like this she completed her task with full determination

sidharth was amazed to see her determination

sid's pov

what is this girl even . i asked her to complete damn 3 round of full ground but itne jaldi i never thought uff she must be tired huh shut up boy kya soch raha hai .......................

end of pov

sana completed and sat on the ground,panting

sid-bethi kya ho khadi ho jayo go n stand in the line

sana-( breating heavily)- si.......sir

sid-i said move( he screams)

sana-ok

she moved towards her line and stand behind deepanshi

deepanshi- i'm sorry baby mere vajah se

sana-chup kar i was at fault baat mein kar rahi thi tune bas saanth karne ki koshish ki thi 

deepanshi-u know tum bohot pyaari ho

sana-u too

deepanshi-friends

sana-friends

deepanshi-ab chup ho jate hai varna vapas inka shuru ho jaega

shefali was constantly gazing them , this time she was standing in different line , her work was interrupted by mr. kushal 

kushal-excuse me 

shefali-aree ek second bhai mere dost bichari thaki hai i need to talk to her

kushal-ok 

shefali felt weird and turned to look at him only to find a pair of eyes staring her intently

shefali was dumbfounded

shefali-i 'm sry sir......................

kushal giggles

kushal-next time no sorry and with that he moved from their

shefali smiled

suddenly a voice came from somewhere

thupppppppppp.........................................

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do comments and voted

did u liked this part

what was that sound?

what will happen in next session of training?

stay tuned to know more

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precap- r u fine..........................





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