Broken without you

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Manhusiyat track . Not based on serial . Its something different . More

Nafrat .
Proud
Sahara
Orders
Dard
Love
Shock
Conversation
Truth revealed
Guilt
New start
Again
Shaadi
Choose
Pariksha
Bhai
Confrontation
Haldi
Good news
Happy ending
Thank you

Sagaai

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Saturday morning .
Naina and phulla bua sat in flight at 4 in the morning so that they can reach by 9 in the morning . Because sagaai would be held at 11 .

In Ahmedabad

Anand bela , swati 's father mother , rakesh , Arjun were working because swamun and preedit engagement was to be Held together .

IT WAS GOING TO BE OCCUR IN HALL .

At 10 Am

Mundit entered with their families following them ....

Within few minutes Sameer also came looking very handsome in blue Kurta (Diwali pe joh pehna tha Sameer ne serial mai  )

Munna was wearing orange Kurta and off white pajama and pandit was wearing red Kurta with white pajama .

The trip was looking handsome as always .

The ladke wale was getting special treatment by ladki wale , offering cold drinks , snacks , etc
After sometime ,

SwaPree enters . Looking very beautiful .
Swati wearing orange patola Saree with heavy gold necklace and earrings .
Preeti was dolled up in red bandhej Saree with a pearl set .
Mundit were knocked out seeing their girls .
Sameer laughed on their condition though he was also dying to see his girl his Naina .

Swapree sat beside mundit .

Swamun were having a romantic eyelock

Pandit holds Preeti's Hand coming closer whispers " hayee Dil le lo "
Preeti blushes and says " mere pass hi toh hai "

Sameer fake coughs and says " romance baad mai kar Lena pehle sagaai karlo " 

Preedit and swamun blushes ..

Suddenly someone shouts , Arey phulla bua aa gayi .

All eyes on the gate .

Phulla bua enters alone . The gang stands up and sees that bua Dadi was walking alone .

All takes her aashirwad ..

When Anand asks " Naina Kaha hai Buaji "

Sameer and gang eyes were fixed on gate .

When phulla bua says " woh nahi aa subah subah production walo ka phone aa gaya kuch zaruri kaam tha toh voh nahi aa payi "

Kyaa ??? The gang shouts together .

Uske liye mujhse zyada kaam zaruri hai , preeti says with tears brimming her eyes .

Tujhse zyada jaruri toh mai khud bhi nahi hu , a voice Comes from the Gate ,

All looks up and say Naina standing with tears and lips turned in a smile .
She was wearing a parrot green and blue Salwar Kurta with minimum make-up . A blue Bindi adoring her forehead . Ears lighten up with earrings . Her brownish hair flying in air . She looked adorable  (Inspired by Ashi's dress in janmastami segment )

She walked towards the gang .

And hugged Preeti . Both the sisters hugged each other so tight that even air can't pass between them . All were adorning the bond .

Preena broke the hug and smiles widely seeing each other after three year ,

Naina hugs swati too and congratulates mundit with a warm smile .

Naina takes Anand and bela's blessing and mundit swamun parents blessing too ..

All whole heartily blessed her .

Naina ignores two person thier rakesh and Sameer ..

Sameer felt his heart beating fast seeing Naina .

Soon the sagaai function ended .

The gang planned to stay back there with naina
All the family members left .

Naina was feeling nervous seeing Sameer after years still made her heart dance , she thought why can't her heart listen to her mind .

After everyone left ,

SaMundit  & swapreena sat in circle .

Bahut yaad aayi Teri Naina mujhe , swati says holding naina's hand .

Mujhe bhi , naina replied with a smile 

Bahut garv mai mujhe tujh par Naina , preeti says side hugging her

Thank you , naina again replies with small warm smile ..

Sameer was observing that naina was even not looking at him . Does she hate him now . No his heart answered and gathering courage he asked , Kaisi ho Naina ?

Naina's heart missed few beats just now hearing her name from his mouth made her name more beautiful .

Naina looked at him and calmly says , mai theek hu tum log Kaise ho ?

Hum toh bade maje mai hai Naina . Tumhari vajah se mujhe meri preeti mil gayi tu nahi samjhati toh Mera Kya hota , pandit says thankfully ,

Naina just smiles not getting what to say . She wondered the writers also face this situation .

Swati excitedly Said , naina tu toh madhuri ko bhi hara de ab , ek dum heroine lag rahi hai , Tere baal chehra figure sab mast ho gaye yaar , vaise pehle bhi tu mast lagti thi par ab toh chaar Chand lag gaye .

Naina wondered why isn't she able to answer she relpied swati with a smiles and thank you

Preeti observed her uneasiness her discomfort

Preeti calmly asks , ab itni badi writer ban gayi hai toh humse baat bhi nahi karegi  .

Naina looked at Preeti and trying to be calm she Said , mai kabhi position ki vajah se nahi badalti Mere liye Paisa or position se zyada family important hai .

Mera voh matlab nahi tha Naina , preeti says quickly not making Naina feel sad .

Naina smiles and says , pata hai koi baat nahi mujhe ek call Karna hai mai baju wale PCO se call karke aati hu ..

Naina leaves even though she is also not happy with her behaviour but she never liked someone comparing her with position and money .

Samundit and swapree left shocked seeing Naina so changed .

Yeh Naina ko Kya ho gaya ? Munna asks

Pata nahi jab gayi thi toh itna bolti thi ki chup hi nahi hoti thi par aayi hai toh itna kam bol rahi hai ki aisa lag raha hai muh mai dahi jama diya , pandit says remembering earlier teen Naina 

Usne mujhe maaf nahi kiya hai , Sameer says sadly

Par usse meri baat kabhi buri nahi lagi aaj Kya hua , preeti looked surprised .

Shayad usse acha nahi laga tune usse compare kiya isliye , swati suggests .

All goes in deep thinking ..

Naina calls raj from the PCO

Hello raj mai Naina ,

Arey Naina kab se Wait kar raha hu yaar , agar dus minute or tera call nahi aata toh mai Ahmedabad ki flight mai Beth ke aa jata .

Pagal hai kya ? Raj ajeeb sa lag raha hai maan nahi lag raha .

Kya hua Naina woh Sameer Mila Kya ?

Haa abhi do minute pehle tak saath hi the , pata nahi kyu aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch bura hone wala hai .

Naina tu Chinta mat Kar Aur faltu baato mai dhyan mat de , chod tu apna dhyan rakh or Sameer ko vapas hurt Mat Karne Dena .

Ha nahi Karne dungi mere baap , sau baar se jyada bol chuka hai tu yeh baat .

Hahaha , chal bye dhyan rakh raat ko call Kar Dena ek baar sone se pehle . Pata nahi kyu bechaini toh mujhe bhi ho rahi hai subah se .

Theek hai raj byeee

Byeee Naina dhyan rakhna

Naina hangs up the call . And goes again to the hall . She saw everyone in deep thinking .

She calls them Preeti swati Munna pandit Sam ... Sameer kya hua

All comes out thier thoughts .

Sameer stands up and says " I m sorry naina for all my mistakes and I love you from the bottom of my heart "

Naina felt wetness in her eyes .

She couldn't hold it she ran outside .

Precap : accident of naina 😲

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