Aashqui(On Hold)

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the idea is taken from aashqui 2 .cover by my dear friend @priyu644 More

"intro"

"meet😉"

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A concert was happening.....a singer was singing which was revealed as "Karan luthra"

Karan : "Mujhko iraade de ,kasmein de vaade de
Meri duaon ke ishaaron ko sahare de
Dil ko iraade de naye bahane de
Khwabon ki baarishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki Kar adayein...
Karde idhar bhi tu nigahein
Sun Raha hai na tu....to Raha hoon main
Sun Raha hai na tu...kyun ro Raha hoon main"

He was singing with full passion ....people were cheering for him........he take alcohol and start drinking it..

Man: Dekho bewda!!!sharab pee Raha hai...

Karan: "Waqt bhi thehra hai ,kaise kyun ye hua
kaash tu aise Aaye jaise koi dua.
Tu rooh ki raahat hai tu meri amanat hai ......
Apne karam ki Kar adayein karde idhar bhi tu nigahein ..
Sun Raha hai na tu ro Raha hoon mian
Sun Raha hai na tu ...kyun ro Raha hoon main

The man throw juice on Karan .Karan got angry and pull him from audience and start slapping him.
Reporters were recording ..

Reporter:Karan luthra......the almost flop singer...aaj unhone ek aur concert kharab kardiya...shayad unko koi dimaghi problem Hain...

Karan: what did you just say? Flop singer.

He slapped the reporter....

Karan(angrily) : how dare you?

He was punching the reporter continuously. Rishabh interferes and stoped the fight.karan start going towards car .Rishabh stopped him.

Rishabh(angrily): kya tha wo sab??

Karan(attitude): main jaa Raha hoon?

Rishabh: tu yahan Kisi ko Nahi jaanta Karan? Ye shehar Naya hai tere liye ....

Karan(emotionally): shukar!!! Meri Zindagi main Kuch Naya to aya...

Rishabh cupe his face.

Rishabh: Karan tu apni fame ko seriously kyun Nahi leta....abhi bhi waqt hai ,tu superstar hai log tujhe dekhna chahte hain....

Karan pushed him..

Karan: lekin Mera kya? Log mujhe dekhna chahte hain par main aisi Zindagi se tang aa Gaya hoon... Saans Lena Chahta hoon ya hospital janaa Chahta hoon log har cheez capture Karna chahte hain aur main aisi Zindagi Chahta hi Nahi hoon.

Rishabh: Karan....

Karan: leave me alone ......

Karan sit in the car and start going to a bar ..he put glasses on and a muffler. he was drinking and driving fastly.

Suddenly, a girl come infront of car ...Karan turned his car making a very bad noise . Bag fall from girls hand. The girl sit on the ground. Karan come outside and saw tomatoes scattered on ground.the girl was revealed to be preeta arora

Karan: are you fine???

Preeta: main Bach gayi....

Karan: yes !!you are save..

Preeta stand up . Karan was lost in her beautiful eyes

There looks:

Karan(lostly):are you fine?

Preeta(cryingly): main to theek hoon par tumne mere tamataron Ka murder Kar Diya hai.

Karan(cutely):you mean tomatoes.....

Preeta: ji Haan !!!tomatoes Jin Ka murder Kiya hai tumne. Pata hai 200 rupees kilo ho Gaye hain

Karan(laughs): main ap ko pay karta hoon....

Preeta move forward.....

Preeta(angrily): 200 rupees bohat zyada hote hain aur tumne kya kaha pay Karo ge? (Shouts) koi zaroorat Nahi hai? Tum ameeron ko  saza deni Chahiye aur tumhari saza ye hai hai ke mere tamtar uthao...jaldi...

Karan(scared): ok....

Karan pick up the tomatoes. He Lean on the floor and tried taking out the tomatoes.

Preeta(softly): wo tamatar kharab ho gayein hai uthane ki zaroorat Nahi hai ....thanks for the help

Karan: I am sorry again....

Preeta (smiles):it's ok...

She start going.....

Karan(desperately): your name....

Preeta(shockingly): Rakhi ....sawant....

Karan(shocked more): Rakhi sawant?

Preeta: kyun Nahi ho sakti!?

Karan(cutely): tum us type ki lagti to Nahi ho....

Preeta(pouting): tum larkiyon ko un ke namon se judge karte ho. Mujhe tumse na male favourism ki badbu aa rahi hai.

Karan take her bag.

Karan(cutely) : badbu mujhse !! Pata hai ! Main din main 5 times nahata hoon.

Preeta stops and shocking see him...

Preeta(shocked): 5 times....

Karan proudly nods with dimple wali smile.

Preeta(stammers): 5 times a day!!!

Karan smiles proudly setting his collars

Preeta(shouts): kitne fazool kharch ho tum.....logon ko peene ke liye paani Nahi milta aur yahan Bhai Sahab 5 times nahata hai wo bhi din main....kalyug Nahi to kya hai ye...

Karan: drama queen!!!

Preeta: now get lost !!!mujhe kaam par jaana hai..

Karan(tensed): is waqt kaam!!!

Preeta(smiles): unlike you mujhe rozana nahane ke liye bhi paise kamane parte Hain samjhe...tumhari Tarah (mimicks) 5 times Ka day (laughs) naha Nahi Sakti..

Karan(smiles ):naam to bata do...

Preeta: bataya to hai....

Karan: I am asking about your real name?

Preeta: phir Kabhi mile ...to tab bataon gi!

Karan(shouts): Mera naam Nahi pochogi...

Preeta(smiles):  phir Kabhi!!!

Karan also smiles.

Preeta reached the bar and Karan was sitting there. Preeta reaches on stage and hold the mic..and sang the same song which Karan sang on the stage. Preeta noticed Karan and start glaring him . She though that he is stalking her. But Karan was lost in her .when preeta finished the song .everybody start clapping.

Karan come forward and took away the muffler and glasses

Preeta(shockingly):Karan luthra...

Karan(lostly):  yeah I am the Karan luthra.

Preeta: ap ...yahan kya Kar rahe Hain??

Karan: tumhara gaana sun Raha tha!

Karan hold preetas hand and help her to sit on couch and sat on the ground.

Preeta(scared): ap Karan luthra Hain..main ne bilkul Nahi pehchana aur ap ko kya kya Kaha ...apki insult ki ap se tamatar uthaye ,ap ko 5 times a day nahane se mana Kiya ap

Karan put finger on her lips

Karan(drunk): babydoll! Quite...

Preeta: babydoll...

Karan(smiles): tumhari awaz bohat pyari hai ...tum main ek Ada hai jo tumhe sab se mukhtalif banati hai sab se alag...

Preeta: main to bas aise hi and I am sorry !!main ap Ka gaana apke saamne aise gaa rahi thi.

Karan: Mera gaana mujhse bhi acha gaaya tumne. Tumne mujhe mehssos karwaya ke mere andar kitni khamiyan hai...

Preeta: I am sorry...

Karan(smiles drunk): shhhhhh...babydoll!!!!

Preeta: mujhe babydoll mat bulaiye...

Karan(cutely):agar tum chahti ho ke main tumhe babydoll na bulaon to mujhe apna preety name batao?

Preeta: preeta Arora...

Karan(smiles like an idiot): preety preeta !!!preeta ye to rhyming Hain na? aur Rakhi sawant ...wo jhoot that na...?

Preeta: yeah!!!(cutely) maa kehti Hain ke ajnabiyon ko naam Nahi batate...

Karan: tum main bohat talent hai!

Preeta: pata Nahi aisa Konsa talent hai Jo aaj tak Kisi ko nazar Nahi Aaya par ap ko nazar aa Raha hai.

Karan and preeta were lost when Rishabh came and hold Karan by shoulder

Rishabh: tujhe pata hai Teri gadi darkht (tree) par lagi hui thi main Kitna pareshan tha???

Karan(lost in her): preeta kahin jaana Nahi !!main aa Raha hoon

Rishabh: chal tu...

Preeta colleague::: ek no Ka flirt aur awaara hai ye!!!khud Ka career khatam hone ko hai aur ye tujhe singer banaye ga preeta....aaj bhi reporter ko maar Kar Aaya hai bloody looser...chal preeta

Preeta: itne bare singer Hain unhone rukne ki Kaha hai hum kaise!!!

Preeta colleagues drag her with them

Karan: preeta ek singer hai....yar Bari kamaal ki hai...

Rishabh: Kahan hai...

Karan: wo......

He turns

Karan(cutely): Kahan gayi??? Hey you!!!preeta Kahan gayi...

Man: wo to chali gayi??

Karan: kahan rehti hai wo..

Man tell him the address...

Karan: thanks mere Bhai.

He kiss the man's cheek.

Karan: main aa Raha hoon babydoll

Rishabh: to babydoll ke paas Nahi Ghar Jaye ga

Karan sit on the ground

Karan(ziddi bacha): no means no!!!! Baby doll ke paas jaana hai.....

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