Badtameez Dil (Completed)

By RicharahejaR

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A Story of A Playboy And A Simple Girl More

.Intro.
Story of two different poles
First Meeting
Who is she
Night Party
Together in Shimla Valley
Karan's Past
The Love Story Begins
Confession
Karan's Anger
Karan Met Priyank
Promo
Engagement
Mehendi and Sangeet
Finally Married
Karan's Shocking Revelation
Preeta's Decision
Shivani Luthra
Preeta met an accident
Hope
Note
Karan's Obsession
Rishi comes on Tara's wedding
Misfortune
Epilogue

Badtameez Dil

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By RicharahejaR

Karan left with Priyansh with a heavy heart. He never wanted to leave her at this tough moment. But the truth is he can't face her right now. He can't face his love broken. Despite of that he can't face the mother who lost her child just now. He can't say her that their child is no more. They lost it.

After sometime....

Doctor call Priyank and Tara as Preeta was getting her consciousness back.

Tara: Hum kyse Preeta ko face krenge Priyank?? Wo toot jayegi. I can't face her. Main nhi kr sakti yeh.

Priyank: Mujhe pta hay yeh situation bohot tough hay but Hume krna hoga. Karan ko Ansh sambhal lega lekin Preeta ko hume hi sambhalna hoga. Hume yeh karna hoga Tara.

They entered into her ward. Preeta was still unconscious. Priyank sat beside her and caressed her hair. Preeta slowly opened her eyes. Tara hold Priyank's hand being tensed. Preeta opened her eyes and tried to sit but she felt pain.

Preeta: Ahhhhhhh.

Priyank held her hand and helped her to sit.

Priyank: Aram se. Aram se.

Preeta: Bhaiya ap... Or main yaha hospital me...

She remembered that she was going to attend puja but suddenly she felt pain in her stomach. She immediately keep her hand on her belly and felt nothing.

Preeta: Mera bacha....

Priyank and Tara looked at each other.

Preeta: Bhaiya ap dono chup q hay bataiye na kaha hay mera bacha.

Priyank and Tara remained numb. Preeta shouted...

Preeta: Main kuch puch rhi hoon. Bataiye kaha hay mera bacha??

Preeta grabbed Priyank's collar and shouted.

Preeta: Bhaiya ap chup q hay bataiye kaha hay mera bacha. Tara di ap chup q hay kaha hay mera bacha???

Priyank shouted...

Priyank: Nhi rha tera bacha. Kho diya humne use.

That was a huge blow for Preeta. She became shocked.

Preeta: Yeh ap.....

Priyank: I'm sorry Princess. She's no more.

Preeta (whispered): Aysa nhi ho sakta... Use kuch nhi ho sakta. Use kuch...

Suddenly she fainted. Tara and Priyank became shocked.

Priyank: Preeta.. Preeta...

He patted her cheeks.

Priyank: Preeta uth bacha. Dekh meri taraf.

Tara: Aankhen kholo Preeta. Shouted Doctor... Doctor...

Screen shifted to Karan.

Karan is shown sitting in a hotel room with a blank expression. Tear marks were perfectly visible on his cheeks but he's not crying anymore. He was siting numb on the bed.

Priyansh came with a glass of juice. Seeing Karan's condition a lone drop of tear fell from his eye but he removed it. He plastered a fake smile on his face and went to him.

Priyank: Oyee The Karan Luthra yeh le juice pee.

Karan don't even look at him.

Priyank: Dekh agar tu khayega nhi to tera gala kyse khulega?? Or agar gala nhi khula to tere fans tujhpe pakka sade huye tamatar or ande fekenge.

He forcefully laughed but Karan remained the same.

Priyansh: Oyee moun vrat rakh liya hay kya tune??

Finally Karan spoke.

Karan: Mujhe akela chod de Ansh.

Priyansh: Are akela chod du mtlb?? Are sala hoon main tera. Mera pura hak hay tere sath rehne ka. Or...

Suddenly Priyansh's phone rang. He whispered...

Priyansh: Bhai call kr rhe hay...

Karan immediately looked at him.

Karan: Bhaiya call kr rhe hay... Jaroor Preeta ne call kiya hoga. Ansh tu call receive kr.

Priyansh: Okk tu shant ho ja main bat krta hoon.

Priyansh received the call.

Priyansh: Haan bhai bolo.

Priyank: Ansh Karan kaha hay??

Priyansh: Yehi hay lekin kya hua bhai?? Pree thik hay na?? Apki awaz Ayse q sound kr rha hay??

Priyank: Ansh tu Karan ko phone de. Preeta bohot hyper ho rhi hay. Is waqt bs Karan hi use shant kr sakta hay.

Priyansh: Acha deta hoon...

Suddenly Karan snatched the phone from him.

Karan: He.. hello babydoll.... Babydoll tum sun rhe ho?? Dekho kuch nhi hua. Sb thik ho jayega... Bab.. babydoll...

He checked the phone and saw the call cut.

Karan: Yeh call kyse cut ho gaya??

He called him again.

The number you've dialed is currently not reachable. Please try again later.

Karan threw the phone on the bed frustratedly.

Karan: Ughh yeh network. Ise bhi abhi hi jana tha.

Priyansh: Karan shant ho ja. Dekh kuch nhi hua Pree ko. Wo thik hay.

Karan (dangerously): Kuch nhi ho sakta use. Main use kuch nhi hone dunga.

Priyansh: Thik hay. Tu shant ho ja. Yeh le juice pee.

Karan was about to deny but Priyansh forcefully made him drank it. Soon he drift to sleep. Priyansh sighed a little and said...

Priyansh: I'm sorry Karan. But yeh jaroori tha. Agar tujhe kuch ho gaya to meri behen mar jayegi. Or main yeh risk nhi le sakta.

He wiped his tears.

7 days later⏩⏩

Hospital authority discharged Preeta as she was quite fine. But from inside she was totally broken. She wanted to cry wholeheartedly but whom she wanted the most this time he was not with him.

Other side Karan's situation was also the same. He wanted to see his babydoll. His love but may be god doesn't want them to meet each other. He was stacked there for heavy rainfall.

Preeta is shown sitting lifelessly on the bed. Janvi and Mayank entered in her room.

Janvi: Hii Preeta.

They sat beside her.

Mayank: Preeta main soch rha tha ki bohot din hum shopping pe nhi gaye. Chalo na hum shopping pe chalte hay aj.

Janvi: Yeah Mayank is right. Please Preeta chalo na.

Preeta (faintly): Mujhe kahi nhi jana. Tum log jao.

Janvi and Mayank looked at each other and said..

Mayank: Are Preeta akele maza nhi ayega. Please chalo na.

Janvi: Haan Preeta please. Hamare khatir.

Preeta: Main keh rha hoon na.... Acha thik hay. Main chalungi lekin bs thodi der k liye.

Janvi immediately hugged her.

Janvi: Chalega. Umm ruko main tumhare liye dress select kr deti hoon.

Preeta ignored Janvi and tearfully looked at the picture of a baby hanged on their bedroom.

Mayank and Janvi understood her situation.

Janvi: Preeta yeh dress pehno. Chalo jaldi kro.

They took Preeta with them as soon as possible.

Other side...

Karan was frustratedly roaming in the room.

Karan: 7 din ho gaya. Pta nhi kb yeh network ayega. Pta nhi Preeta kysi hay.

Meanwhile Priyansh entered into the room.

Priyansh: Karan tickets mil gaya.

Karan: Flight kb hay??

Priyansh: 2 ghante me.

Karan: Thik hay. Main ready hota hoon.

He immediately left to change his dress.

Preeta is shown roaming in the shopping mall. Suddenly her eyes fell on a baby crib in the child section. She slowly went near the crib and tearfully caressed it.

Suddenly someone said...

Excuse me...

Preeta turned and saw a girl. She wiped her tears and said..

Preeta: Yess.

Girl: Hii I'm Dia. If I'm not wrong tum Karan ki wife ho na??

Preeta: Haan q??

Dia: Tch I'm feeling so sorry for you. Mtlb tum jysi achi ladki ki life barbad ho gaya.

Preeta: Ap kehna kya chahte hay?

Dia: Ohh sorry maine to apna introduction hi nhi diya tumhe. I'm Dia Shergill. Karan ki ex girlfriend. Sorry uske one night stand ka partner.

Preeta: Toh??

Dia: Omg you're not shocked?? Mtlb tum jante ho Karan k past k bare me??

Preeta: Mere pati k past k bare me mujhe nhi janna chahiye kya??

Dia: Are clam down. I'm astonished to see that tumhe sb pta hay. Lekin tell me one think itna sb kuch janne k bad bhi tumne Karan se shadi kyse kr li??

Preeta: It's none of your business. Yeh hamara personal matter hay.

Preeta was about to leave but suddenly Dia said...

Dia: Main to phir bhi ek rat k liye uske sath thi. Lekin tumhe to use apna permanent prostitute bna liya.

Preeta became hell angry by her word. She immediately slapped her.

Dia: You...

Preeta: Himmat bhi kyse hui tumhari mere Karan k bare me aysa ghatiya bolne ki?? Wo pyaar krta hay mujhse. Or apni is gandi zuban se tum uska nam kabhi lena hi mt.

Dia: Mujhe thappad marne se kuch nhi hota Preeta. Tumne kya socha mujhe Karan k life k bare me kuch nhi pta?? You're wrong. I know everything. Tum to pregnant thi na?? To kya hua?? Kaha gaya tumhara bacha??

Preeta became numb by her question.

Dia: Ohoo tumhara to miscarriage ho gaya. Tch Tch Tch. But sachme yeh miscarriage hi tha na?? Ya phir tumhare loveable husband ne...

Preeta (shouted): Shut up. Tb se tumhari bakwas tolerate kr rhi hoon iska yeh mtlb nhi tum kuch bhi bolte rhoge.

Dia: Chillane se sb kuch jhoot nhi ho jata. Chalo maan liya ki wo miscarriage hi tha. Lekin is situation me to Karan ko Tumhare sath hona chahiye na?? As you said he loves you.

Preeta: Use or bhi kam hay. Tum jysi nhi hay wo jo Vella baitha rhega. Uska concert hay.

Dia: Aww tum kitni innocent ho na?? Tumhe kya lgta hay Karan agar chahta to wo apna show cancel nhi kr sakta tha?? Chalo maan liya use kisine jabar basti bhej diya. Lekin kya usne ek call bhi kiya tumhe?

Preeta turned her face to avoid eye contact with her.

Dia: Nhi kiya na?? Mujhe pta tha. Kismat hi kharab hay tumhara. Dekho tumhe yaha rakhkar kiske sath rangraliya mna rha hay. Because Karan kabhi kisise pyaar kr hi nhi sakta. Sayad tumme kuch jyada hi interested ho gaya tha. Dil bhar gaya to chala gaya.

Preeta was standing like a statue. Tears were continuously flowing through her eyes.

Dia: Mujhe kya?? Main to chali. Byee.

Dia left. Her harsh words were ringing in Preeta's ear again and again. Her heart says she's wrong. Karan only loves her. But her mind says Dia is absolutely right. Karan never loved her.

She became frustrated by the war of her heart and mind. She cryingly ran from the mall unaware of that Mayank and Janvi were listening all their talks. Janvi ran behind her.

Janvi: Preeta... Preeta....

While other side

Karan felt something different.

Karan (in mind): Yeh ajeeb si feelings q aa rhi hay mere man me?? Hey bhagban please sb thik rakhna.

Priyansh: Karan kaha kho gaya tu??

Karan: Haan... Kuch nhi. Cab aya??

Priyansh: Kb ka cab aa gaya. Tujhe jana hay ki nhi.

Karan: Hmmm jana hay. Jald se jald mujhe ghar pohochna Hay.

Suddenly Priyansh got a call.

Priyansh: Hello...
.........

Priyansh: What?? Main aa rha hoon.

He hang up the call.

Karan: Kya hua??

Priyansh: Karan tu ghar chala ja. Main thodi der me ata hoon. Bye.

Priyansh hurriedly left.

Karan: Ise kya ho gaya?? Kher main ghar jata hoon. Pta nhi q mujhe yeh ajeeb si feelings ho rhi hay.

Mayank was sitting in the drawing room. He was looking angry.

Mayank: Yeh tune thik nhi kiya Karan. Maine tujhe mna kiya tha Preeta k life k sath mat khel lekin phir bhi tune yeh kiya.

Meanwhile Karan entered into the house. He was about to go upstairs when Mayank stops him.

Mayank: Ruk ja Karan.

Karan (coldly): Mujhe abhi kisise koi bat nhi krni. Mujhe Preeta k pas jana hay.

Mayank: Or kitna barbad krega tu use??

Karan: Tu kehna kya chahta hay???

Mayank: Tu chod q nhi deta use?? Bach jayegi bechari. Tere jyse darinde k sath rehne se better hay wo akeli rhe.

Karan: Kya?? Yeh sb kya bol rha hay tu??

Mayank: Preeta ki sachme miscarriage hi hua tha na?? Ya phir iske piche tu hay??

Karan shouted...

Karan: Mayank....

Mayank: Chilla mt.

Karan: Tu soch bhi kyse sakta hay ki main aysa kr sakta hoon?? Bhool mt wo bacha mera bhi tha.

Mayank: Ohh really?? Isiliye tu apni behosh biwi ko chod kr mouj manane chala gaya tha right?

Karan: Tujhe bhi pta mouj manane nhi gaya tha.

Mayank: To cancel q nhi kiya tune concert?? Kr sakta tha na?? Phir q nhi kiya??

Karan: Q ki bhaiya ne mujhe jabarbasti bheja tha.

Mayank claps sarcastically...

Mayank: Bhaiya ne jabarbasti bheja tu chala gaya?? Mujhe budhu samajhta hay kya tu?? Sach sach bol q nhi deta ki mn bhar gaya tera Preeta k sath. Ab koi or chahiye tujhe. Are agar yehi krna tha to shadi q ki usse?? Apni Mistress bnane k liye??

Karan: Mayank....

Karan slapped him hard.

Karan: Himmat bhi kyse hui teri Preeta k bare me aysi ghatiya bate bolne ki?? Biwi hay wo meri. Or janna chahta hay na ki main q gaya waha?? To sun main waha pe gaya because main Preeta ko face nhi krna chahta tha.

Mayank: Maan liya ki tu isi wajah se gaya tha. Lekin ek call to kr sakta tha na tu in 7 dino me?? Or jaha tk mujhe pta hay tu 2 din me back krne wala tha. To 7 din kyse lg gaye tujhe??

Karan: Maine kabhi nhi socha tha ki tu mere bare me aysa sochega. Thik hay sun heavy rainfall k wajah se network chala gaya tha waha pe. Fas gaye the hum dono waha. Or agar abhi bhi biswas nhi ho rha to Ansh se puch lena. Wo bhi mere sath tha waha.

Mayank: Tu sachme Preeta se pyaar krta hay na??

Karan: Agar itne dino me bhi tujhe samajh nhi aya to I'm sorry. Main kuch nhi kr sakta.

He was about to go but Mayank said...

Mayank: Aj mall me Dia mili thi Preeta se.

Karan: What??

Mayank: Haan...

Mayank narrated him the all story.

Karan: Or tune uske bato ko man liya?? Ek bar bhi nhi socha ki pichle 2 saal se maine Preeta k alawa kisi ladki ko mudkr bhi nhi dekha. Uske alawa kisi or k bare me main kabhi soch bhi nhi sakta. Or tu...

Mayank smiled.

Mayank: I'm sorry. Mujhe kuch jyada hi gussa aa gaya tha. Preeta ko rote dekh mujhe lga tha they're right. But you prove me wrong. Ja Preeta ke pas. She needs you. Bohot kuch hua hay uske sath. Bechari ne apna bacha kho diya.

Karan saw him with teary eyes. Suddenly Janvi shouted..

Janvi: Mayank....

Mayank: Zan ki awaz??

They ran upstairs. Karan and Mayank stops in front of PreeRan's room. Janvi was shivering with fear.

Karan: Zan kya hua?? Tum chilla q rhe ho??

Karan shook her.

Karan: Zan...

Janvi pointed towards the floor.

Janvi: Kh.. khoon.

Karan looked at the floor and saw blood is coming from inside of their room.

Karan (whispered): Preeta...

Mayank knocked at the door.

Mayank: Preeta... Preeta... Preeta darwaza kholo. Preeta....

But she wasn't answering.

Mayank: Karan hume darwaza todna hoga.

They broke the door and became shocked to see the scenario. Preeta is shown lying unconscious on the floor with slit wrist. Blood was continuously oozing from her wound. Karan fell on knees with a thud.
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Karan wipes his tears.

Karan: Us din ek pal k liye lga tha main tumhe kho dunga. Bohot jyada khoon beh rha tha tumhare hatho se. Doctor ne keh diya tha tumhara bachna muskil hay.

Preeta cupped his face and said...

Preeta: Jb tk tum mere sath ho tb tk koi mujhe tumse door nhi le ja sakta. Koi nhi.

Karan: Promise me phir kabhi tum Aysa kuch nhi kroge. Q ki jis din tum nhi us din Karan Luthra bhi nhi. Mar jaunga...

Preeta put her finger on his lips.

Preeta: Shhh. Kabhi ayse mt bolna. Main yehi hoon tumhare pas. Or ab sb kuch thik hay. Main bhi hoon tum bhi ho or Myra bhi hay. Or koi hume alag nhi kr sakta.

Karan: Or main krne bhi nhi dunga. Hay na princess..

They looked at Myra and saw she's sleeping.

Preeta: Are yeh to so gaya. Tumhari beti bilkul tumhari tarha hay. Kumbhkaran.

Karan: Eee Bajarbatti meri beti ko na kuch mt bolna. Waise main kya soch rha tha ki Myra to so gei hay.

Preeta: Toh??

Karan: Toh hum dono ko disturb krne wala koi nhi hay...

He started leaning on her.

Preeta: Karan no.. Karan...

She was about to push him but he hold her hand and caged her in his embrace.

Karan: Ab kyse bhagogi Mrs Luthra??

Preeta: Bhagna chahta bhi kon hay Mr Luthra??

Karan: Acha??

Preeta: Jee bilkul.

Karan: To let's enjoy.

Karan entwined his fingers with her and sealed her lips. They kiss each other passionately.

Screen blurred on their entwined fingers.

The End.

Phewwww... Finally khatam hua ap sabka favourite Badtameez Dil. Thank you for loving this so much. Phir milte hay Tum Ho Na or Shubh Mangal Shabdhan me. Karan or Preeta ki khatti meethi do or kahaniyo me. Tb tk k liye bye bye.






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