Hey people!! I just want to thank everyone for taking interest in my story and giving me back so much feedback. Now, I really want to apologize for what I'm gonna say next, though a few of you wll take a sigh of relief...I actually wish I had so die hards who would murder me for my next sentence **wishful thinking**
Anyways, to my great chagrin, I began doing so research about where the caravan went next, and I realized that a made one or two, (or a few) major mistakes, which totally KILL the historical accuracy. And I was a bit disappointed with the whole middle of part two (in the literary aspect of it), not to mention how people who don't get the story are totally scratching their heads, so I think the easiest thing for me, would be to finish my research and start over again. So basically, the first two chapters are officially null and void. So I'm gonna take a little break, and hopefully, I will put up a prologue or something soon. Knowing me,that would probably be iin a few hours, but ah well
Iltimaas Dua
here's the new story!
http://www.wattpad.com/872206-this-is-the-land-karbala