Badtameez Dil (Completed)

By RicharahejaR

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A Story of A Playboy And A Simple Girl More

.Intro.
Story of two different poles
First Meeting
Who is she
Night Party
Together in Shimla Valley
Karan's Past
The Love Story Begins
Confession
Karan's Anger
Karan Met Priyank
Promo
Engagement
Mehendi and Sangeet
Finally Married
Karan's Shocking Revelation
Preeta's Decision
Shivani Luthra
Preeta met an accident
Hope
Note
Karan's Obsession
Rishi comes on Tara's wedding
Badtameez Dil
Epilogue

Misfortune

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By RicharahejaR

Karan is shown sitting beside Preeta holding her hand. He was crying silently. Tara and Priyank saw them peeping into the room.

Priyank (whispered): Tara....

Tara: Yehi soch rhe ho na ki jo ladka bahar dad ko dekh kr itna bhadak gaya tha wo abhi ayse kyse ro rha hay??

Priyank: Haan....

Tara: Actually Karan sabse jyada close Dad ke sath the. Mom datte the to Dad, maine kuch kiya to Dad bohot close tha wo dad ke. But jb usne dad ke wajah se sb bikharte huye dekha tha tb sbse jyada toota wahi tha. Tum nhi jante dad k jane k bad kya hua tha. Karan k school me sb dad k nam se use bully krta tha but wo kisike sath bhi wo sb share nhi kr pata tha. Mera bhai sirf 7 saal ke umr me hi itna bada ho gaya ki you can't even imagine. Phir Prakash uncle nd Roy uncle ne Karan ka admission dusre school me krwa diya or Mayank or Janvi ko hamare ghar bhej diya. Pta nhi agar wo dono nhi hote to kya hota.

Priyank gently pulled Tara into a hug. Tara closed her eyes and let her tears flow.

Priyank: I know mom dad k bina chote bhai behen ko sambhalna kitna tough hota hay. Or mujhe yeh bhi pta hay ki you're the strongest. Lekin mere samne you can cry. Mana ki we don't love each other but friends to hay na hum dono.

Tara (while sobbing): Kyun aye wo aj itne dino bad?? Hamari zindagi to unhone pehle hi barbad kr di thi ab jb sb kuch dheere dheere sahi ho rha hay to wo kyun wapas aye hamare zindagi me?? Karan bhi normal ho rha tha. Mom bhi thik ho rhi thi. Sb thik chal rha tha phir q aa gaye apna manhoos chehra leke??

Priyank: Shhh shant ho jao. Or Karan ko kuch nhi hoga. Tum nhi jante meri behen ko. Wo Karan ko kuch hone hi nhi dega.

Tara: I'm very thankful to her. Sachme maine kabhi socha nhi tha Karan k life me aysa koi ayega jo usse itna jyada pyaar krega.

Priyank: Meri Preeta hay hi aysi. Dekhna wo sb thik kr dega.

Tara hummed and hugs Priyank tightly.

Next day morning...

Preeta woke up and saw Karan sleeping in a sitting position holding her hand. Tear marks was visible on his cheeks. She caressed Karan's hair. Karan woke up immediately.

Preeta: Sorry. Umm tum so jao. Main fresh hoke ati hoon.

Karan: Nhi thik hay. Mujhe or nhi sona.

Karan turned his face to hide his tears. He was about to leave but Preeta hold his hand.

Preeta: Baitho yaha.

Karan: Preeta chodo mujhe niche jana hay.

Karan sat beside her turning his face away. Preeta cupped his face and make him face her.

Preeta: Kyun aysa kr rhe ho Karan?? Agar rona hay to ro lo. Par mujhse to apna dard mt chupao.

Karan hugged her tightly and started crying.

Karan: Main bohot dar gaya tha Preeta. Main bohot dar gaya tha jb tum waise behosh ho gaye the. Us insan k wajah se maine pehle bhi bohot kuch khoya hay. Tumhe khone ki himmat nhi hay mujhme.

Preeta: Mujhe tumse koi nhi alag kr sakta. Kitni bhi toofan q na aye. Hum kabhi alag nhi honge.

Karan: Sach na??

Preeta: Haan baba sach. Ab tum rona band kro. Baby kya sochega ki dadda rondu hay.

Karan broke the hug and smiled a bit.

Karan: Main nhi ro rha.

Preeta: I love you.

Karan: I love you more.

He peaked on her lips and left. Preeta smiled seeing him.

7 month later⏩⏩

Preeta is shown standing with a baby bump while Karan was helping her to wear the saree.

Preeta: Karan or kitni der?? Hum late ho rhe hay.

Karan: Bs thodi der or. I'm almost done.

Preeta: Pichle 10 minute se yehi sun rhi hoon I'm almost done. Kya yaar ek saree bhi thik se nhi pehna sakte tum.

Karan: To tumhe kisne kaha tha saree pehenne ko?? Waise to nhi pehenti abhi aysi halat me saree pehenni hay tumhe. Preeta Abhi bhi keh rhi hoon saree change krke kuch or pehen lo. Uncomfortable ho jaogi saree me.

Preeta: Nhi na. Mujhe saree hi pehenni hay. Sb saree pehenge waha. Tara di, Ru, Mannat, Janvi sb saree pehen rhe hay.

Karan: Sb pregnant nhi hay tum ho. Isiliye keh rha hoon.

Preeta: Karan thodi der ki bat hay I'll manage.

Karan: Tum bat kabhi nhi manogi meri. Lo ho gaya.

Karan got up. Preeta kissed him on his cheek.

Preeta: Thank you Bajarbattu.

Karan: Ab chalo. Main car tez nhi chalaunga hum late ho jayenge puja k liye.

Preeta: Thik hay...

Before she could complete her sentence she felt immense pain in her stomach. She sat on the bed holding her baby bump.

Preeta: Ahhhhhhh.

Karan became worried to she her condition.

Karan: Kya hua Preeta?? Are you ok??

Preeta: Karan bohot pain ho rha hay. Ahhhhhhh..... Please Karan kuch kro.

Karan: But abhi to 2 months baki hay. Itni jaldi kyse....

Preeta: Karan Mujhe bohot dar lg rha hay. Karan kuch kro. Bohot pain ho rha hay.

Karan: Tum chinta mt kro. Kuch nhi hoga. Hum hospital chal rhe hay.

Karan pick Preeta in his arms and sat into the car. Preeta was shouting in pain.

Karan: Bs kuch der or Preeta. Hum pohoch jayenge.

Meanwhile Karan's phone rang. It was Tara. Karan received the call.

Karan: Hello.

Tara: Karan tumhare awaz ko kya hua?? Sb thik hay na??

Karan: Tara Preeta ko bohot pain ho rha hay. Tum please jaldi hospital aa jao. Mujhe bohot dar lg rha hay.

Tara: What?? Itni jaldi kyse.... Acha thik hay hum pohoch rhe hay. Tum Preeta ko leke hospital pohcho. Or use sone mt dena.

Karan: Thik hay.

Karan hang up the call and looked at Preeta. Her eyes were almost closed. Karan patted on her cheeks.

Karan: Preeta sona nhi hay. Aankhen khuli raKho.

Preeta (in a semi conscious voice): Karan Mujhe bohot neend aa rhi hay.

Karan: Please Preeta aankhen khuli rakhna. Sona mt. Hum hospital pohochne wale hay.

Karan stops his car in front of the hospital. He rushed into the hospital.

Karan: Meri wife bahar car me hay. Wo pregnant hay. Bohot pain ho rha hay use.

Receptionist: Okk calm down ap yeh form bhar dijiye. Hum dekhte hay.

They took Preeta in the maternity ward.

Karan was sitting worriedly in the waiting area. Meanwhile Tara and Priyank came.

Tara: Wo raha Karan.

Priyank: Chalo.

They went near Karan.

Priyank: Karan kya hua sb thik hay na?? Preeta kaha hay??

Karan: Use andar le gaye hay. Bhaiya mujhe bohot tension ho rha hay...

Suddenly someone said...

"Preeta Luthra ke sath kon hay??"

Karan rushed towards the doctor.

Karan: Main hoon unka husband. Doctor wo thik to hay na??

Doctor: Listen Mr Luthra unhe pre mature labour ho rha hay. I want to know something.

Karan: Jee...

Doctor: Unke pregnancy me bohot complications hay. We want to know kya unke pregnancy period me unki koi accident hua tha??

Karan was about to say no but suddenly he remembered about her accident.

Karan: Haan hua tha. But wo bilkul early stage me hua tha. Doctor ne kaha tha koi problem nhi hay.

Doctor: I think tb problem detect nhi kiya gaya tha. Lekin abhi unki condition bohot critical hay. Hum dekhte hay.

Doctor left. Karan sat on the chair with a thud.

Tara shouted...

Tara: Karan....

Priyank: Karan himmat rakho kuch nhi hoga. Preeta thik ho jayegi.

Karan was sitting numb. Tear drops were continuously flowing from his eyes.

After sometime doctor came with a baby.

Priyank: Doctor aa gaye.

Karan looked at the doctor and rushed towards her.

Karan: Doctor Preeta... Preeta thik hay na??

Doctor: We're sorry Mr Luthra. Humne apke wife ko to bacha liye but we can't save your child. Sorry she is no more.

Karan became shocked.

Tara: Yeh ap kya bol rhe hay doctor...

Karan: Kya main apni bachi ko ek bar le sakta hoon??

Doctor: Sure.

Doctor gave the baby to Karan. Karan Hold her with trembling hand.

He looked at the baby. She was looking like she's sleeping. But the fact is there is no life in her body. Karan was just looking at her. Tears were rolling down from his cheeks.

Nurse: Sir hume body ko morgue me rakhna hoga. Please hume de dijiye.

Karan became furious listening body from her. He shouted.

Karan: Body nhi hay yeh. Meri beti hay. I know ise kuch nhi hua. Yeh bhi iske mom ke tarha hi hay. Mujhe irritate kr rhi hay. Kuch nhi hua ise. I know. Abhi uth jayegi yeh.

He patted on her cheek.

Karan: Hey baby. Uth jao. Dekho main apki dadda hoon. Uth jao.

Karan was continuously trying to wake his baby up but she was not even responding. Tara started crying hugging Priyank. Priyank somehow managed himself and said....

Priyank: Karan unhe bachi de do.

Karan: Nhi main meri beti kisiko nhi dunga. Yeh pta nhi kaha rakh denge ise.

Priyank: Karan meri bat suno... Karan.... He shouted Karan... Kb se keh rha hoon unhe de do bachi.

Priyank took the baby from Karan and gave her to the nurse. She left with the baby.

Karan: Bhaiya apne q diya use?? Are wo pta nhi kaha rakh degi use. Meri beti zinda hay. Wo morgue me q rhegi??

Priyank looked at Tara. She was continuously crying seeing Karan in the worst condition. He hold Karan by his soldier and shouted.

Priyank: Kya bachpana ho rha hay Karan?? Sachai ko accept kro. Accept kro ki.... Tumhari beti zinda nhi hay. Accept it.

Karan broke down in tears.

Karan: Main Preeta ko kyse face karunga bhaiya?? I can't face her. Use main kyse batau yeh sb??

Suddenly Karan's phone started ringing. Tara received the call and put it on speaker.

Tara: Hello.

Caller: Mam aj sham ko Karan Sir ka hamare sath jo consert tha use confirm krne k liye call kiya hay.

Karan (in a trembling voice): Main nhi aa sakta.

Caller: But sir sare tickets sell ho chuke hay ab agar ap nhi aye toh...

Karan (shouted): Maine kaha na main nhi aa sakta.

Caller: Sir...

Priyank: Tara mujhe phone do.

Priyank took the phone from Tara and said...

Priyank: Sorry actually thoda problem ho gaya hay to Karan ayse behave kr rha hay. Ap tension mt lijiye Karan ayega. Thanks.

He hang up the call.

Karan: Please bhaiya main nhi jane wala. Preeta needs me. I can't.

Priyank: Karan try to understand. Tum abhi khud ko sambhal nhi pa rhe ho Preeta ko kyse sambhaloge?? Better yehi hoga ki tum jao. Or tum to 2 din me wapas aa jaoge. Tb tk hum sambhal lenge sb.

Tara: Priyank sahi keh rha hay. Tum jao. Please....

Karan was standing numb. He was unable even to say something.

Priyank: Main Ansh ko call kr deta hoon. Wo Karan k sath jayega.

Priyank call Priyansh. Karan went towards Preeta's ward and saw her through the glass window. She was looking like she has no life in her body.

Screen froze on Karan's crying face.

Precap: Last shot.
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Jhatka lga??? Kitna bada jhatka lga comment box me batao. Haan of course joote chappal side me rakhte huye.

Last shot main jaldi de dungi no chinta. Bye.


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