Okay, so I know some of these chapters would seem rushed, or not perfectly written, but let me tell you that I'm planning on rewriting them as soon as I get the ideas out. I can't focus if my head is full, so I need to write my ideas first, and only then, I'll be able to correct my mistakes and rewrite some phrases, add new bits and all that.
This is precisely why I want you guys to tell me what you think, I care about your opinion, I've never done this and I want my writing to become better and better. So if it concerns the storyline, the sentences, certain words, PLEASE tell me. I would be really grateful because it would be really helpful for me to get better and for you to enjoy the story more...
Thanks a lot!!