Avneil ff: falling for u

By sonali0115

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a sweet bubbly girls who fell for a player in college . after few years they come face to face. What do u thi... More

plot
character sketch
chapter 1
promo
chapter 2
important 😐😐😐
promo
save on calender
about abhilash story on insta
Chapter 3
Adiza 15th October 😍😍😍
zain insta post link
writers day 14th September
Happy writers day
chapter 4
request
regarding adi's birthday
pray for her
chapter 5
announcement
chapter 6
for avneil/Adiza and nk fans
chapter 7
info
chapter 8
IMPORTANT
note !!!
chapter 9
HAPPY ADIZA DAY
chapter 10
chapter 11
promo
bye bye see you all soon
chapter 12
chapter 13
new members
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
important announcement
chapter 18
chapter 20
chapter 21
note
review of falling for u
request
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
note
chapter 28
Chapter 29

chapter 19

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By sonali0115

Neela:sorry sameer.. none of us realised that it wasnt u behind that  sehra.. it was meant to be your wedding with avni but...she said not able to  speak while sam moved in to hug her

Sameer:neela aunty please dont say sorry.. none of us knew this was going to happen... we cant change what happened but I will always love avni and that's a promise he said looking at avni and then at neela 

Neela cupped his cheeks and placed a kiss on his forehead

Neela:avni would always say to me that u r lucky to have a friend like her but now I will say  that she is blessed to have a friend like u... god bless u beta

Sameer smiled slightly and gave neela a side hug

Meanwhile in another room shweta was looking at neil angrily who was on his phone.

Shweta: neil... y did u come back... I had sent u to delhi for a reason and also told u to stay away from avni yet u didnt.

Neil:I'm not someone to sit quietly mom and u know that. I get what I want... so I dont believe I did anything wrong... besides u all wanted me to  get married  then here I am a married man with a wife who u all r familiar with . Now please dont waste your energy and time on repeating the same thing he said.

Shweta to herself: if only u was that old neil.. if only u didnt go through all that she thought to herself while looking at neil who wasnt bothered about anything.

Back in avni room.

Neela: bacha.... we will have to tell the guests somehow that u got married to Neil and not sameer.

Sameer:but aunty wont that creates a chaos ...everyone will have a topic to talk about 

Avni:it doesn't make a difference ma.. my life isnt going to be normal again she said looking in space

Sameer:avnii dont lose hope...we will get u out of this mess.. its Neil's turn but soon he will have to give up and let u go... in fact dont go with him now

Avni:if I dont go with him then I know he will go any extent to harm u sam.... until I'm in his house he wont harm u.

Sameer:avni dont worry about me I...but he got cut of by avni

Avni: u r my friend how can I not worry about u...neil Khanna doesnt care about anyones emotion and can go to any extent to hurt anyone...

Neela: I'll go and inform the guest she said walking out

Downstairs prakash, ashish, neela and bebe looked at each other as they knew they had to tell the guest

Ashish took the Mike to get the guests attention

Ashish: I thank u all for coming to attend avni marriage with sameer but due to certain circumstances avni marriage happened with someone else and not sameer

As soon as he said that there was people gossiping with each other

Mrs saxena: what r u saying? How did she get married to someone else? Is this some exchange offer she said

Dayawanti was angry but neela held her hand

Ashish: no.. not at all.. if u was a family member then maybe u would have known the situation and circumstances but u wont understand as u r not one so maybe u will feel this is a joke but it's TRUE avni marriage happened with someone else and none of us knew this was going to happen...and also we dont want to reveal as to how it happened as its personal  he said giving it back to mrs saxena

Prakash came up and took the mike of ashish

Prakash: the person avni has gotten married to is none other than my son neil khanna...and we would really appreciate if u dont doubt or question as to y it happened as ashish said its personal and we still r overcoming this too..thank u for coming..its your choice if u want to leave

The guest looked at each other and started leaving after folding their hands at all the family members while mrs saxena left with a huff

Prakash: I guess we should leave too.

Ashish went up to prakash and stood in front of him

Ashish:prakash avni is our life. We have looked after her with  a lot of love and care. She is my superstar  I know the only reason she is coming there is because for sameer safety... if by any chance she does make any mistake then please forgive her and also please make sure neil doesnt do anything with my daughter he said with his voice cracking in the end with his hands folded.

Dayawanti wiped her tears when her son said this while neela took a deep breath wondering how her daughters life will be...aliya looked at each other thinking what they had expected and what happened

Prakash:u r mad... is that even a thing to say ashish .. we r not going to take avni as a daughter in law but as a daughter to khanna mansion and will give her all the love she deserves. He said and moved ashish folded hands away

Bebe: ashish beta, daya.. we will make sure that neil doesnt do anything with avni and try to make neil understand not to force avni into this marriage and free her. She said looking at daya and squeezing her hand and looked at ashish.

Meanwhile upstairs neil decided to go and see what was happening in avni room

Shweta:neil stop u r not leaving from this room do u get that. She said holding his hand

Neil: I stayed for a  bit but I'm not saying anymore  he said and walked towards the door and opened it

Shweta:neil wait she said loudly  seen him walk out and  followed him

Meanwhile in avni room it was all quiet...sameer was sitting on the couch looking down while avni was on the bed

Sameer looked up to Speak when he looked at avni who looked lost... his heart broke seen her like that becuse right now the girl who was sitting in front of him wasnt his love but someone who looked lost.

He got up, walking towards her and  kneeled in front of her

Sameer: avni he whispered as he squeezed her hands

Avni looked at sameer.

Sameer: u seriously dont have to go to the khanna mansion we will figure out a way

Avni: if I dont go then I dont know what neil will end up doing but I can assure u that it wont be good

Sameer: we shouldn't have thought of getting married as this wouldn't have happened and u wouldn't have been married to neil

Avni:what's done is done sameer we cant change anything now. Sne said letting a long tear fall

Sameers eyes filled up and he cupped avnis cheeks and kissed her forehead and pulled her in for a hug

Sameer:I'm always with u bestie just remeber that he said rubbing her back able to feel her sob

At that time neil entered room and opened the door so hard that it made a sound but before avni and sameer broke their hug he had seen them in that position

Neil:what is going on he said walking ahead while shweta followed behind

Avni:none of your business she said coldly 

Neil:oh yes it is MRS NEIL KHANNA he said glaring at her

Avni: my name is avni...avni metha and u better remeber that.

Neil took few steps forward to get closer to avni when sameer came in between them

Sameer:u can talk from a distance

Neil:I can be as close as i want to my wife understood he said.

Sameer: wife ? Which wife r u even talking about  .. oh wait if u r talking about the girl who I was going to marry then let me tell u she isnt your wife and doesnt consider u as her husband

Avni: dont bother wasting your energy on him sameer let it be.

Neil: accept it not we r legally married and nobody can change that and I can keep on saying this everytime

Shweta:stop it neil

Neil: y shall I? I didnt say anything wrong
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At this time the family came up

Bebe : what is neil doing here ?

Shweta: I tried to stop him but he didnt listen

Neil:y shall i listen ? Coming to see my wife isnt wrong he said

Prakash:u still r acting arrogant Neil dont u feel ashamed thinking what your actions have done to all of us

Neil:what did I do? I just got married to her I didnt create any crime

Neela:u decieved all of us and married my daughter and for me that is a crime she said glaring at neil

Neil:I'm done for the lecture so can we now go he said...he was about to grab avni hand but sameer came in between and also bebe held Neil's wrist

Bebe: we will leave but let avni say bye to her family peacefully she said.

Neil rolled his eyes

All headed downstairs...ali was besides sameer seen his broken state who was watching avni walk away

Avni looked at her family and then hugged them

Avni: dont worry about me I'll be fine she said and hugged them all again .

Bebe:avni is Right and me, sunny and shweta will make sure avni is comfortable and doesnt face any issues she said looking at them and then at neil

Dayawanti:thank u she said and hugged her friend

Sameer didnt come all the way out as he couldnt see avni go away... ali held him by the shoulder while riya held his hand  as all 3 looked at avni

Avni turned around to see them 3 there... riya came running and hugged avni followed by Aman who was telling avni not to go..at this time avni looked at sameer but he smiled with tears and then turned away

Neil smirked looking at sameer.

Avni had sat in the car..neil was about to get in when bebe stopped him and sat in first and then followed by shweta

Prakash:can u sit becuse we haven't got all the time in the world he said getting into the driving seat while Neil was annoyed with his family members behaviour and sat in the passenger seat

As the car moved out daya and neela broke down while ashish hugged them both sobbing silently himself..the whole metha family sat near the main door crying while sameer fell onto the floor while ali held on to his friend seen him like this for the first time all  were broken  that they were not able to do anything to help avni 

20mins later the car reachd outside khanna mansion

All got out of the car except avni

Bebe: puttar come she said softly placing her hand on avni shoulder

Avni looked at bebe and after a while got out of the car when her eyes fell on neil who was smirking...

Following her gaze bebe saw neil smirking and held avnis hand.

Bebe: neil go to your Room she said sternly

Neil: I'll take avni with me

Prakash: no u wont  he said angrily while shweta held his hand to calm him down

Neil:as her husband I have the right to take her

Shweta: no... not at all...for outsiders u may be husband and wife but in this house there wont be such thing and I promise u that

Bebe: go to your room now neil she ordered while Neill gave avni a look and left.

Prakash:avni beta come he said

Avni nodded and all 4 walked to the main door when shweta stopped her

Shweta: beta ek min

While avni and prakash looked confused bebe understood what shweta planned to do

After few mins shweta came with a aarti

Shweta:I wont do any rituals that we do for a daughter in law because this marriage happened against your own will and plus u will be staying here as our daughter not daughter in law she said cupping avni cheeks who smiled slightly

Bebe: come avni I'll show u your room she said

Avni nodded and followed bebe.. few mins later they reached outside the guest room which was 2 rooms away from bebe's

As they entered avni suitcase had also arrived as the staff left it there

Bebe: avni... u must be tired.. change into something comfortable

Avni: jee. She said about to turn when bebe stopped her

Bebe: avni

Avni: jee ?

Bebe: I know the amount of time we will say sorry is less but dont be uncomfortable... what neil did was wrong but becuase of him dont stop living your life.. if u need anything just remeber we r here ok puttar

Avni: jee bebe thank u

Bebe: dont thank me puttar... acha do u want anything to eat or drink..actually wait I'll tell shweta to bring something as due to all this mess u didnt get to eat na till then u change...before avni could reply bebe left

Avni looked around the room and took a deep breath ...she then walked towards the dressing table and looked at her herself in the mirror as her eyes moved on her forehead and then neck.

Avni took the mangalsutra off and let it fall aimlessly on the dressing table.

Images of the way Neil got married to her flashed in front of her eyes...suddenly she came back to reality when she heard the door open and through the mirror she saw who it was making her angry instantly

Neil: uff I was waiting for u in OUR room and u r here he said walking towards her with a smirk

Avni: there is never going to be a OUR between us.. it's only got to be yours and mine we r two separate individuals and will continue to keep it that way she said taking few steps back seen neil getting close to her

All of a sudden her back hit against the wall and in few secs he caged her against the wall and him

Neil:all this happened but u still have been chanting the same thing right... everything is going the way I want so y r u trying to make it your way mrs neil khanna

Avni looked angrily at neil and pushed him away from her making him  stumble backward

Neil controlled his balance and turned to look at avni

neil: come on avni how long will u play this  keep the distance game

Avni:  not everything is a game neil khanna by marrying me dont think that u have bought me..

Neil: is that so.. let's see how long u will be able stay away from me.

Avni: u dont worry about that.. I'll be happy to stay away from u... if I'm in this house then its because of sam and I'm happy about one thing and that is at least u had the decenency to free sam but the sad thing is that u saw your own intrest in this too

Neil: avni avni avni.. what's mine will always be mine...

Avni: keep dreaming neil khanna.. keep dreaming she said looking at him

Neil: well whatever I dream of always comes true becuse I get it

Avni: well guess what keep trying because this time u wont get anything now leave.

Neil: telling me to leave from my own house

Avni: not at all although I do wish u leave my life completely but for now leave this room becuase I have no desires to have any interaction with u 

Shweta: what r u doing over here neil

Neil looked at his mom and then at avni and left from there without answering while bebe who joined shweta saw neil leaving avni room

Bebe:avni u didnt change beta

Avni: woh I was about to but neil came she said

Shweta: did he try to...she left her sentence hanging

Avni:no no... I wont fall weak this time...I'm in this house as I know if I hadn't come neil would harm sam in a way and I cant afford that at any cost ...shweta and bebe smiled

Shweta:i pray that yours  and sameer bond always stay like this..the way u r staying here for his sake is showing how important he is to u...acha go and change and eat this she said showing a bowl of chole and paratha

Avni:aunty u didnt have to make this

Shweta:arien I didnt make it prakash ji actually went to get all of us some food she said

Bebe: chalo go and change and then eat

Avni: I dont actually feel like eating

Shweta: well u will have to ok u have no choice 

Avni:, have u all eaten ?

Shweta: noo we will in a bit

Avni: um is it ok if I eat with u all

Bebe: of course puttar is that even a thing to say ...shweta take avni's plate downstairs and I'll bring her

Shweta:ji bebe

Precrap: shweta: our neil was never like this bebe... he wasnt she said crying while bebe hugged shweta controlling her own tears

Shweta:Its all my fault I got so busy in my life that i didnt see what my son was going through and due to that he completely changed

Bebe:its not your fault puttar it's our fault too...  and I am extremely sorry for whatever happened she said

Phew done and dusted been long I know but I actually dont feel good writing a chap until I'm satisfied or feel that energy to write as I dont want to write any random thing and writee it so thank u for baring with me

Thanks to all those previous comments will he waiting for comments and votes

Lots of love
Sonali

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