Elements of Fire

By Nimarna

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Would the story of the Mahabharat have taken a different course if Karna had stood up for Draupadi in the dic... More

Announcement: Covers
Announcement: Aesthetics
1. The Infamous Dice Game
2. Changes
3. Of Palace Elders
4. More than a Sutputra ?
5. Making Plans
6. The Wedding
7. New Beginnings
8. Maharani of Anga
9. Of Honour and Conscience
10. Overhearing Things
11. Unusual Behaviours
12. Subhadra Reasons
13. Upcoming Festivities
14. Karna Invites a Storm
15. An Incomplete Talk
16. Past and Present
17. Initiatives
18. A strange Feeling
19. Changes and Changing Courses
20. Stepping Out
21. Hibiscus
22. Words and Prayers
23. Checking Moods and Gifts
24. Crumpled Flowers
25. Ritual Fire
26. Mother's Healing Touch
27. Finding Ourselves
28. Some Untangling And New Depths
29. Anchor
Announcement
Announcement
30. Unspoken And Heard
31. A Hidden Listener
32. A Decision
Announcement
33. Instructions
34. A Long Night -1
35. A Long Night-2
37. A Long Night- 4
38. A Long Night- 5
Announcement
39. Draupadi Resolves
40. Strange Coincidence-1
41. Strange Coincidence- 2
42. A Mute and Perplexed Spectator
43. A Talk
44. Reassuring Doubtfully
45. Getting Ready
46. Draupadi Decides to Act
47. Negotiations -1
48. Negotiations -2
49. Negotiations -3
50. Negotiations -4
51. Answering Responses
52. New Feelings -1
53. New Feelings -2
Announcement
54. In Light and Dark
55. Of Two Fire-Borns -1
56. Of Two Fire-Borns -2
57. Of Two Fire- Borns -3
58. Of Two Fire-Borns -4
Announcement
59. Of Two Fire-Borns -5
Announcement
60. Of Two Fire-Borns -6
61. His Daughter, Her Daughter
62. Conversing of the Future? -1
Announcement
Announcement
63. Conversing of the Future? -2
64. Conversing of the Future? -3
65. Conversing of the Future? -4
66. Conversing of the Future? -5
67. Conversing of the Future? -6
68. Braiding Hairs and Thoughts
69. Putting To Sleep
70. Conditions?
71. Some Discomfiture and Laughter
72. Of Little Girls and Hidden Blushes
73. Of Weaving a Bangle
Announcement: Living Characters
74. Some Glance, Some See
75. Ruffling Thoughts- 1
76. Ruffling Thoughts -2
77. An Imperfection- 1
78. An Imperfection- 2
79. Yudhistira's Remorse -1
80. Yudhistira's Remorse -2
81. Yudhistira's Remorse -3
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36. A Long Night-3

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"Panchali, how does she concern you? What else did you hear?" he asked.

"Aarya I..." she bit her lips, "Aarya..."

"Hmm? I am listening Panchali?" he replied, nodding at her encouragingly.

"Aarya, I got the answers to my questions" she said in a rushed manner.

"But I have barely started asking you my questions" Karna answered back, his ears pricked up at the increased pace of the clanking of her bangles "Why are you so agitated?"

It would be wrong to bring up his parents now, especially when they had been so considerate towards her without thrusting their expectations on them, but at the same time Karna had answered her question so openly, it was only fair that she too give him satisfactory responses as well.

"I overheard...that..." Draupadi began unsteadily "That... you might get married to Vrushali because..."

"Because of what?" he asked gravely.

"Because we don't have a real marital relationship. You are bound in a loveless marriage. We are still very far away from each other" she answered simply deciding to cut away any digression.

"And you thought this would be a good way to bring us closer to each other?" he asked quietly not looking at her.

Draupadi could see the disappointment on his face, the hurt in his eyes, the disapproval in his lips. Only now did she begin thinking if she had indeed taken a hasty, irrational decision capable of creating discord in their lives.

"And you thought I am just another man, nothing more than that, this would make me happy?" he continued, his voice rising.

"You did not give a care to about my self- respect, about the promises I made to you when I brought you here, about my sense of honour" he nearly yelled "Why, Draupadi?"

Draupadi was stunned at his outburst. She had to acquiesce that there was truth in his statements and that she had not given a thought to his perspectives, his feelings. But, then, where had she given the tiniest thought to her own feelings before jumping into this, with the sole purpose of pleasing him.

Yet, she trembled unnoticeably, under the layers of the heavy saree and equally heavy jewellery as she watched the glacial anger course through his form.

"Aarya, why are you talking like this?" she said, angry and afraid at the same time.

"That does not answer my questions" he retorted, looking straight into her eyes.

"My answers lay in my question" she said, readjusting the necklace chocking at her neck "My intentions were pure, unadulterated..."

"Unadulterated? Or driven by jealousy for someone you do not even know?" he hissed "You were letting external forces pressurise us to take a step which we would regret layer. If I wanted this alone, I wouldn't have been patiently waiting, delicately building your trust and comfort... and you were going to bring it all shattering down tonight."

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