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This is story of an strict ips training Commander and a cute funny and lazy candidate 😜😜 Om as a commander... More

Prologue
Characters
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 6
want to ask something 😭😶😭😶
Part 7
part 8
Part 9
Part 10
part 11
Part 12
Part 13
announcement🙈
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
New story 🤧
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
IMPORTANT!!
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!
Part 48
Part 49
Part 50
Epilogue 🥺

Part 5

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This chapter is dedicated to my 100th follower EATABLES ani di 😍😍😍🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈 hope you like it

And most excited reader for this story SanjanaSingh711 sorry for late update 😶😶....

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All candidates were standing in ground

Om: Good morning officers

All: Good morning sir

Om: So today is second day of your training... and today's task is cycle race. Am I clear

All: yes sir

Harsh: So officers there is a board... you all have to take a number and paste it on board and remember that the number will be your position.... What do you think that which position you will get in this race you have to paste that number beside your name and you have to get that position.Am I clear

All :Yes sir

All paste the numbers one by one. Gauri went and picked up thirty number which was last position. She noticed that om was glaring at her. She gulped and put it back and picked first position. Samaira chuckled

Gauri: kya has rhi ho maarenge udd jaogi

(Why are you laughing. I will punch you and you will fly)

Om: Officer Gauri  behave yourself

Gauri: Haan nhi to.... sir yeh has kyun rhi

(Sir why she is laughing)

Samaira: Haan to mera muh Mai hasungi

(So my mouth I will laugh)

Gauri: Haan to mar jao haste haste par hamare upar mat haso

(So laugh and die but don't laugh upon me)

Samaira: Shut up I will laugh hahahaha what will you do.

Gauri: Pagal to ho hi

(You are mad)

Sam: Tum pagal

(You are mad)

Gauri:Tum pagal

(You are mad)

Sam: Tum pagal

(You are mad)

Gauri: Tum

(You)

Samaira: Tum

(You)

Gauri: Tu....(cutted by om)

Om shouting: Shut up you both... just shut up not a single word....are you both a kid..... stupid

Sam: Sir but she said first

Gauri: Maaren Abhi tujhe jhoote se

(Should I beat you with shoes)

Om: Officer Gauri mind your language.... and agar dobara aapne fight start ki tab dekhna

(If you will fight again then you will watch)

Gauri: sorry sir

Om: So take your positions

All takes their positions with cycles.

Race started.

Gauri while riding cycle: Jindagi ek Safar hai Suhana... isme kal kya ho kisne Jana...arre udd le udd le auoooo udd le udd le auoooo

Other side Omkara Harsh and other commanders and members of training camp were monitoring them

All chucked accept om

Om: this girl oh god....lag rha hai movie ki shooting karne aayi hai

(Seems to be she is here for shooting of any movie)

Harsh: aapka kya jaa rha hai woh gaa rhi hai to....wo race to kar rhi hai na ab chahe wo usme sing kare chahe dance

(What is happening to you...she is racing and it's her choice whether she sing or dance)

Om: There is something named Discipline

Harsh: 😏😏accha ok

After sometime.

Gauri was riding at first position

A coach: Hmm her speed is really Good... what you say omkara sir

Om: Hmm

Just then a girl fall from cycle.

Om: ohh she fell go and check her

Gauri looked at her: arre yeh to gir gyi... hame help karni chahiye

(Ohh she fell I should help her)

She stopped her bicycle

Om: she is totally mad ab kya kar rhi hai

(What she is doing now)

Gauri went to that girl: hey are you ok

Girl: yes and thanks yaar

Just then one coach came to them.

C: Officer Gauri you continue

Gauri: Ok sir

She again start riding but she was at last position

Om rolled his eyes : yeh ladhki...Jab ham sab hain yahan help ke liye to what need to leave the race in between.

(This girl.. when we are here for helping...than what need to leave the race in between)

Harsh: Tujhe badi fikar hai😏😏

(You are too much worried)

After sometime all candidates completed their race except Gauri.

All stand in line.

Om: So now I will declare that in how much time you have completed your races.

He was declaring just then Gauri came

Gauri: Sir rukiye sir rukiye ham bhi hain na

(Sir stop sir stop I am also here)

Om rolled his eyes: And officer Samaira your timing is four minutes fifty three seconds....well done you are at first... and officer Gauri your timing is 14 minutes 20 seconds and you are again last

Samaira: Thank you sir.

Om: Ok go and take rest...

All went from there











Precape: some rikara romance...

(I know you all were desperately waiting for this precape 😏😏)

Sorry for small late and super boring update 😭😭😭..
I am very busy so kuch samajh nahi aaya.

Please maaf kar do thoda Sa🤪

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